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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【技】【法】【指】【导】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【中】【时】【常】【发】【生】【着】【各】【种】【各】【样】【的】【事】【,】【我】【们】【对】【每】【件】【事】【都】【有】【自】【己】【不】【同】【的】【态】【度】【和】【看】【法】【,】【我】【们】【作】【文】【中】【如】【能】【针】【对】【某】【一】【件】【事】【(】【或】【某】【个】【问】【题】【、】【某】【种】【现】【象】【)】【发】【表】【自】【己】【的】【看】【法】【,】【把】【它】【写】【入】【文】【章】【,】【就】【属】【于】【一】【事】【一】【议】【的】【议】【论】【文】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【在】【写】【一】【事】【一】【议】【的】【议】【论】【文】【时】【可】【从】【如】【下】【方】【面】【入】【手】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【分】【析】【材】【料】【,】【提】【炼】【观】【点】【。】【因】【为】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【属】【于】【给】【材】【料】【作】【文】【,】【所】【以】【写】【好】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【的】【第】【一】【步】【就】【是】【认】【真】【阅】【读】【材】【料】【,】【然】【后】【抓】【住】【关】【键】【段】【落】【、】【句】【子】【或】【词】【语】【认】【真】【分】【析】【,】【归】【纳】【出】【材】【料】【的】【中】【心】【。】【概】【括】【出】【材】【料】【的】【中】【心】【,】【只】【能】【算】【读】【懂】【了】【材】【料】【,】【要】【发】【表】【议】【论】【还】【需】【要】【在】【读】【懂】【的】【基】【础】【上】【推】【进】【一】【步】【,】【即】【针】【对】【材】【料】【的】【全】【部】【或】【某】【一】【方】【面】【的】【内】【容】【,】【提】【出】【自】【己】【的】【看】【法】【,】【这】【个】【看】【法】【就】【是】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【的】【论】【点】【。】【一】【个】【材】【料】【有】【时】【可】【以】【提】【炼】【出】【许】【多】【观】【点】【。】【同】【样】【一】【个】【材】【料】【,】【由】【于】【提】【炼】【的】【观】【点】【不】【同】【,】【便】【会】【出】【现】【论】【点】【不】【同】【的】【文】【章】【,】【因】【此】【在】【提】【炼】【观】【点】【时】【,】【应】【选】【择】【最】【佳】【角】【度】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【拟】【好】【题】【目】【,】【力】【求】【醒】【目】【。】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【的】【作】【文】【一】【般】【都】【是】【没】【有】【题】【目】【的】【,】【需】【要】【我】【们】【自】【己】【来】【拟】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【拟】【题】【时】【要】【注】【意】【紧】【扣】【论】【题】【,】【力】【求】【醒】【目】【。】【要】【尽】【量】【防】【止】【拟】【题】【的】【平】【泛】【,】【人】【云】【亦】【云】【;】【也】【要】【尽】【量】【防】【止】【拟】【题】【大】【而】【空】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【写】【好】【开】【头】【,】【简】【明】【扼】【要】【。】【人】【们】【常】【说】【万】【事】【开】【头】【难】【,】【然】【而】【开】【头】【又】【是】【关】【键】【。】【写】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【的】【开】【头】【,】【必】【须】【紧】【紧】【扣】【住】【所】【提】【供】【的】【材】【料】【内】【容】【,】【文】【章】【的】【开】【头】【首】【先】【要】【概】【述】【材】【料】【,】【然】【后】【根】【据】【它】【的】【意】【义】【或】【教】【训】【提】【出】【自】【己】【的】【观】【点】【,】【即】【文】【章】【的】【论】【点】【。】【这】【部】【分】【用】【的】【笔】【墨】【不】【宜】【太】【多】【,】【否】【则】【喧】【宾】【夺】【主】【。】【初】【学】【写】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【的】【学】【生】【常】【犯】【的】【毛】【病】【有】【两】【个】【:】【一】【是】【先】【将】【材】【料】【从】【头】【到】【尾】【抄】【一】【遍】【,】【这】【是】【要】【求】【不】【允】【许】【的】【;】【二】【是】【在】【概】【述】【原】【材】【料】【时】【,】【抓】【不】【住】【重】【点】【,】【抓】【不】【住】【关】【键】【的】【语】【句】【,】【意】【思】【表】【达】【不】【清】【。】【以】【上】【两】【个】【毛】【病】【均】【反】【映】【出】【学】【生】【的】【综】【合】【概】【括】【能】【力】【及】【表】【达】【能】【力】【较】【差】【。】【因】【此】【,】【在】【概】【述】【时】【一】【定】【要】【抓】【住】【重】【点】【和】【关】【键】【语】【句】【,】【力】【求】【简】【明】【扼】【要】【。】【这】【才】【有】【利】【于】【观】【点】【的】【提】【炼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【紧】【扣】【材】【料】【,】【合】【理】【论】【证】【。】【在】【论】【证】【中】【,】【要】【紧】【紧】【扣】【住】【这】【个】【材】【料】【阐】【明】【观】【点】【,】【议】【论】【的】【内】【容】【要】【具】【体】【、】【集】【中】【。】【可】【以】【联】【系】【现】【实】【将】【议】【论】【向】【深】【广】【展】【开】【,】【但】【不】【要】【脱】【离】【原】【材】【料】【空】【发】【议】【论】【或】【使】【论】【题】【转】【移】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【病】【文】【展】【示】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【看】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【刘】【 】【佳】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【我】【们】【仔】【细】【观】【察】【我】【们】【身】【边】【的】【同】【学】【,】【会】【发】【现】【在】【我】【们】【青】【少】【年】【学】【生】【中】【出】【现】【了】【高】【消】【费】【的】【现】【象】【,】【这】【些】【人】【出】【门】【打】【的】【士】【,】【穿】【名】【牌】【,】【吃】【的】【要】【贵】【,】【用】【的】【要】【高】【级】【,】【他】【们】【只】【讲】【铺】【张】【浪】【费】【,】【不】【注】【意】【勤】【俭】【节】【约】【。】【中】【学】【生】【们】【在】【吃】【、】【穿】【、】【娱】【乐】【方】【面】【的】【消】【费】【要】【求】【很】【多】【,】【比】【成】【人】【的】【支】【出】【毫】【不】【逊】【色】【,】【且】【呈】【快】【速】【增】【长】【的】【态】【势】【。】【(】【开】【头】【摆】【现】【象】【,】【引】【出】【下】【文】【的】【写】【作】【,】【这】【一】【点】【很】【好】【。】【)】【我】【认】【为】【:】【这】【是】【极】【不】【适】【宜】【的】【。】【(】【点】【出】【自】【己】【对】【这】【类】【事】【的】【看】【法】【。】【下】【文】【也】【应】【着】【重】【突】【出】【“】【极】【不】【适】【宜】【的】【”】【的】【原】【因】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【纵】【观】【现】【在】【我】【们】【身】【边】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【情】【况】【,】【以】【以】【下】【现】【象】【最】【为】【突】【出】【。】【(】【下】【面】【又】【是】【摆】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【的】【现】【象】【,】【这】【里】【与】【第】【一】【段】【的】【内】【容】【有】【明】【显】【的】【重】【复】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【是】【很】【多】【学】【生】【乐】【于】【搭】【伴】【用】【餐】【,】【大】【吃】【大】【喝】【并】【且】【零】【食】【不】【离】【嘴】【。】【很】【多】【中】【学】【生】【喜】【欢】【几】【个】【同】【学】【吆】【五】【喝】【六】【地】【一】【起】【吃】【饭】【,】【他】【们】【觉】【得】【热】【闹】【又】【时】【尚】【;】【有】【些】【中】【学】【生】【效】【仿】【成】【年】【人】【喝】【着】【啤】【酒】【和】【高】【档】【饮】【料】【,】【边】【喝】【边】【侃】【。】【喜】【欢】【吃】【零】【食】【是】【当】【今】【中】【小】【学】【生】【的】【又】【一】【特】【点】【,】【他】【们】【喜】【欢】【吃】【一】【些】【流】【行】【的】【新】【、】【奇】【食】【品】【,】【这】【些】【食】【品】【其】【实】【并】【无】【营】【养】【,】【是】【典】【型】【的】【“】【垃】【圾】【”】【食】【品】【,】【但】【因】【为】【广】【告】【打】【得】【好】【,】【学】【生】【们】【就】【争】【先】【恐】【后】【的】【购】【买】【。】【(】【这】【些】【现】【象】【只】【需】【在】【开】【头】【点】【出】【即】【可】【,】【目】【的】【在】【于】【引】【出】【事】【例】【,】【而】【应】【把】【重】【点】【放】【在】【我】【们】【对】【这】【事】【的】【看】【法】【与】【态】【度】【上】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【是】【一】【些】【学】【生】【为】【了】【摆】【阔】【,】【现】【代】【通】【信】【工】【具】【随】【身】【带】【。】【现】【今】【中】【学】【生】【移】【动】【通】【信】【工】【具】【使】【用】【率】【逐】【年】【增】【高】【,】【尽】【管】【大】【多】【数】【学】【校】【为】【了】【不】【影】【响】【学】【生】【的】【上】【课】【质】【量】【,】【不】【允】【许】【学】【生】【带】【通】【信】【工】【具】【到】【学】【校】【,】【但】【很】【多】【学】【生】【还】【是】【悄】【悄】【地】【怀】【揣】【手】【机】【或】【小】【灵】【通】【入】【校】【。】【移】【动】【通】【信】【工】【具】【成】【为】【当】【今】【中】【学】【生】【摆】【阔】【、】【显】【示】【自】【己】【的】【一】【个】【重】【要】【标】【志】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【是】【一】【些】【学】【生】【为】【了】【追】【求】【时】【髦】【,】【不】【顾】【家】【庭】【的】【实】【际】【情】【况】【而】【崇】【尚】【品】【牌】【。】【他】【们】【追】【求】【时】【尚】【,】【崇】【尚】【时】【髦】【,】【喜】【欢】【穿】【品】【牌】【服】【装】【和】【鞋】【子】【是】【现】【在】【中】【学】【生】【的】【又】【一】【特】【点】【,】【有】【些】【学】【生】【甚】【至】【不】【是】【品】【牌】【不】【上】【身】【。】【相】【信】【如】【果】【不】【是】【学】【校】【要】【求】【统】【一】【穿】【校】【服】【,】【他】【们】【的】【衣】【着】【消】【费】【还】【会】【更】【高】【,】【支】【出】【会】【更】【大】【。】【显】【而】【易】【见】【,】【部】【分】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【的】【出】【发】【点】【在】【于】【仿】【效】【富】【裕】【人】【群】【的】【生】【活】【,】【在】【他】【们】【看】【来】【,】【是】【否】【拥】【有】【某】【些】【物】【品】【成】【为】【他】【们】【显】【示】【自】【己】【的】【标】【志】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【在】【目】【前】【是】【不】【合】【适】【的】【,】【(】【为】【什】【么】【不】【合】【适】【呢】【?】【没】【有】【恰】【当】【的】【论】【据】【来】【证】【明】【,】【这】【样】【的】【观】【点】【也】【就】【没】【有】【说】【服】【力】【。】【)】【我】【们】【应】【杜】【绝】【这】【种】【现】【象】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【评】【改】【指】【津】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【能】【从】【现】【在】【中】【学】【生】【生】【活】【中】【的】【一】【些】【现】【象】【引】【入】【问】【题】【,】【这】【一】【点】【很】【好】【。】【但】【是】【遗】【憾】【的】【是】【作】【者】【并】【没】【有】【按】【第】【一】【段】【的】【思】【路】【来】【行】【文】【,】【而】【是】【中】【途】【改】【道】【了】【。】【以】【后】【的】【三】【、】【四】【、】【五】【段】【大】【写】【特】【写】【目】【前】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【的】【种】【种】【表】【现】【,】【这】【显】【然】【是】【“】【叙】【”】【而】【不】【是】【“】【议】【”】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【建】【议】【在】【升】【格】【本】【文】【时】【,】【多】【写】【写】【自】【己】【对】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【这】【种】【现】【象】【的】【看】【法】【和】【认】【识】【,】【既】【然】【作】【者】【认】【为】【这】【是】【不】【合】【时】【宜】【的】【,】【就】【要】【说】【说】【为】【什】【么】【不】【合】【时】【宜】【,】【要】【注】【意】【用】【合】【理】【的】【事】【例】【与】【道】【理】【来】【印】【证】【自】【己】【的】【观】【点】【,】【让】【别】【的】【同】【学】【能】【够】【接】【受】【你】【的】【观】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【升】【格】【佳】【作】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【看】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【刘】【 】【佳】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【我】【们】【仔】【细】【观】【察】【我】【们】【身】【边】【的】【同】【学】【,】【会】【发】【现】【在】【我】【们】【青】【少】【年】【学】【生】【中】【出】【现】【了】【高】【消】【费】【的】【现】【象】【,】【这】【些】【人】【出】【门】【打】【的】【士】【,】【穿】【名】【牌】【,】【吃】【的】【要】【贵】【,】【用】【的】【要】【高】【级】【,】【他】【们】【只】【讲】【铺】【张】【浪】【费】【,】【不】【注】【意】【勤】【俭】【节】【约】【。】【我】【认】【为】【:】【这】【是】【极】【不】【适】【宜】【的】【。】【(】【由】【现】【象】【入】【手】【,】【进】【而】【提】【出】【论】【点】【,】【观】【点】【鲜】【明】【,】【引】【人】【思】【考】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【高】【消】【费】【极】【不】【适】【宜】【,】【首】【先】【它】【不】【符】【合】【我】【们】【如】【今】【的】【国】【情】【。】【现】【在】【,】【我】【们】【国】【家】【的】【经】【济】【虽】【然】【有】【了】【很】【大】【的】【发】【展】【,】【人】【民】【生】【活】【也】【有】【所】【改】【善】【。】【但】【是】【,】【国】【家】【经】【济】【还】【不】【发】【达】【,】【人】【民】【生】【活】【水】【平】【还】【比】【较】【低】【,】【一】【些】【边】【远】【地】【区】【的】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【没】【钱】【上】【学】【。】【在】【这】【种】【情】【况】【下】【,】【高】【消】【费】【是】【行】【不】【通】【的】【。】【(】【先】【从】【主】【要】【的】【方】【面】【来】【分】【析】【,】【说】【理】【透】【彻】【,】【让】【人】【信】【服】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【不】【提】【倡】【高】【消】【费】【,】【是】【因】【为】【高】【消】【费】【还】【是】【一】【种】【腐】【蚀】【剂】【。】【它】【使】【青】【少】【年】【挥】【霍】【别】【人】【的】【劳】【动】【果】【实】【,】【把】【自】【己】【的】【幸】【福】【建】【立】【在】【他】【人】【辛】【勤】【劳】【动】【的】【基】【础】【上】【。】【有】【些】【青】【少】【年】【为】【了】【要】【一】【双】【“】【耐】【克】【”】【苦】【求】【爹】【妈】【,】【这】【对】【那】【些】【拿】【工】【资】【的】【家】【长】【来】【说】【,】【就】【变】【成】【了】【一】【个】【沉】【重】【的】【负】【担】【。】【我】【们】【在】【学】【校】【中】【上】【课】【是】【不】【创】【造】【价】【值】【的】【。】【这】【就】【要】【求】【我】【们】【,】【要】【珍】【惜】【别】【人】【为】【我】【们】【提】【供】【的】【各】【种】【条】【件】【。】【我】【们】【青】【少】【年】【正】【处】【于】【人】【生】【最】【适】【宜】【播】【种】【理】【想】【的】【时】【候】【,】【切】【莫】【沉】【醉】【于】【追】【求】【物】【质】【享】【受】【,】【折】【断】【自】【己】【理】【想】【的】【翅】【膀】【。】【(】【从】【青】【少】【年】【自】【身】【上】【来】【分】【析】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【很】【有】【针】【对】【性】【,】【很】【能】【引】【起】【青】【少】【年】【学】【生】【的】【深】【思】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【香】【港】【的】【“】【船】【王】【”】【包】【玉】【刚】【家】【财】【万】【贯】【,】【却】【依】【然】【以】【俭】【治】【家】【,】【每】【天】【仍】【坐】【公】【共】【汽】【车】【上】【下】【班】【。】【这】【似】【乎】【有】【些】【不】【可】【思】【议】【:】【这】【样】【一】【个】【亿】【万】【富】【翁】【,】【买】【一】【辆】【小】【汽】【车】【又】【算】【什】【么】【,】【何】【至】【于】【“】【抠】【门】【儿】【”】【到】【这】【个】【地】【步】【?】【其】【实】【他】【并】【不】【是】【吝】【惜】【那】【几】【个】【钱】【,】【而】【是】【时】【时】【告】【诫】【自】【己】【切】【莫】【贪】【图】【享】【受】【,】【追】【求】【奢】【侈】【生】【活】【。】【方】【志】【敏】【烈】【士】【有】【这】【样】【一】【句】【话】【:】【“】【清】【贫】【,】【洁】【白】【朴】【素】【的】【生】【活】【,】【正】【是】【我】【们】【革】【命】【者】【能】【够】【战】【胜】【许】【多】【困】【难】【的】【地】【方】【。】【”】【由】【此】【可】【见】【,】【事】【业】【离】【不】【开】【俭】【朴】【。】【(】【运】【用】【事】【实】【与】【道】【理】【论】【据】【相】【结】【合】【的】【方】【式】【,】【有】【力】【地】【证】【明】【了】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【年】【的】【“】【两】【会】【”】【已】【给】【我】【们】【做】【出】【了】【很】【好】【的】【榜】【样】【,】【会】【场】【全】【部】【采】【用】【节】【能】【光】【源】【,】【减】【少】【照】【明】【用】【电】【。】【我】【们】【从】【这】【处】【细】【节】【中】【不】【难】【体】【会】【到】【,】【我】【们】【个】【人】【的】【事】【业】【想】【有】【所】【成】【就】【,】【我】【们】【的】【国】【家】【想】【要】【强】【大】【,】【我】【们】【的】【社】【会】【想】【要】【健】【康】【发】【展】【,】【就】【必】【须】【提】【倡】【俭】【朴】【。】【尤】【其】【是】【中】【学】【生】【,】【应】【该】【反】【对】【高】【消】【费】【。】【(】【既】【总】【结】【上】【文】【,】【又】【回】【应】【开】【篇】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【结】【构】【圆】【合】【,】【主】【题】【鲜】【明】【突】【出】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【后】【的】【作】【文】【较】【符】【合】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【的】【写】【法】【,】【文】【章】【在】【开】【头】【首】【先】【引】【出】【了】【要】【写】【的】【“】【事】【”】【,】【但】【这】【里】【的】【“】【事】【”】【不】【是】【某】【一】【具】【体】【的】【事】【,】【而】【是】【一】【种】【现】【象】【—】【—】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【的】【现】【象】【。】【在】【第】【一】【段】【中】【作】【者】【简】【明】【扼】【要】【的】【叙】【述】【了】【“】【事】【”】【,】【然】【后】【引】【出】【对】【事】【的】【“】【议】【”】【,】【认】【为】【这】【是】【极】【不】【适】【宜】【的】【。】【接】【下】【来】【重】【点】【论】【述】【了】【 】【“】【不】【适】【宜】【”】【的】【理】【由】【:】【一】【是】【高】【消】【费】【不】【符】【合】【国】【情】【,】【二】【是】【高】【消】【费】【是】【腐】【蚀】【剂】【,】【事】【业】【成】【功】【离】【不】【开】【俭】【朴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【纵】【观】【升】【格】【后】【的】【文】【章】【,】【作】【者】【叙】【事】【简】【明】【扼】【要】【,】【议】【论】【恰】【到】【好】【处】【,】【就】【事】【论】【理】【、】【理】【从】【事】【发】【,】【而】【且】【在】【提】【出】【观】【点】【后】【能】【扣】【住】【论】【点】【展】【开】【议】【论】【,】【论】【据】【恰】【当】【、】【说】【服】【力】【强】【,】【较】【符】【合】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【作】【文】【的】【写】【法】【。】【这】【一】【点】【是】【值】【得】【我】【们】【学】【习】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【近】【有】【同】【学】【问】【我】【,】【有】【什】【么】【技】【巧】【能】【使】【我】【考】【场】【作】【文】【分】【数】【提】【高】【吗】【?】【我】【想】【,】【作】【文】【成】【绩】【好】【,】【是】【由】【多】【种】【因】【素】【决】【定】【的】【。】【作】【为】【考】【场】【作】【文】【,】【都】【是】【命】【题】【作】【文】【。】【不】【论】【哪】【种】【命】【题】【方】【式】【(】【直】【接】【命】【题】【、】【半】【命】【题】【、】【话】【题】【作】【文】【、】【给】【材】【料】【—】【—】【文】【字】【材】【料】【或】【图】【表】【材】【料】【)】【,】【都】【要】【求】【:】【1】【.】【切】【题】【;】【2】【.】【内】【容】【充】【实】【,】【言】【之】【有】【物】【,】【感】【情】【健】【康】【;】【3】【.】【结】【构】【合】【理】【,】【层】【次】【分】【明】【;】【4】【.】【语】【言】【通】【顺】【,】【生】【动】【,】【有】【文】【采】【更】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【做】【到】【这】【四】【条】【,】【首】【先】【要】【在】【平】【时】【积】【累】【作】【文】【材】【料】【,】【注】【重】【实】【践】【认】【真】【观】【察】【,】【广】【泛】【阅】【读】【。】【第】【二】【,】【要】【有】【一】【定】【的】【认】【识】【能】【力】【,】【善】【于】【联】【想】【和】【想】【象】【,】【能】【体】【会】【分】【析】【一】【些】【人】【或】【事】【的】【意】【义】【。】【第】【三】【,】【要】【有】【一】【定】【的】【表】【达】【能】【力】【,】【也】【可】【以】【说】【,】【要】【有】【一】【定】【的】【写】【作】【技】【巧】【。】【所】【以】【说】【,】【技】【巧】【只】【是】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【成】【功】【的】【因】【素】【之】【一】【。】【单】【纯】【追】【求】【写】【作】【技】【巧】【是】【舍】【本】【逐】【末】【的】【,】【或】【说】【是】【本】【末】【倒】【置】【的】【。】【但】【这】【并】【不】【否】【认】【掌】【握】【一】【些】【作】【文】【技】【巧】【也】【有】【十】【分】【重】【要】【的】【作】【用】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【下】【边】【介】【绍】【几】【种】【易】【于】【掌】【握】【的】【方】【法】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【之】【一】【—】【—】【写】【“】【题】【记】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【什】【么】【叫】【“】【题】【记】【”】【?】【写】【在】【书】【的】【正】【文】【前】【或】【文】【章】【题】【目】【下】【面】【的】【文】【字】【,】【多】【为】【扼】【要】【说】【明】【著】【作】【的】【内】【容】【或】【主】【旨】【,】【有】【的】【只】【引】【用】【名】【人】【名】【言】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【举】【例】【 】【作】【文】【题】【目】【 】【我】【是】【他】【的】【眼】【睛】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【授】【人】【玫】【瑰】【,】【手】【有】【余】【香】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【写】【作】【者】【每】【天】【上】【学】【时】【领】【一】【位】【双】【眼】【失】【明】【的】【叔】【叔】【过】【马】【路】【,】【风】【雨】【不】【误】【,】【坚】【持】【了】【三】【年】【,】【他】【体】【会】【到】【帮】【助】【别】【人】【的】【快】【乐】【。】【“】【题】【记】【”】【的】【运】【用】【,】【突】【出】【了】【作】【者】【的】【感】【受】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【之】【二】【—】【—】【运】【用】【小】【标】【题】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【把】【文】【中】【写】【到】【的】【几】【件】【事】【分】【别】【加】【上】【小】【标】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【举】【例】【作】【文】【题】【目】【中】【学】【生】【的】【一】【天】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【把】【初】【三】【学】【生】【一】【天】【的】【紧】【张】【而】【又】【充】【实】【的】【生】【活】【比】【喻】【为】【用】【不】【同】【的】【节】【奏】【演】【奏】【一】【首】【悠】【长】【的】【乐】【曲】【,】【然】【后】【列】【出】【5】【个】【小】【标】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【标】【题】【1】【:】【 】【忙】【碌】【的】【清】【晨】【—】【—】【一】【天】【中】【的】【“】【快】【板】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【标】【题】【2】【 】【:】【上】【午】【—】【—】【进】【行】【曲】【速】【度】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【标】【题】【3】【:】【 】【中】【午】【—】【—】【一】【天】【中】【的】【“】【慢】【板】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【标】【题】【4】【 】【:】【下】【午】【—】【—】【一】【天】【中】【的】【“】【行】【板】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【标】【题】【5】【 】【:】【晚】【上】【—】【—】【最】【后】【的】【小】【夜】【曲】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【读】【者】【读】【来】【,】【顺】【畅】【而】【有】【重】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【之】【三】【—】【—】【“】【镜】【头】【法】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【所】【谓】【“】【镜】【头】【法】【”】【,】【就】【是】【把】【所】【写】【的】【几】【件】【事】【像】【影】【视】【中】【的】【分】【镜】【头】【一】【样】【分】【写】【出】【来】【 】【只】【不】【过】【把】【小】【标】【题】【换】【成】【“】【镜】【头】【一】【”】【“】【镜】【头】【二】【”】【罢】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【举】【例】【作】【文】【题】【目】【我】【在】【中】【考】【的】【前】【一】【天】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【镜】【头】【一】【—】【—】【清】【晨】【,】【流】【鼻】【血】【了】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【镜】【头】【二】【—】【—】【上】【午】【,】【在】【医】【院】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【镜】【头】【三】【—】【—】【晚】【上】【,】【老】【师】【电】【话】【中】【的】【安】【慰】【、】【叮】【咛】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【镜】【头】【四】【—】【—】【满】【怀】【信】【心】【入】【睡】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【分】【镜】【头】【写】【,】【重】【点】【突】【出】【,】【避】【免】【了】【流】【水】【账】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【之】【四】【—】【—】【运】【用】【“】【首】【括】【句】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【首】【括】【句】【”】【就】【是】【在】【每】【一】【段】【的】【第】【一】【句】【概】【括】【写】【出】【这】【一】【段】【的】【内】【容】【,】【然】【后】【围】【绕】【着】【这】【句】【话】【展】【开】【来】【写】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【举】【例】【作】【文】【题】【目】【不】【称】【职】【的】【爸】【爸】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【1】【段】【:】【爸】【爸】【是】【个】【医】【生】【;】【在】【家】【,】【是】【个】【不】【称】【职】【的】【爸】【爸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【2】【段】【:】【爸】【爸】【好】【忙】【呀】【。】【(】【接】【写】【爸】【爸】【忙】【碌】【的】【几】【件】【具】【体】【事】【。】【)】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【3】【段】【:】【爸】【爸】【好】【苦】【呀】【。】【(】【接】【写】【爸】【爸】【刻】【苦】【读】【书】【学】【习】【的】【几】【件】【事】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【4】【段】【:】【爸】【爸】【常】【常】【忘】【了】【吃】【晚】【饭】【。】【(】【接】【写】【因】【忘】【吃】【或】【不】【按】【时】【吃】【晚】【饭】【而】【得】【了】【胃】【病】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【5】【段】【:】【总】【结】【全】【文】【,】【引】【用】【爸】【爸】【“】【为】【了】【病】【人】【,】【为】【了】【医】【学】【事】【业】【我】【只】【能】【如】【此】【”】【的】【话】【,】【写】【出】【爸】【爸】【的】【精】【神】【境】【界】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【的】【题】【目】【似】【贬】【实】【褒】【。】【除】【首】【尾】【两】【段】【外】【,】【中】【间】【3】【个】【段】【落】【都】【用】【首】【括】【句】【,】【内】【容】【集】【中】【,】【从】【不】【同】【侧】【面】【赞】【扬】【了】【爸】【爸】【的】【好】【品】【德】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【之】【五】【—】【—】【运】【用】【排】【比】【句】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【排】【比】【”】【是】【一】【种】【修】【辞】【方】【法】【,】【至】【少】【要】【有】【三】【句】【结】【构】【相】【似】【语】【意】【相】【关】【的】【句】【子】【排】【列】【在】【一】【起】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【举】【例】【作】【文】【题】【目】【为】【实】【现】【理】【想】【作】【准】【备】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【也】【许】【你】【将】【来】【成】【为】【大】【名】【鼎】【鼎】【的】【科】【学】【家】【,】【也】【许】【你】【将】【来】【成】【为】【令】【人】【尊】【敬】【的】【作】【家】【,】【也】【许】【你】【将】【来】【只】【是】【一】【名】【普】【普】【通】【通】【的】【技】【术】【工】【人】【:】【总】【而】【言】【之】【,】【现】【在】【都】【必】【须】【努】【力】【学】【习】【,】【打】【好】【各】【方】【面】【基】【础】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【运】【用】【排】【比】【句】【铺】【写】【了】【同】【学】【们】【将】【来】【的】【职】【业】【,】【句】【式】【大】【体】【整】【齐】【,】【富】【有】【气】【势】【和】【文】【采】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【之】【六】【—】【—】【运】【用】【抒】【情】【和】【议】【论】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【文】【章】【中】【抒】【情】【和】【议】【论】【这】【两】【种】【表】【达】【方】【式】【常】【常】【是】【结】【合】【在】【一】【起】【的】【,】【它】【能】【表】【达】【强】【烈】【的】【感】【情】【并】【突】【出】【深】【化】【中】【心】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【举】【例】【作】【文】【题】【目】【秋】【天】【的】【小】【果】【园】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【这】【是】【一】【个】【小】【小】【的】【果】【树】【园】【,】【地】【方】【不】【大】【,】【树】【的】【品】【种】【可】【真】【不】【少】【。】【柿】【子】【树】【叶】【红】【得】【像】【燃】【烧】【的】【火】【焰】【,】【一】【个】【个】【圆】【溜】【溜】【的】【柿】【子】【小】【灯】【笼】【似】【的】【;】【山】【楂】【树】【上】【,】【这】【一】【嘟】【噜】【,】【那】【儿】【一】【串】【,】【缀】【在】【枝】【上】【,】【玛】【瑙】【一】【般】【;】【最】【逗】【人】【的】【是】【石】【榴】【,】【一】【个】【个】【笑】【得】【咧】【开】【了】【小】【嘴】【…】【…】【)】【啊】【,】【这】【是】【斑】【斓】【的】【秋】【天】【,】【这】【是】【丰】【收】【的】【秋】【天】【!】【我】【赞】【美】【春】【天】【的】【烂】【漫】【,】【更】【赞】【美】【秋】【天】【的】【奉】【献】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【文】【的】【最】【后】【几】【句】【,】【是】【在】【景】【物】【描】【写】【的】【基】【础】【上】【的】【抒】【情】【和】【议】【论】【,】【抒】【发】【了】【热】【爱】【秋】【天】【、】【赞】【美】【秋】【天】【的】【强】【烈】【感】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【之】【七】【—】【—】【把】【叙】【述】【变】【成】【对】【话】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【叙】【述】【和】【对】【话】【描】【写】【各】【有】【各】【的】【用】【途】【。】【一】【般】【说】【,】【对】【话】【显】【得】【更】【生】【动】【些】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【举】【例】【作】【文】【题】【目】【我】【的】【妈】【妈】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【稿】【用】【叙】【述】【:】【妈】【妈】【叫】【弟】【弟】【买】【4】【个】【油】【饼】【,】【售】【货】【员】【忙】【中】【出】【错】【,】【多】【给】【了】【两】【个】【,】【弟】【弟】【为】【占】【了】【便】【宜】【而】【高】【兴】【。】【妈】【妈】【教】【育】【弟】【弟】【补】【交】【了】【两】【个】【油】【饼】【的】【钱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【改】【后】【作】【文】【主】【要】【运】【用】【对】【话】【。】【(】【片】【段】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【我】【回】【来】【啦】【。】【”】【弟】【弟】【兴】【冲】【冲】【地】【走】【进】【家】【门】【。】【大】【家】【坐】【下】【来】【吃】【早】【点】【。】【“】【怎】【么】【多】【了】【两】【个】【?】【”】【妈】【妈】【疑】【惑】【地】【问】【。】【“】【买】【油】【饼】【的】【人】【多】【,】【卖】【油】【饼】【的】【阿】【姨】【太】【忙】【,】【多】【给】【的】【。】【”】【看】【到】【妈】【妈】【眼】【里】【有】【责】【备】【之】【意】【,】【弟】【弟】【嗫】【嚅】【着】【说】【:】【“】【是】【阿】【姨】【给】【的】【,】【反】【正】【就】【两】【个】【,】【有】【什】【么】【的】【。】【”】【弟】【弟】【辩】【解】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【皱】【了】【皱】【眉】【头】【,】【“】【小】【东】【(】【弟】【弟】【的】【小】【名】【)】【,】【你】【真】【觉】【得】【没】【什】【么】【吗】【?】【”】【弟】【弟】【撇】【了】【撇】【嘴】【,】【没】【有】【说】【话】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【小】【东】【,】【你】【已】【经】【是】【个】【小】【学】【生】【了】【,】【是】【个】【少】【先】【队】【员】【,】【白】【占】【人】【家】【的】【便】【宜】【对】【吗】【?】【东】【西】【虽】【少】【,】【可】【养】【成】【好】【品】【德】【重】【要】【啊】【!】【你】【不】【是】【正】【争】【取】【做】【优】【秀】【少】【先】【队】【员】【吗】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【妈】【,】【我】【明】【白】【了】【,】【我】【把】【两】【个】【油】【饼】【给】【阿】【姨】【送】【回】【去】【。】【”】【说】【着】【,】【小】【东】【就】【要】【往】【外】【跑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【吃】【的】【东】【西】【不】【能】【往】【回】【送】【,】【再】【补】【交】【两】【个】【油】【饼】【的】【钱】【就】【行】【了】【。】【”】【妈】【妈】【边】【说】【边】【把】【钱】【递】【到】【小】【东】【手】【里】【。】【小】【东】【高】【兴】【地】【飞】【跑】【向】【饭】【馆】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【主】【要】【用】【对】【话】【描】【写】【推】【动】【情】【节】【发】【展】【,】【比】【平】【铺】【直】【叙】【要】【生】【动】【具】【体】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【之】【八】【—】【—】【改】【变】【说】【法】【使】【语】【言】【生】【动】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【个】【意】【思】【,】【有】【多】【种】【不】【同】【的】【说】【法】【,】【其】【中】【形】【象】【地】【说】【法】【会】【给】【人】【留】【有】【较】【深】【刻】【的】【印】【象】【,】【这】【就】【要】【学】【会】【运】【用】【比】【喻】【等】【修】【辞】【方】【法】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【举】【例】【1】【一】【般】【说】【法】【:】【母】【亲】【不】【高】【兴】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【形】【象】【说】【法】【:】【母】【亲】【的】【圆】【脸】【变】【成】【了】【长】【脸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【母】【亲】【的】【脸】【晴】【转】【阴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【母】【亲】【的】【眉】【毛】【变】【成】【了】【1】【0】【点】【1】【0】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【举】【例】【2】【 】【一】【般】【说】【法】【:】【一】【学】【期】【的】【学】【习】【圆】【满】【地】【结】【束】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【形】【象】【说】【法】【:】【一】【学】【期】【的】【学】【习】【画】【上】【了】【圆】【满】【的】【句】【号】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【完】【满】【地】【落】【下】【了】【一】【学】【期】【学】【习】【的】【帷】【幕】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【胜】【利】【地】【攻】【下】【了】【一】【学】【期】【学】【习】【的】【堡】【垒】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【两】【个】【例】【子】【都】【运】【用】【了】【比】【喻】【的】【修】【辞】【方】【法】【,】【显】【得】【形】【象】【而】【生】【动】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】钢铁苍穹删减镜头【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【生】【如】【下】【棋】【,】【不】【管】【多】【么】【精】【彩】【的】【棋】【,】【其】【中】【总】【有】【遗】【憾】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【花】【的】【春】【季】【,】【阅】【读】【辉】【煌】【的】【黎】【明】【;】【如】【水】【的】【心】【境】【,】【阅】【读】【静】【幽】【的】【夕】【阳】【;】【如】【雪】【的】【灵】【魂】【,】【阅】【读】【奇】【妙】【的】【童】【话】【;】【如】【梦】【的】【岁】【月】【,】【阅】【读】【绚】【丽】【的】【人】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【是】【什】【么】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【是】【欢】【笑】【,】【是】【泪】【水】【,】【是】【美】【妙】【的】【花】【,】【是】【苦】【涩】【的】【酒】【,】【是】【轻】【松】【得】【不】【能】【再】【轻】【松】【的】【甜】【歌】【,】【是】【沉】【重】【得】【不】【能】【再】【沉】【重】【的】【脚】【印】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【学】【时】【,】【我】【的】【成】【绩】【特】【差】【,】【每】【次】【上】【课】【都】【走】【神】【,】【考】【试】【总】【是】【不】【及】【格】【。】【有】【一】【次】【上】【数】【学】【课】【,】【数】【学】【老】【师】【让】【我】【做】【一】【个】【简】【单】【的】【解】【答】【题】【,】【而】【我】【却】【无】【从】【下】【手】【,】【老】【师】【生】【气】【地】【走】【到】【我】【面】【前】【扔】【下】【一】【句】【:】【“】【呆】【脑】【子】【!】【”】【顿】【时】【,】【教】【室】【里】【响】【起】【了】【同】【学】【们】【的】【笑】【声】【。】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【伤】【心】【地】【痛】【哭】【,】【任】【同】【学】【们】【的】【取】【笑】【声】【在】【我】【耳】【边】【回】【旋】【,】【我】【的】【幼】【小】【心】【灵】【差】【点】【崩】【溃】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【狼】【狈】【地】【冲】【出】【教】【室】【,】【一】【路】【小】【跑】【冲】【回】【家】【。】【妈】【妈】【听】【了】【我】【的】【事】【情】【后】【,】【脸】【顿】【时】【青】【了】【,】【然】【后】【,】【她】【抚】【摸】【着】【我】【的】【头】【,】【严】【肃】【地】【说】【:】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【记】【住】【,】【落】【后】【就】【要】【挨】【打】【。】【男】【子】【汉】【,】【只】【要】【努】【力】【,】【别】【人】【有】【的】【,】【咱】【们】【自】【己】【也】【会】【有】【。】【”】【妈】【妈】【讲】【完】【这】【句】【话】【时】【,】【我】【分】【明】【看】【见】【她】【的】【眼】【圈】【湿】【润】【了】【,】【这】【是】【我】【出】【生】【以】【来】【第】【一】【次】【看】【见】【妈】【妈】【流】【泪】【。】【从】【那】【一】【刻】【起】【,】【我】【铭】【记】【妈】【妈】【的】【话】【,】【心】【想】【,】【我】【不】【能】【再】【让】【妈】【妈】【为】【我】【流】【泪】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【那】【以】【后】【,】【我】【每】【天】【拼】【了】【命】【地】【学】【习】【。】【怕】【上】【课】【走】【神】【,】【我】【就】【在】【自】【己】【的】【手】【心】【写】【一】【个】【“】【心】【”】【字】【,】【时】【刻】【提】【醒】【自】【己】【要】【专】【心】【听】【讲】【。】【别】【的】【同】【学】【花】【一】【分】【钟】【能】【学】【会】【的】【知】【识】【,】【我】【一】【分】【钟】【学】【不】【会】【,】【就】【用】【十】【分】【钟】【,】【十】【分】【钟】【还】【不】【懂】【,】【就】【用】【一】【个】【小】【时】【,】【直】【到】【我】【弄】【懂】【为】【止】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【这】【样】【,】【我】【凭】【着】【这】【份】【刻】【苦】【劲】【儿】【,】【在】【期】【末】【考】【试】【时】【,】【由】【原】【来】【的】【班】【级】【后】【几】【名】【上】【升】【到】【正】【数】【第】【三】【。】【我】【的】【成】【绩】【,】【让】【老】【师】【和】【同】【学】【都】【吃】【了】【一】【惊】【,】【他】【们】【没】【想】【到】【,】【原】【先】【一】【个】【“】【呆】【脑】【子】【”】【的】【人】【,】【竟】【然】【能】【有】【如】【此】【惊】【人】【的】【进】【步】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【我】【从】【老】【师】【手】【中】【接】【过】【鲜】【红】【的】【奖】【状】【时】【,】【我】【的】【眼】【泪】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【地】【流】【了】【下】【来】【。】【我】【终】【于】【用】【我】【的】【行】【动】【证】【明】【了】【我】【不】【是】【一】【个】【“】【呆】【脑】【子】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【过】【,】【回】【过】【头】【来】【看】【,】【我】【还】【得】【感】【谢】【称】【我】【是】【“】【呆】【脑】【子】【”】【的】【老】【师】【和】【嘲】【笑】【我】【的】【同】【学】【,】【如】【果】【不】【是】【他】【们】【,】【我】【又】【哪】【儿】【来】【的】【动】【力】【和】【决】【心】【。】【其】【实】【,】【有】【时】【候】【伤】【心】【事】【未】【必】【不】【是】【好】【事】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【拿】【着】【奖】【状】【跑】【回】【家】【,】【小】【心】【地】【递】【给】【妈】【妈】【,】【顿】【时】【,】【妈】【妈】【傻】【了】【眼】【,】【等】【她】【回】【过】【神】【时】【,】【立】【刻】【紧】【紧】【地】【把】【我】【抱】【在】【怀】【里】【,】【嘴】【里】【颤】【抖】【不】【停】【地】【说】【:】【“】【你】【做】【到】【了】【,】【你】【做】【到】【了】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【彻】【底】【的】【明】【白】【,】【失】【败】【并】【不】【可】【怕】【,】【可】【怕】【的】【是】【你】【不】【能】【战】【胜】【失】【败】【。】【其】【实】【失】【败】【就】【是】【成】【功】【的】【开】【端】【,】【只】【有】【在】【失】【败】【中】【成】【长】【,】【才】【能】【经】【受】【得】【住】【暴】【风】【雨】【的】【袭】【击】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【生】【,】【一】【个】【短】【暂】【而】【又】【漫】【长】【的】【历】【程】【。】【在】【这】【个】【历】【程】【中】【,】【有】【欢】【乐】【、】【有】【成】【功】【、】【有】【悲】【哀】【、】【也】【有】【失】【落】【。】【没】【有】【一】【个】【人】【的】【一】【生】【可】【以】【永】【远】【顺】【利】【,】【也】【没】【有】【一】【个】【人】【会】【一】【辈】【子】【倒】【霉】【,】【所】【有】【的】【成】【功】【与】【失】【败】【都】【只】【能】【是】【你】【生】【命】【长】【河】【中】【一】【朵】【不】【起】【眼】【的】【浪】【花】【。】【因】【此】【,】【不】【要】【因】【一】【次】【成】【功】【而】【飘】【飘】【然】【,】【也】【不】【要】【因】【一】【次】【失】【败】【而】【一】【蹶】【不】【振】【。】【成】【功】【了】【,】【淡】【然】【视】【之】【,】【失】【败】【了】【,】【泰】【然】【处】【之】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【近】【有】【同】【学】【问】【我】【,】【有】【什】【么】【技】【巧】【能】【使】【我】【考】【场】【作】【文】【分】【数】【提】【高】【吗】【?】【我】【想】【,】【作】【文】【成】【绩】【好】【,】【是】【由】【多】【种】【因】【素】【决】【定】【的】【。】【作】【为】【考】【场】【作】【文】【,】【都】【是】【命】【题】【作】【文】【。】【不】【论】【哪】【种】【命】【题】【方】【式】【(】【直】【接】【命】【题】【、】【半】【命】【题】【、】【话】【题】【作】【文】【、】【给】【材】【料】【—】【—】【文】【字】【材】【料】【或】【图】【表】【材】【料】【)】【,】【都】【要】【求】【:】【1】【.】【切】【题】【;】【2】【.】【内】【容】【充】【实】【,】【言】【之】【有】【物】【,】【感】【情】【健】【康】【;】【3】【.】【结】【构】【合】【理】【,】【层】【次】【分】【明】【;】【4】【.】【语】【言】【通】【顺】【,】【生】【动】【,】【有】【文】【采】【更】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【做】【到】【这】【四】【条】【,】【首】【先】【要】【在】【平】【时】【积】【累】【作】【文】【材】【料】【,】【注】【重】【实】【践】【认】【真】【观】【察】【,】【广】【泛】【阅】【读】【。】【第】【二】【,】【要】【有】【一】【定】【的】【认】【识】【能】【力】【,】【善】【于】【联】【想】【和】【想】【象】【,】【能】【体】【会】【分】【析】【一】【些】【人】【或】【事】【的】【意】【义】【。】【第】【三】【,】【要】【有】【一】【定】【的】【表】【达】【能】【力】【,】【也】【可】【以】【说】【,】【要】【有】【一】【定】【的】【写】【作】【技】【巧】【。】【所】【以】【说】【,】【技】【巧】【只】【是】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【成】【功】【的】【因】【素】【之】【一】【。】【单】【纯】【追】【求】【写】【作】【技】【巧】【是】【舍】【本】【逐】【末】【的】【,】【或】【说】【是】【本】【末】【倒】【置】【的】【。】【但】【这】【并】【不】【否】【认】【掌】【握】【一】【些】【作】【文】【技】【巧】【也】【有】【十】【分】【重】【要】【的】【作】【用】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【下】【边】【介】【绍】【几】【种】【易】【于】【掌】【握】【的】【方】【法】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【之】【一】【—】【—】【写】【“】【题】【记】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【什】【么】【叫】【“】【题】【记】【”】【?】【写】【在】【书】【的】【正】【文】【前】【或】【文】【章】【题】【目】【下】【面】【的】【文】【字】【,】【多】【为】【扼】【要】【说】【明】【著】【作】【的】【内】【容】【或】【主】【旨】【,】【有】【的】【只】【引】【用】【名】【人】【名】【言】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【举】【例】【 】【作】【文】【题】【目】【 】【我】【是】【他】【的】【眼】【睛】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【授】【人】【玫】【瑰】【,】【手】【有】【余】【香】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【写】【作】【者】【每】【天】【上】【学】【时】【领】【一】【位】【双】【眼】【失】【明】【的】【叔】【叔】【过】【马】【路】【,】【风】【雨】【不】【误】【,】【坚】【持】【了】【三】【年】【,】【他】【体】【会】【到】【帮】【助】【别】【人】【的】【快】【乐】【。】【“】【题】【记】【”】【的】【运】【用】【,】【突】【出】【了】【作】【者】【的】【感】【受】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【之】【二】【—】【—】【运】【用】【小】【标】【题】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【把】【文】【中】【写】【到】【的】【几】【件】【事】【分】【别】【加】【上】【小】【标】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【举】【例】【作】【文】【题】【目】【中】【学】【生】【的】【一】【天】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【把】【初】【三】【学】【生】【一】【天】【的】【紧】【张】【而】【又】【充】【实】【的】【生】【活】【比】【喻】【为】【用】【不】【同】【的】【节】【奏】【演】【奏】【一】【首】【悠】【长】【的】【乐】【曲】【,】【然】【后】【列】【出】【5】【个】【小】【标】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【标】【题】【1】【:】【 】【忙】【碌】【的】【清】【晨】【—】【—】【一】【天】【中】【的】【“】【快】【板】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【标】【题】【2】【 】【:】【上】【午】【—】【—】【进】【行】【曲】【速】【度】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【标】【题】【3】【:】【 】【中】【午】【—】【—】【一】【天】【中】【的】【“】【慢】【板】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【标】【题】【4】【 】【:】【下】【午】【—】【—】【一】【天】【中】【的】【“】【行】【板】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【标】【题】【5】【 】【:】【晚】【上】【—】【—】【最】【后】【的】【小】【夜】【曲】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【读】【者】【读】【来】【,】【顺】【畅】【而】【有】【重】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【之】【三】【—】【—】【“】【镜】【头】【法】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【所】【谓】【“】【镜】【头】【法】【”】【,】【就】【是】【把】【所】【写】【的】【几】【件】【事】【像】【影】【视】【中】【的】【分】【镜】【头】【一】【样】【分】【写】【出】【来】【 】【只】【不】【过】【把】【小】【标】【题】【换】【成】【“】【镜】【头】【一】【”】【“】【镜】【头】【二】【”】【罢】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【举】【例】【作】【文】【题】【目】【我】【在】【中】【考】【的】【前】【一】【天】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【镜】【头】【一】【—】【—】【清】【晨】【,】【流】【鼻】【血】【了】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【镜】【头】【二】【—】【—】【上】【午】【,】【在】【医】【院】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【镜】【头】【三】【—】【—】【晚】【上】【,】【老】【师】【电】【话】【中】【的】【安】【慰】【、】【叮】【咛】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【镜】【头】【四】【—】【—】【满】【怀】【信】【心】【入】【睡】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【分】【镜】【头】【写】【,】【重】【点】【突】【出】【,】【避】【免】【了】【流】【水】【账】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【之】【四】【—】【—】【运】【用】【“】【首】【括】【句】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【首】【括】【句】【”】【就】【是】【在】【每】【一】【段】【的】【第】【一】【句】【概】【括】【写】【出】【这】【一】【段】【的】【内】【容】【,】【然】【后】【围】【绕】【着】【这】【句】【话】【展】【开】【来】【写】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【举】【例】【作】【文】【题】【目】【不】【称】【职】【的】【爸】【爸】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【1】【段】【:】【爸】【爸】【是】【个】【医】【生】【;】【在】【家】【,】【是】【个】【不】【称】【职】【的】【爸】【爸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【2】【段】【:】【爸】【爸】【好】【忙】【呀】【。】【(】【接】【写】【爸】【爸】【忙】【碌】【的】【几】【件】【具】【体】【事】【。】【)】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【3】【段】【:】【爸】【爸】【好】【苦】【呀】【。】【(】【接】【写】【爸】【爸】【刻】【苦】【读】【书】【学】【习】【的】【几】【件】【事】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【4】【段】【:】【爸】【爸】【常】【常】【忘】【了】【吃】【晚】【饭】【。】【(】【接】【写】【因】【忘】【吃】【或】【不】【按】【时】【吃】【晚】【饭】【而】【得】【了】【胃】【病】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【5】【段】【:】【总】【结】【全】【文】【,】【引】【用】【爸】【爸】【“】【为】【了】【病】【人】【,】【为】【了】【医】【学】【事】【业】【我】【只】【能】【如】【此】【”】【的】【话】【,】【写】【出】【爸】【爸】【的】【精】【神】【境】【界】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【的】【题】【目】【似】【贬】【实】【褒】【。】【除】【首】【尾】【两】【段】【外】【,】【中】【间】【3】【个】【段】【落】【都】【用】【首】【括】【句】【,】【内】【容】【集】【中】【,】【从】【不】【同】【侧】【面】【赞】【扬】【了】【爸】【爸】【的】【好】【品】【德】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【之】【五】【—】【—】【运】【用】【排】【比】【句】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【排】【比】【”】【是】【一】【种】【修】【辞】【方】【法】【,】【至】【少】【要】【有】【三】【句】【结】【构】【相】【似】【语】【意】【相】【关】【的】【句】【子】【排】【列】【在】【一】【起】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【举】【例】【作】【文】【题】【目】【为】【实】【现】【理】【想】【作】【准】【备】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【也】【许】【你】【将】【来】【成】【为】【大】【名】【鼎】【鼎】【的】【科】【学】【家】【,】【也】【许】【你】【将】【来】【成】【为】【令】【人】【尊】【敬】【的】【作】【家】【,】【也】【许】【你】【将】【来】【只】【是】【一】【名】【普】【普】【通】【通】【的】【技】【术】【工】【人】【:】【总】【而】【言】【之】【,】【现】【在】【都】【必】【须】【努】【力】【学】【习】【,】【打】【好】【各】【方】【面】【基】【础】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【运】【用】【排】【比】【句】【铺】【写】【了】【同】【学】【们】【将】【来】【的】【职】【业】【,】【句】【式】【大】【体】【整】【齐】【,】【富】【有】【气】【势】【和】【文】【采】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【之】【六】【—】【—】【运】【用】【抒】【情】【和】【议】【论】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【文】【章】【中】【抒】【情】【和】【议】【论】【这】【两】【种】【表】【达】【方】【式】【常】【常】【是】【结】【合】【在】【一】【起】【的】【,】【它】【能】【表】【达】【强】【烈】【的】【感】【情】【并】【突】【出】【深】【化】【中】【心】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【举】【例】【作】【文】【题】【目】【秋】【天】【的】【小】【果】【园】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【这】【是】【一】【个】【小】【小】【的】【果】【树】【园】【,】【地】【方】【不】【大】【,】【树】【的】【品】【种】【可】【真】【不】【少】【。】【柿】【子】【树】【叶】【红】【得】【像】【燃】【烧】【的】【火】【焰】【,】【一】【个】【个】【圆】【溜】【溜】【的】【柿】【子】【小】【灯】【笼】【似】【的】【;】【山】【楂】【树】【上】【,】【这】【一】【嘟】【噜】【,】【那】【儿】【一】【串】【,】【缀】【在】【枝】【上】【,】【玛】【瑙】【一】【般】【;】【最】【逗】【人】【的】【是】【石】【榴】【,】【一】【个】【个】【笑】【得】【咧】【开】【了】【小】【嘴】【…】【…】【)】【啊】【,】【这】【是】【斑】【斓】【的】【秋】【天】【,】【这】【是】【丰】【收】【的】【秋】【天】【!】【我】【赞】【美】【春】【天】【的】【烂】【漫】【,】【更】【赞】【美】【秋】【天】【的】【奉】【献】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【文】【的】【最】【后】【几】【句】【,】【是】【在】【景】【物】【描】【写】【的】【基】【础】【上】【的】【抒】【情】【和】【议】【论】【,】【抒】【发】【了】【热】【爱】【秋】【天】【、】【赞】【美】【秋】【天】【的】【强】【烈】【感】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【之】【七】【—】【—】【把】【叙】【述】【变】【成】【对】【话】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【叙】【述】【和】【对】【话】【描】【写】【各】【有】【各】【的】【用】【途】【。】【一】【般】【说】【,】【对】【话】【显】【得】【更】【生】【动】【些】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【举】【例】【作】【文】【题】【目】【我】【的】【妈】【妈】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【稿】【用】【叙】【述】【:】【妈】【妈】【叫】【弟】【弟】【买】【4】【个】【油】【饼】【,】【售】【货】【员】【忙】【中】【出】【错】【,】【多】【给】【了】【两】【个】【,】【弟】【弟】【为】【占】【了】【便】【宜】【而】【高】【兴】【。】【妈】【妈】【教】【育】【弟】【弟】【补】【交】【了】【两】【个】【油】【饼】【的】【钱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【改】【后】【作】【文】【主】【要】【运】【用】【对】【话】【。】【(】【片】【段】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【我】【回】【来】【啦】【。】【”】【弟】【弟】【兴】【冲】【冲】【地】【走】【进】【家】【门】【。】【大】【家】【坐】【下】【来】【吃】【早】【点】【。】【“】【怎】【么】【多】【了】【两】【个】【?】【”】【妈】【妈】【疑】【惑】【地】【问】【。】【“】【买】【油】【饼】【的】【人】【多】【,】【卖】【油】【饼】【的】【阿】【姨】【太】【忙】【,】【多】【给】【的】【。】【”】【看】【到】【妈】【妈】【眼】【里】【有】【责】【备】【之】【意】【,】【弟】【弟】【嗫】【嚅】【着】【说】【:】【“】【是】【阿】【姨】【给】【的】【,】【反】【正】【就】【两】【个】【,】【有】【什】【么】【的】【。】【”】【弟】【弟】【辩】【解】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【皱】【了】【皱】【眉】【头】【,】【“】【小】【东】【(】【弟】【弟】【的】【小】【名】【)】【,】【你】【真】【觉】【得】【没】【什】【么】【吗】【?】【”】【弟】【弟】【撇】【了】【撇】【嘴】【,】【没】【有】【说】【话】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【小】【东】【,】【你】【已】【经】【是】【个】【小】【学】【生】【了】【,】【是】【个】【少】【先】【队】【员】【,】【白】【占】【人】【家】【的】【便】【宜】【对】【吗】【?】【东】【西】【虽】【少】【,】【可】【养】【成】【好】【品】【德】【重】【要】【啊】【!】【你】【不】【是】【正】【争】【取】【做】【优】【秀】【少】【先】【队】【员】【吗】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【妈】【,】【我】【明】【白】【了】【,】【我】【把】【两】【个】【油】【饼】【给】【阿】【姨】【送】【回】【去】【。】【”】【说】【着】【,】【小】【东】【就】【要】【往】【外】【跑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【吃】【的】【东】【西】【不】【能】【往】【回】【送】【,】【再】【补】【交】【两】【个】【油】【饼】【的】【钱】【就】【行】【了】【。】【”】【妈】【妈】【边】【说】【边】【把】【钱】【递】【到】【小】【东】【手】【里】【。】【小】【东】【高】【兴】【地】【飞】【跑】【向】【饭】【馆】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【主】【要】【用】【对】【话】【描】【写】【推】【动】【情】【节】【发】【展】【,】【比】【平】【铺】【直】【叙】【要】【生】【动】【具】【体】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【之】【八】【—】【—】【改】【变】【说】【法】【使】【语】【言】【生】【动】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【个】【意】【思】【,】【有】【多】【种】【不】【同】【的】【说】【法】【,】【其】【中】【形】【象】【地】【说】【法】【会】【给】【人】【留】【有】【较】【深】【刻】【的】【印】【象】【,】【这】【就】【要】【学】【会】【运】【用】【比】【喻】【等】【修】【辞】【方】【法】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【举】【例】【1】【一】【般】【说】【法】【:】【母】【亲】【不】【高】【兴】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【形】【象】【说】【法】【:】【母】【亲】【的】【圆】【脸】【变】【成】【了】【长】【脸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【母】【亲】【的】【脸】【晴】【转】【阴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【母】【亲】【的】【眉】【毛】【变】【成】【了】【1】【0】【点】【1】【0】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【举】【例】【2】【 】【一】【般】【说】【法】【:】【一】【学】【期】【的】【学】【习】【圆】【满】【地】【结】【束】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【形】【象】【说】【法】【:】【一】【学】【期】【的】【学】【习】【画】【上】【了】【圆】【满】【的】【句】【号】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【完】【满】【地】【落】【下】【了】【一】【学】【期】【学】【习】【的】【帷】【幕】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【胜】【利】【地】【攻】【下】【了】【一】【学】【期】【学】【习】【的】【堡】【垒】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【两】【个】【例】【子】【都】【运】【用】【了】【比】【喻】【的】【修】【辞】【方】【法】【,】【显】【得】【形】【象】【而】【生】【动】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】钢铁苍穹删减镜头【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【春】【兰】【,】【来】【领】【你】【的】【5】【0】【0】【元】【助】【学】【金】【。】【”】【听】【着】【老】【师】【沉】【闷】【的】【语】【气】【,】【望】【着】【他】【严】【肃】【的】【面】【庞】【,】【我】【低】【着】【头】【一】【声】【不】【吭】【地】【走】【向】【讲】【台】【领】【走】【贫】【困】【助】【学】【金】【。】【老】【师】【从】【没】【对】【我】【笑】【过】【,】【可】【他】【时】【常】【对】【班】【长】【绽】【放】【出】【的】【阳】【光】【般】【的】【笑】【容】【。】【我】【想】【,】【他】【一】【定】【和】【其】【他】【人】【一】【样】【,】【歧】【视】【我】【来】【自】【农】【村】【,】【歧】【视】【我】【土】【气】【的】【穿】【着】【。】【班】【花】【在】【背】【后】【总】【是】【嘲】【笑】【我】【穿】【得】【像】【2】【0】【世】【纪】【7】【0】【年】【代】【的】【农】【村】【大】【妈】【,】【我】【听】【到】【后】【只】【能】【将】【头】【深】【深】【埋】【进】【课】【本】【,】【我】【没】【有】【底】【气】【与】【她】【争】【论】【,】【因】【为】【娘】【做】【的】【衣】【裳】【确】【实】【土】【得】【掉】【渣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【天】【气】【渐】【渐】【转】【暖】【,】【同】【学】【们】【慢】【慢】【换】【上】【了】【春】【装】【,】【只】【有】【我】【还】【套】【着】【大】【衣】【。】【我】【不】【敢】【脱】【下】【它】【,】【没】【有】【它】【,】【班】【花】【又】【会】【嘲】【笑】【我】【像】【农】【村】【大】【妈】【,】【老】【师】【也】【不】【会】【再】【对】【我】【笑】【。】【可】【天】【气】【实】【在】【太】【热】【,】【我】【不】【得】【已】【换】【上】【娘】【做】【的】【花】【衬】【衫】【。】【犹】【豫】【了】【许】【久】【,】【我】【才】【慢】【慢】【踱】【到】【班】【级】【门】【口】【,】【进】【不】【进】【去】【?】【这】【时】【班】【花】【走】【过】【来】【:】【“】【春】【兰】【,】【快】【进】【去】【啊】【!】【我】【有】【道】【题】【想】【请】【教】【你】【,】【你】【最】【聪】【明】【了】【,】【一】【定】【要】【教】【我】【。】【”】【完】【全】【没】【有】【想】【象】【中】【的】【嘲】【笑】【,】【我】【以】【一】【种】【感】【激】【的】【心】【态】【给】【班】【花】【讲】【解】【,】【班】【花】【听】【懂】【后】【惊】【叹】【道】【:】【“】【你】【太】【有】【才】【了】【!】【”】【我】【红】【着】【脸】【说】【:】【“】【过】【奖】【。】【”】【老】【师】【依】【然】【请】【我】【回】【答】【问】【题】【,】【我】【仍】【是】【清】【晰】【洪】【亮】【地】【回】【答】【。】【看】【到】【老】【师】【欣】【慰】【的】【笑】【,】【我】【突】【然】【明】【白】【,】【我】【真】【正】【的】【底】【气】【不】【是】【呢】【子】【大】【衣】【给】【我】【的】【,】【我】【的】【自】【信】【、】【我】【增】【长】【的】【学】【识】【才】【是】【我】【永】【恒】【的】【底】【气】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【将】【呢】【子】【大】【衣】【洗】【净】【放】【入】【衣】【橱】【中】【,】【轻】【轻】【地】【抚】【摸】【着】【它】【:】【“】【谢】【谢】【你】【带】【给】【我】【的】【改】【变】【,】【但】【我】【不】【再】【需】【要】【你】【来】【增】【加】【我】【的】【底】【气】【。】【”】【说】【完】【,】【我】【坚】【定】【地】【关】【上】【了】【衣】【橱】【门】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【叙】【述】【了】【一】【个】【很】【有】【意】【味】【的】【故】【事】【:】【一】【件】【呢】【大】【衣】【给】【自】【己】【带】【来】【了】【底】【气】【,】【但】【当】【真】【正】【的】【底】【气】【诞】【生】【后】【,】【自】【己】【忽】【然】【明】【白】【真】【正】【的】【底】【气】【绝】【不】【是】【建】【筑】【在】【衣】【着】【之】【上】【的】【。】【故】【事】【由】【误】【会】【而】【开】【始】【,】【因】【顿】【悟】【而】【结】【束】【,】【整】【个】【过】【程】【中】【人】【物】【心】【理】【描】【写】【细】【腻】【而】【传】【神】【。】【文】【章】【语】【言】【朴】【实】【无】【华】【,】【娓】【娓】【道】【来】【,】【就】【和】【“】【春】【兰】【”】【这】【个】【平】【凡】【朴】【实】【的】【人】【名】【一】【样】【,】【很】【符】【合】【“】【我】【”】【这】【个】【农】【村】【女】【孩】【的】【身】【份】【,】【这】【亦】【为】【文】【章】【增】【色】【不】【少】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【淦】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【很】【想】【到】【海】【滩】【去】【进】【行】【日】【光】【浴】【,】【到】【山】【里】【去】【享】【受】【森】【林】【浴】【,】【而】【这】【些】【都】【不】【是】【容】【易】【做】【到】【的】【事】【,】【然】【而】【居】【住】【于】【都】【市】【并】【不】【等】【于】【就】【没】【有】【了】【亲】【近】【自】【然】【的】【机】【会】【,】【我】【喜】【欢】【闲】【时】【伫】【立】【窗】【前】【凝】【望】【遐】【想】【。】【朝】【窗】【外】【望】【去】【,】【那】【大】【片】【浓】【郁】【的】【绿】【、】【那】【娇】【媚】【绚】【烂】【的】【花】【,】【在】【明】【媚】【的】【阳】【光】【下】【流】【溢】【着】【生】【命】【的】【光】【彩】【和】【活】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【次】【考】【试】【失】【利】【,】【与】【好】【友】【又】【发】【生】【了】【龃】【龉】【,】【心】【中】【甚】【是】【不】【悦】【,】【此】【时】【来】【到】【窗】【前】【,】【我】【看】【到】【雨】【后】【初】【晴】【的】【蓝】【天】【,】【水】【洗】【过】【一】【样】【的】【清】【明】【,】【不】【杂】【尘】【埃】【,】【几】【朵】【白】【云】【仿】【佛】【停】【在】【了】【那】【里】【,】【静】【观】【着】【这】【个】【喧】【嚣】【纷】【扰】【的】【世】【界】【,】【于】【是】【我】【的】【心】【也】【沉】【静】【了】【下】【来】【,】【默】【默】【和】【云】【对】【视】【,】【慢】【慢】【地】【,】【我】【超】【脱】【了】【,】【释】【然】【了】【,】【从】【此】【我】【便】【有】【了】【观】【云】【的】【喜】【好】【,】【我】【发】【现】【这】【样】【可】【以】【抚】【慰】【我】【受】【伤】【的】【心】【,】【同】【时】【也】【可】【开】【阔】【我】【的】【心】【胸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【天】【上】【的】【云】【,】【有】【时】【像】【凝】【重】【的】【山】【峰】【,】【有】【时】【像】【轻】【柔】【的】【白】【纱】【;】【有】【时】【聚】【成】【一】【条】【长】【龙】【,】【横】【亘】【天】【际】【;】【有】【时】【散】【成】【朵】【状】【,】【像】【草】【原】【上】【漫】【步】【的】【羊】【群】【;】【有】【时】【形】【状】【相】【似】【的】【云】【片】【像】【是】【列】【队】【在】【接】【受】【检】【验】【;】【有】【时】【大】【片】【乌】【云】【相】【逐】【,】【似】【大】【战】【爆】【发】【…】【…】【春】【夏】【秋】【冬】【,】【晨】【昏】【午】【夜】【,】【云】【之】【光】【晕】【、】【色】【彩】【各】【异】【。】【缥】【缈】【的】【云】【具】【有】【阴】【柔】【之】【美】【,】【但】【它】【又】【有】【着】【岩】【的】【峥】【嵘】【,】【峰】【的】【挺】【秀】【,】【岭】【的】【险】【峻】【,】【也】【有】【波】【的】【荡】【漾】【,】【涛】【的】【澎】【湃】【,】【潮】【的】【涌】【动】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【古】【今】【无】【数】【诗】【人】【都】【爱】【观】【云】【赏】【云】【,】【留】【下】【无】【数】【佳】【句】【。】【读】【“】【聚】【散】【虚】【空】【去】【复】【还】【”】【,】【能】【体】【悟】【到】【生】【活】【的】【哲】【理】【;】【读】【“】【行】【到】【水】【穷】【处】【,】【坐】【看】【云】【起】【时】【”】【,】【令】【人】【向】【往】【自】【然】【;】【读】【“】【去】【留】【无】【意】【,】【看】【天】【上】【云】【卷】【云】【舒】【”】【,】【会】【使】【心】【胸】【豁】【然】【;】【读】【“】【云】【无】【心】【以】【出】【岫】【”】【,】【会】【想】【到】【人】【生】【也】【应】【潇】【洒】【走】【一】【回】【;】【读】【“】【众】【鸟】【高】【飞】【尽】【,】【孤】【云】【独】【去】【闲】【”】【,】【能】【使】【人】【摆】【脱】【俗】【虑】【;】【读】【“】【牛】【吃】【河】【边】【草】【,】【我】【观】【天】【上】【云】【”】【,】【可】【以】【懂】【得】【人】【与】【自】【然】【、】【外】【物】【理】【应】【和】【谐】【相】【处】【;】【读】【“】【行】【云】【流】【水】【任】【自】【然】【”】【,】【可】【明】【白】【顺】【其】【自】【然】【是】【一】【种】【境】【界】【。】【—】【—】【有】【次】【和】【爷】【爷】【谈】【起】【观】【云】【心】【得】【,】【他】【说】【,】【此】【可】【以】【养】【心】【、】【医】【俗】【、】【疗】【苦】【也】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【面】【对】【蓝】【天】【白】【云】【,】【我】【会】【作】【这】【样】【的】【遐】【想】【:】【假】【如】【我】【是】【一】【片】【云】【,】【我】【会】【飘】【到】【天】【际】【,】【与】【落】【日】【相】【辉】【映】【;】【假】【如】【我】【是】【一】【片】【云】【,】【我】【会】【飘】【到】【丛】【林】【,】【为】【植】【物】【洒】【甘】【霖】【;】【假】【如】【我】【是】【一】【片】【云】【,】【我】【会】【飘】【到】【寂】【静】【的】【山】【谷】【,】【听】【潺】【潺】【的】【流】【水】【声】【;】【假】【如】【我】【是】【一】【片】【云】【,】【我】【会】【飘】【得】【很】【远】【很】【高】【,】【俯】【瞰】【人】【世】【间】【的】【浮】【沉】【沧】【桑】【…】【…】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【除】【了】【观】【云】【,】【我】【还】【喜】【欢】【听】【雨】【。】【那】【细】【细】【密】【密】【的】【节】【奏】【,】【滴】【滴】【点】【点】【,】【似】【幻】【似】【真】【,】【单】【调】【里】【透】【着】【一】【种】【柔】【顺】【与】【亲】【切】【。】【我】【从】【小】【生】【活】【在】【干】【旱】【少】【雨】【的】【西】【北】【地】【区】【,】【那】【儿】【一】【年】【也】【下】【不】【了】【几】【场】【雨】【,】【每】【次】【下】【雨】【都】【让】【我】【们】【小】【孩】【子】【高】【兴】【得】【过】【节】【似】【的】【。】【随】【父】【母】【迁】【居】【祖】【籍】【地】【江】【南】【之】【后】【,】【这】【里】【四】【季】【充】【沛】【的】【雨】【水】【好】【像】【也】【滋】【润】【了】【我】【的】【心】【田】【、】【我】【的】【情】【感】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【雨】【的】【日】【子】【真】【好】【。】【雨】【点】【打】【在】【窗】【玻】【璃】【上】【,】【噼】【噼】【啪】【啪】【的】【,】【它】【是】【在】【敲】【窗】【要】【我】【让】【它】【进】【来】【吗】【?】【雨】【点】【附】【在】【玻】【璃】【上】【滑】【落】【下】【来】【,】【一】【溜】【一】【溜】【的】【,】【美】【极】【了】【。】【雨】【声】【,】【给】【我】【的】【感】【受】【是】【—】【—】【“】【大】【珠】【小】【珠】【落】【玉】【盘】【”】【。】【雨】【落】【在】【窗】【外】【地】【面】【的】【积】【水】【里】【,】【水】【起】【涟】【漪】【;】【要】【落】【到】【心】【里】【,】【那】【也】【会】【泛】【起】【涟】【漪】【的】【,】【我】【想】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【雨】【来】【了】【!】【迈】【着】【轻】【快】【的】【步】【伐】【来】【了】【。】【飘】【洒】【在】【树】【叶】【上】【、】【房】【顶】【上】【、】【路】【上】【,】【由】【远】【及】【近】【,】【轻】【轻】【重】【重】【,】【敲】【击】【的】【声】【乐】【与】【潺】【潺】【细】【流】【的】【音】【响】【密】【织】【成】【网】【,】【仿】【佛】【玉】【女】【柔】【软】【的】【手】【指】【,】【轻】【叩】【我】【的】【耳】【鼓】【,】【温】【馨】【地】【告】【诉】【我】【该】【听】【雨】【了】【。】【于】【是】【,】【收】【拾】【起】【散】【乱】【的】【情】【绪】【开】【始】【听】【雨】【:】【听】【雨】【点】【落】【下】【弹】【奏】【的】【交】【响】【,】【听】【雨】【点】【讲】【古】【老】【的】【故】【事】【…】【…】【心】【里】【充】【满】【着】【说】【不】【出】【的】【畅】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【听】【雨】【须】【静】【下】【心】【来】【,】【如】【品】【诗】【赏】【画】【,】【暴】【雨】【是】【豪】【放】【派】【的】【作】【品】【,】【大】【有】【千】【军】【万】【马】【之】【势】【,】【小】【雨】【则】【是】【婉】【约】【派】【的】【浅】【唱】【低】【吟】【,】【深】【藏】【着】【小】【桥】【流】【水】【之】【幽】【。】【尤】【其】【在】【夜】【深】【人】【静】【之】【时】【,】【那】【雨】【声】【更】【是】【清】【晰】【。】【有】【次】【半】【夜】【醒】【来】【,】【那】【雨】【声】【由】【疏】【到】【密】【,】【由】【小】【到】【大】【,】【雨】【脚】【渐】【趋】【密】【集】【细】【匀】【,】【高】【潮】【过】【后】【,】【雨】【声】【又】【由】【繁】【密】【宏】【大】【变】【为】【清】【脆】【舒】【缓】【,】【我】【相】【信】【这】【美】【妙】【的】【天】【籁】【是】【人】【间】【任】【何】【乐】【队】【也】【演】【奏】【不】【出】【来】【的】【。】【须】【知】【,】【那】【是】【久】【旱】【后】【的】【一】【场】【及】【时】【雨】【啊】【,】【听】【着】【听】【着】【,】【我】【居】【然】【毫】【无】【睡】【意】【。】【这】【次】【夜】【半】【听】【雨】【,】【好】【像】【是】【一】【次】【我】【和】【这】【位】【造】【访】【人】【间】【的】【天】【客】【美】【妙】【的】【不】【期】【而】【遇】【,】【可】【惜】【的】【是】【以】【后】【再】【也】【没】【有】【遇】【到】【过】【。】【有】【时】【早】【上】【看】【到】【地】【上】【湿】【湿】【的】【,】【才】【知】【道】【昨】【夜】【下】【了】【雨】【,】【这】【时】【我】【总】【要】【为】【自】【己】【睡】【得】【太】【死】【而】【感】【到】【遗】【憾】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【是】【,】【雨】【在】【古】【诗】【词】【中】【往】【往】【是】【愁】【苦】【的】【意】【象】【,】【梧】【桐】【树】【上】【的】【潇】【潇】【冷】【雨】【总】【能】【引】【起】【诗】【人】【悲】【苦】【情】【绪】【。】【无】【论】【是】【“】【雨】【滴】【梧】【桐】【秋】【夜】【长】【,】【愁】【心】【和】【雨】【到】【昭】【阳】【”】【,】【还】【是】【“】【空】【床】【卧】【听】【南】【窗】【雨】【,】【谁】【复】【挑】【灯】【夜】【补】【衣】【”】【;】【无】【论】【是】【“】【窗】【外】【雨】【潺】【潺】【,】【春】【意】【阑】【珊】【,】【罗】【衾】【不】【耐】【五】【更】【寒】【”】【,】【还】【是】【“】【半】【夜】【灯】【前】【十】【年】【事】【,】【一】【时】【和】【雨】【到】【心】【头】【”】【,】【读】【了】【之】【后】【,】【心】【里】【都】【会】【有】【一】【种】【潮】【潮】【的】【、】【湿】【湿】【的】【沉】【重】【感】【。】【它】【们】【诉】【说】【的】【是】【亲】【人】【离】【别】【之】【苦】【、】【人】【生】【失】【意】【之】【悲】【,】【或】【是】【壮】【志】【未】【酬】【之】【惆】【怅】【。】【而】【我】【最】【喜】【欢】【的】【还】【是】【“】【五】【更】【梧】【桐】【最】【佳】【音】【,】【无】【田】【似】【我】【犹】【欣】【舞】【,】【何】【况】【田】【间】【望】【岁】【心】【”】【这】【首】【诗】【,】【梧】【桐】【树】【上】【的】【潇】【潇】【冷】【雨】【,】【不】【但】【没】【有】【引】【起】【诗】【人】【的】【悲】【苦】【情】【绪】【,】【反】【而】【由】【此】【联】【想】【到】【田】【里】【的】【禾】【苗】【会】【因】【这】【场】【好】【雨】【而】【变】【得】【生】【机】【勃】【勃】【,】【诗】【人】【喜】【农】【民】【之】【所】【喜】【,】【乐】【农】【民】【之】【所】【乐】【,】【以】【民】【生】【为】【重】【,】【与】【百】【姓】【同】【忧】【乐】【,】【这】【是】【何】【等】【的】【情】【怀】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【伫】【立】【窗】【边】【,】【我】【凝】【望】【着】【,】【遐】【想】【着】【,】【我】【感】【受】【到】【大】【自】【然】【呼】【吸】【的】【韵】【律】【,】【感】【受】【到】【心】【灵】【在】【宁】【静】【中】【澄】【清】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【毛】【荣】【富】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【评】【语】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【刘】【浩】【培】【同】【学】【的】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【最】【初】【是】【在】【考】【场】【上】【写】【的】【,】【考】【试】【的】【作】【文】【题】【是】【“】【我】【喜】【爱】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【”】【,】【他】【在】【横】【线】【上】【填】【了】【“】【伫】【立】【窗】【前】【”】【,】【这】【题】【目】【就】【很】【吸】【引】【人】【。】【后】【经】【修】【改】【加】【工】【,】【题】【目】【也】【就】【改】【成】【了】【现】【在】【的】【“】【观】【云】【与】【听】【雨】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【昂】【立】【中】【学】【讲】【作】【文】【,】【我】【倡】【导】【写】【作】【“】【情】【趣】【作】【文】【”】【,】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【的】【出】【现】【令】【我】【高】【兴】【,】【现】【在】【学】【生】【作】【文】【不】【是】【写】【得】【老】【气】【横】【秋】【,】【就】【是】【枯】【燥】【乏】【味】【,】【一】【点】【情】【趣】【都】【没】【有】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【实】【,】【一】【个】【人】【要】【全】【面】【和】【谐】【地】【发】【展】【,】【情】【趣】【是】【不】【可】【或】【缺】【的】【。】【人】【需】【要】【有】【点】【闲】【暇】【,】【有】【点】【非】【功】【利】【的】【兴】【趣】【爱】【好】【。】【亚】【里】【士】【多】【德】【说】【:】【一】【切】【事】【物】【都】【是】【围】【绕】【一】【个】【枢】【纽】【在】【旋】【转】【,】【这】【个】【枢】【纽】【就】【是】【闲】【暇】【和】【爱】【好】【,】【有】【了】【闲】【情】【逸】【致】【,】【人】【才】【能】【真】【正】【体】【会】【到】【存】【在】【的】【本】【质】【,】【生】【命】【的】【意】【义】【。】【这】【句】【话】【说】【得】【好】【,】【人】【非】【工】【具】【,】【也】【非】【机】【器】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【急】【功】【近】【利】【者】【看】【来】【,】【观】【云】【听】【雨】【或】【许】【毫】【无】【意】【义】【,】【还】【不】【如】【把】【这】【个】【时】【间】【用】【来】【多】【背】【几】【个】【公】【式】【,】【多】【做】【几】【道】【题】【目】【呢】【。】【但】【是】【,】【我】【们】【从】【此】【文】【可】【以】【看】【出】【,】【观】【云】【听】【雨】【对】【人】【的】【身】【心】【来】【说】【并】【非】【无】【益】【,】【它】【丰】【富】【了】【生】【活】【,】【带】【来】【了】【一】【种】【审】【美】【愉】【悦】【,】【使】【平】【淡】【的】【生】【活】【有】【了】【点】【滋】【味】【,】【它】【还】【可】【以】【陶】【冶】【情】【操】【,】【提】【升】【性】【灵】【。】【从】【文】【中】【我】【们】【看】【到】【作】【者】【正】【是】【借】【助】【于】【观】【云】【听】【雨】【把】【那】【些】【古】【诗】【词】【读】【活】【了】【,】【使】【它】【们】【成】【为】【了】【自】【己】【精】【神】【的】【一】【部】【分】【。】【文】【中】【说】【观】【云】【“】【可】【以】【养】【心】【、】【医】【俗】【、】【疗】【苦】【”】【,】【真】【良】【言】【也】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【常】【对】【学】【生】【说】【,】【要】【想】【把】【作】【文】【写】【得】【富】【有】【情】【趣】【,】【先】【要】【让】【自】【己】【做】【一】【个】【有】【情】【趣】【的】【人】【,】【而】【情】【趣】【往】【往】【从】【文】【化】【素】【养】【中】【来】【。】【显】【然】【,】【古】【诗】【词】【的】【阅】【读】【使】【作】【者】【的】【观】【云】【听】【雨】【更】【上】【了】【一】【个】【层】【次】【,】【真】【正】【成】【了】【一】【种】【精】【神】【的】【享】【受】【。】【据】【我】【所】【知】【,】【刘】【浩】【培】【同】【学】【是】【酷】【爱】【古】【诗】【词】【的】【,】【大】【量】【的】【阅】【读】【培】【养】【了】【他】【的】【文】【化】【素】【养】【和】【生】【活】【情】【趣】【。】【一】【个】【有】【情】【趣】【的】【人】【,】【必】【是】【一】【个】【有】【文】【化】【修】【养】【、】【吸】【收】【了】【传】【统】【文】【化】【的】【精】【神】【养】【料】【的】【人】【,】【也】【必】【定】【是】【一】【个】【内】【心】【和】【谐】【、】【从】【容】【淡】【定】【的】【人】【。】【可】【惜】【现】【在】【学】【校】【教】【育】【实】【际】【上】【是】【以】【把】【学】【生】【培】【养】【成】【为】【考】【试】【机】【器】【为】【目】【标】【的】【,】【给】【学】【生】【以】【重】【负】【重】【压】【,】【使】【之】【丧】【失】【了】【自】【由】【发】【展】【的】【空】【间】【和】【持】【续】【发】【展】【的】【可】【能】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【回】【到】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【我】【对】【文】【章】【的】【修】【改】【曾】【提】【过】【两】【点】【意】【见】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【段】【中】【写】【天】【上】【的】【云】【抚】【慰】【了】【“】【我】【”】【受】【伤】【的】【心】【,】【倒】【数】【第】【三】【段】【写】【一】【次】【夜】【半】【听】【雨】【,】【都】【是】【我】【建】【议】【他】【补】【写】【的】【。】【—】【—】【我】【问】【作】【者】【在】【观】【云】【、】【听】【雨】【的】【过】【程】【中】【有】【没】【有】【印】【象】【最】【深】【的】【一】【次】【,】【如】【果】【有】【的】【话】【,】【可】【补】【入】【文】【中】【。】【为】【什】【么】【呢】【?】【因】【为】【起】【初】【全】【文】【都】【是】【虚】【写】【,】【从】【“】【面】【”】【上】【去】【写】【,】【而】【无】【“】【点】【”】【上】【的】【内】【容】【,】【加】【上】【两】【次】【具】【体】【的】【观】【云】【和】【听】【雨】【,】【全】【文】【也】【就】【能】【做】【到】【虚】【实】【相】【映】【、】【点】【面】【结】【合】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【中】【有】【两】【处】【对】【古】【诗】【词】【的】【引】【用】【,】【第】【一】【处】【是】【引】【用】【一】【句】【,】【评】【价】【一】【句】【,】【第】【二】【处】【原】【先】【也】【是】【同】【样】【的】【写】【法】【。】【我】【说】【,】【这】【样】【就】【显】【得】【呆】【板】【了】【,】【文】【似】【看】【山】【不】【喜】【平】【,】【你】【可】【换】【种】【写】【法】【,】【好】【让】【文】【章】【有】【些】【变】【化】【。】【好】【在】【他】【喜】【欢】【古】【诗】【词】【,】【第】【二】【处】【很】【快】【就】【换】【成】【现】【在】【的】【写】【法】【。】【大】【家】【可】【以】【把】【这】【两】【段】【对】【照】【着】【看】【一】【下】【,】【避】【开】【了】【雷】【同】【,】【文】【章】【就】【活】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【家】【秦】【牧】【说】【:】【“】【写】【作】【要】【讲】【究】【点】【文】【笔】【情】【趣】【,】【否】【则】【读】【者】【是】【不】【买】【账】【的】【。】【”】【怎】【样】【才】【能】【有】【文】【笔】【情】【趣】【呢】【?】【他】【又】【说】【:】【“】【在】【思】【想】【、】【文】【化】【知】【识】【、】【语】【言】【素】【养】【等】【方】【面】【都】【要】【有】【所】【追】【求】【,】【而】【且】【这】【些】【方】【面】【要】【互】【相】【配】【合】【,】【像】【水】【乳】【交】【融】【一】【样】【。】【”】【可】【以】【说】【,】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【的】【成】【功】【,】【就】【是】【刘】【浩】【培】【同】【学】【长】【期】【以】【来】【在】【思】【想】【、】【文】【化】【知】【识】【和】【语】【言】【素】【养】【上】【有】【所】【追】【求】【的】【结】【果】【。】【如】【果】【你】【也】【想】【尝】【试】【“】【情】【趣】【作】【文】【”】【,】【那】【么】【就】【可】【以】【从】【这】【些】【方】【面】【去】【努】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【还】【告】【诉】【我】【们】【,】【要】【学】【会】【赏】【玩】【生】【活】【,】【从】【寻】【常】【生】【活】【中】【觅】【得】【情】【趣】【。】【以】【前】【我】【们】【总】【是】【说】【要】【观】【察】【生】【活】【、】【认】【识】【生】【活】【、】【感】【悟】【生】【活】【,】【这】【是】【不】【错】【的】【,】【但】【是】【人】【不】【能】【只】【生】【活】【在】【理】【性】【里】【,】【通】【过】【赏】【玩】【而】【获】【得】【情】【趣】【,】【是】【很】【符】【合】【人】【性】【的】【。】【郁】【达】【夫】【的】【《】【故】【都】【的】【秋】【》】【、】【朱】【自】【清】【的】【《】【扬】【州】【的】【夏】【日】【》】【都】【是】【赏】【玩】【生】【活】【而】【得】【的】【佳】【作】【。】【有】【兴】【趣】【的】【同】【学】【可】【找】【来】【一】【读】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【相】【信】【,】【练】【习】【情】【趣】【写】【作】【,】【最】【大】【的】【收】【益】【也】【许】【不】【在】【于】【能】【写】【出】【得】【高】【分】【的】【作】【文】【来】【,】【而】【是】【能】【够】【使】【你】【体】【验】【到】【写】【作】【的】【趣】【味】【,】【再】【进】【一】【步】【,】【你】【又】【能】【体】【会】【到】【生】【活】【何】【处】【不】【美】【,】【何】【处】【不】【是】【意】【趣】【盎】【然】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【毛】【荣】【富】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】钢铁苍穹删减镜头【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【东】【海】【之】【滨】【,】【长】【江】【三】【角】【洲】【经】【济】【圈】【南】【翼】【重】【镇】【慈】【溪】【,】【有】【一】【颗】【冉】【冉】【升】【起】【的】【璀】【璨】【明】【珠】【—】【—】【慈】【吉】【中】【学】【。】【在】【这】【所】【气】【势】【恢】【弘】【、】【中】【西】【合】【璧】【的】【优】【美】【校】【园】【里】【,】【还】【有】【一】【道】【亮】【丽】【的】【风】【景】【线】【—】【—】【红】【色】【语】【文】【。】【它】【是】【红】【色】【阅】【读】【、】【红】【色】【语】【文】【课】【堂】【、】【红】【色】【作】【文】【、】【红】【焰】【文】【学】【社】【、】【《】【红】【焰】【》】【社】【刊】【、】【红】【色】【讲】【坛】【等】【组】【成】【,】【由】【阅】【读】【到】【写】【作】【,】【由】【课】【内】【到】【课】【外】【,】【由】【学】【生】【到】【老】【师】【,】【由】【静】【态】【到】【动】【态】【,】【形】【成】【了】【一】【个】【完】【整】【的】【“】【红】【色】【语】【文】【”】【链】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【一】【、】【分】【析】【材】【料】【,】【提】【炼】【观】【点】【。】【因】【为】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【属】【于】【给】【材】【料】【作】【文】【,】【所】【以】【写】【好】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【的】【第】【一】【步】【就】【是】【认】【真】【阅】【读】【材】【料】【,】【然】【后】【抓】【住】【关】【键】【段】【落】【、】【句】【子】【或】【词】【语】【认】【真】【分】【析】【,】【归】【纳】【出】【材】【料】【的】【中】【心】【。】【概】【括】【出】【材】【料】【的】【中】【心】【,】【只】【能】【算】【读】【懂】【了】【材】【料】【,】【要】【发】【表】【议】【论】【还】【需】【要】【在】【读】【懂】【的】【基】【础】【上】【推】【进】【一】【步】【,】【即】【针】【对】【材】【料】【的】【全】【部】【或】【某】【一】【方】【面】【的】【内】【容】【,】【提】【出】【自】【己】【的】【看】【法】【,】【这】【个】【看】【法】【就】【是】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【的】【论】【点】【。】【一】【个】【材】【料】【有】【时】【可】【以】【提】【炼】【出】【许】【多】【观】【点】【。】【同】【样】【一】【个】【材】【料】【,】【由】【于】【提】【炼】【的】【观】【点】【不】【同】【,】【便】【会】【出】【现】【论】【点】【不】【同】【的】【文】【章】【,】【因】【此】【在】【提】【炼】【观】【点】【时】【,】【应】【选】【择】【最】【佳】【角】【度】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【拟】【好】【题】【目】【,】【力】【求】【醒】【目】【。】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【的】【作】【文】【一】【般】【都】【是】【没】【有】【题】【目】【的】【,】【需】【要】【我】【们】【自】【己】【来】【拟】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【拟】【题】【时】【要】【注】【意】【紧】【扣】【论】【题】【,】【力】【求】【醒】【目】【。】【要】【尽】【量】【防】【止】【拟】【题】【的】【平】【泛】【,】【人】【云】【亦】【云】【;】【也】【要】【尽】【量】【防】【止】【拟】【题】【大】【而】【空】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【写】【好】【开】【头】【,】【简】【明】【扼】【要】【。】【人】【们】【常】【说】【万】【事】【开】【头】【难】【,】【然】【而】【开】【头】【又】【是】【关】【键】【。】【写】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【的】【开】【头】【,】【必】【须】【紧】【紧】【扣】【住】【所】【提】【供】【的】【材】【料】【内】【容】【,】【文】【章】【的】【开】【头】【首】【先】【要】【概】【述】【材】【料】【,】【然】【后】【根】【据】【它】【的】【意】【义】【或】【教】【训】【提】【出】【自】【己】【的】【观】【点】【,】【即】【文】【章】【的】【论】【点】【。】【这】【部】【分】【用】【的】【笔】【墨】【不】【宜】【太】【多】【,】【否】【则】【喧】【宾】【夺】【主】【。】【初】【学】【写】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【的】【学】【生】【常】【犯】【的】【毛】【病】【有】【两】【个】【:】【一】【是】【先】【将】【材】【料】【从】【头】【到】【尾】【抄】【一】【遍】【,】【这】【是】【要】【求】【不】【允】【许】【的】【;】【二】【是】【在】【概】【述】【原】【材】【料】【时】【,】【抓】【不】【住】【重】【点】【,】【抓】【不】【住】【关】【键】【的】【语】【句】【,】【意】【思】【表】【达】【不】【清】【。】【以】【上】【两】【个】【毛】【病】【均】【反】【映】【出】【学】【生】【的】【综】【合】【概】【括】【能】【力】【及】【表】【达】【能】【力】【较】【差】【。】【因】【此】【,】【在】【概】【述】【时】【一】【定】【要】【抓】【住】【重】【点】【和】【关】【键】【语】【句】【,】【力】【求】【简】【明】【扼】【要】【。】【这】【才】【有】【利】【于】【观】【点】【的】【提】【炼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【紧】【扣】【材】【料】【,】【合】【理】【论】【证】【。】【在】【论】【证】【中】【,】【要】【紧】【紧】【扣】【住】【这】【个】【材】【料】【阐】【明】【观】【点】【,】【议】【论】【的】【内】【容】【要】【具】【体】【、】【集】【中】【。】【可】【以】【联】【系】【现】【实】【将】【议】【论】【向】【深】【广】【展】【开】【,】【但】【不】【要】【脱】【离】【原】【材】【料】【空】【发】【议】【论】【或】【使】【论】【题】【转】【移】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【病】【文】【展】【示】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【看】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【刘】【 】【佳】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【我】【们】【仔】【细】【观】【察】【我】【们】【身】【边】【的】【同】【学】【,】【会】【发】【现】【在】【我】【们】【青】【少】【年】【学】【生】【中】【出】【现】【了】【高】【消】【费】【的】【现】【象】【,】【这】【些】【人】【出】【门】【打】【的】【士】【,】【穿】【名】【牌】【,】【吃】【的】【要】【贵】【,】【用】【的】【要】【高】【级】【,】【他】【们】【只】【讲】【铺】【张】【浪】【费】【,】【不】【注】【意】【勤】【俭】【节】【约】【。】【中】【学】【生】【们】【在】【吃】【、】【穿】【、】【娱】【乐】【方】【面】【的】【消】【费】【要】【求】【很】【多】【,】【比】【成】【人】【的】【支】【出】【毫】【不】【逊】【色】【,】【且】【呈】【快】【速】【增】【长】【的】【态】【势】【。】【(】【开】【头】【摆】【现】【象】【,】【引】【出】【下】【文】【的】【写】【作】【,】【这】【一】【点】【很】【好】【。】【)】【我】【认】【为】【:】【这】【是】【极】【不】【适】【宜】【的】【。】【(】【点】【出】【自】【己】【对】【这】【类】【事】【的】【看】【法】【。】【下】【文】【也】【应】【着】【重】【突】【出】【“】【极】【不】【适】【宜】【的】【”】【的】【原】【因】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【纵】【观】【现】【在】【我】【们】【身】【边】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【情】【况】【,】【以】【以】【下】【现】【象】【最】【为】【突】【出】【。】【(】【下】【面】【又】【是】【摆】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【的】【现】【象】【,】【这】【里】【与】【第】【一】【段】【的】【内】【容】【有】【明】【显】【的】【重】【复】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【是】【很】【多】【学】【生】【乐】【于】【搭】【伴】【用】【餐】【,】【大】【吃】【大】【喝】【并】【且】【零】【食】【不】【离】【嘴】【。】【很】【多】【中】【学】【生】【喜】【欢】【几】【个】【同】【学】【吆】【五】【喝】【六】【地】【一】【起】【吃】【饭】【,】【他】【们】【觉】【得】【热】【闹】【又】【时】【尚】【;】【有】【些】【中】【学】【生】【效】【仿】【成】【年】【人】【喝】【着】【啤】【酒】【和】【高】【档】【饮】【料】【,】【边】【喝】【边】【侃】【。】【喜】【欢】【吃】【零】【食】【是】【当】【今】【中】【小】【学】【生】【的】【又】【一】【特】【点】【,】【他】【们】【喜】【欢】【吃】【一】【些】【流】【行】【的】【新】【、】【奇】【食】【品】【,】【这】【些】【食】【品】【其】【实】【并】【无】【营】【养】【,】【是】【典】【型】【的】【“】【垃】【圾】【”】【食】【品】【,】【但】【因】【为】【广】【告】【打】【得】【好】【,】【学】【生】【们】【就】【争】【先】【恐】【后】【的】【购】【买】【。】【(】【这】【些】【现】【象】【只】【需】【在】【开】【头】【点】【出】【即】【可】【,】【目】【的】【在】【于】【引】【出】【事】【例】【,】【而】【应】【把】【重】【点】【放】【在】【我】【们】【对】【这】【事】【的】【看】【法】【与】【态】【度】【上】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【是】【一】【些】【学】【生】【为】【了】【摆】【阔】【,】【现】【代】【通】【信】【工】【具】【随】【身】【带】【。】【现】【今】【中】【学】【生】【移】【动】【通】【信】【工】【具】【使】【用】【率】【逐】【年】【增】【高】【,】【尽】【管】【大】【多】【数】【学】【校】【为】【了】【不】【影】【响】【学】【生】【的】【上】【课】【质】【量】【,】【不】【允】【许】【学】【生】【带】【通】【信】【工】【具】【到】【学】【校】【,】【但】【很】【多】【学】【生】【还】【是】【悄】【悄】【地】【怀】【揣】【手】【机】【或】【小】【灵】【通】【入】【校】【。】【移】【动】【通】【信】【工】【具】【成】【为】【当】【今】【中】【学】【生】【摆】【阔】【、】【显】【示】【自】【己】【的】【一】【个】【重】【要】【标】【志】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【是】【一】【些】【学】【生】【为】【了】【追】【求】【时】【髦】【,】【不】【顾】【家】【庭】【的】【实】【际】【情】【况】【而】【崇】【尚】【品】【牌】【。】【他】【们】【追】【求】【时】【尚】【,】【崇】【尚】【时】【髦】【,】【喜】【欢】【穿】【品】【牌】【服】【装】【和】【鞋】【子】【是】【现】【在】【中】【学】【生】【的】【又】【一】【特】【点】【,】【有】【些】【学】【生】【甚】【至】【不】【是】【品】【牌】【不】【上】【身】【。】【相】【信】【如】【果】【不】【是】【学】【校】【要】【求】【统】【一】【穿】【校】【服】【,】【他】【们】【的】【衣】【着】【消】【费】【还】【会】【更】【高】【,】【支】【出】【会】【更】【大】【。】【显】【而】【易】【见】【,】【部】【分】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【的】【出】【发】【点】【在】【于】【仿】【效】【富】【裕】【人】【群】【的】【生】【活】【,】【在】【他】【们】【看】【来】【,】【是】【否】【拥】【有】【某】【些】【物】【品】【成】【为】【他】【们】【显】【示】【自】【己】【的】【标】【志】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【在】【目】【前】【是】【不】【合】【适】【的】【,】【(】【为】【什】【么】【不】【合】【适】【呢】【?】【没】【有】【恰】【当】【的】【论】【据】【来】【证】【明】【,】【这】【样】【的】【观】【点】【也】【就】【没】【有】【说】【服】【力】【。】【)】【我】【们】【应】【杜】【绝】【这】【种】【现】【象】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【评】【改】【指】【津】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【能】【从】【现】【在】【中】【学】【生】【生】【活】【中】【的】【一】【些】【现】【象】【引】【入】【问】【题】【,】【这】【一】【点】【很】【好】【。】【但】【是】【遗】【憾】【的】【是】【作】【者】【并】【没】【有】【按】【第】【一】【段】【的】【思】【路】【来】【行】【文】【,】【而】【是】【中】【途】【改】【道】【了】【。】【以】【后】【的】【三】【、】【四】【、】【五】【段】【大】【写】【特】【写】【目】【前】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【的】【种】【种】【表】【现】【,】【这】【显】【然】【是】【“】【叙】【”】【而】【不】【是】【“】【议】【”】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【建】【议】【在】【升】【格】【本】【文】【时】【,】【多】【写】【写】【自】【己】【对】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【这】【种】【现】【象】【的】【看】【法】【和】【认】【识】【,】【既】【然】【作】【者】【认】【为】【这】【是】【不】【合】【时】【宜】【的】【,】【就】【要】【说】【说】【为】【什】【么】【不】【合】【时】【宜】【,】【要】【注】【意】【用】【合】【理】【的】【事】【例】【与】【道】【理】【来】【印】【证】【自】【己】【的】【观】【点】【,】【让】【别】【的】【同】【学】【能】【够】【接】【受】【你】【的】【观】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【升】【格】【佳】【作】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【看】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【刘】【 】【佳】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【我】【们】【仔】【细】【观】【察】【我】【们】【身】【边】【的】【同】【学】【,】【会】【发】【现】【在】【我】【们】【青】【少】【年】【学】【生】【中】【出】【现】【了】【高】【消】【费】【的】【现】【象】【,】【这】【些】【人】【出】【门】【打】【的】【士】【,】【穿】【名】【牌】【,】【吃】【的】【要】【贵】【,】【用】【的】【要】【高】【级】【,】【他】【们】【只】【讲】【铺】【张】【浪】【费】【,】【不】【注】【意】【勤】【俭】【节】【约】【。】【我】【认】【为】【:】【这】【是】【极】【不】【适】【宜】【的】【。】【(】【由】【现】【象】【入】【手】【,】【进】【而】【提】【出】【论】【点】【,】【观】【点】【鲜】【明】【,】【引】【人】【思】【考】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【高】【消】【费】【极】【不】【适】【宜】【,】【首】【先】【它】【不】【符】【合】【我】【们】【如】【今】【的】【国】【情】【。】【现】【在】【,】【我】【们】【国】【家】【的】【经】【济】【虽】【然】【有】【了】【很】【大】【的】【发】【展】【,】【人】【民】【生】【活】【也】【有】【所】【改】【善】【。】【但】【是】【,】【国】【家】【经】【济】【还】【不】【发】【达】【,】【人】【民】【生】【活】【水】【平】【还】【比】【较】【低】【,】【一】【些】【边】【远】【地】【区】【的】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【没】【钱】【上】【学】【。】【在】【这】【种】【情】【况】【下】【,】【高】【消】【费】【是】【行】【不】【通】【的】【。】【(】【先】【从】【主】【要】【的】【方】【面】【来】【分】【析】【,】【说】【理】【透】【彻】【,】【让】【人】【信】【服】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【不】【提】【倡】【高】【消】【费】【,】【是】【因】【为】【高】【消】【费】【还】【是】【一】【种】【腐】【蚀】【剂】【。】【它】【使】【青】【少】【年】【挥】【霍】【别】【人】【的】【劳】【动】【果】【实】【,】【把】【自】【己】【的】【幸】【福】【建】【立】【在】【他】【人】【辛】【勤】【劳】【动】【的】【基】【础】【上】【。】【有】【些】【青】【少】【年】【为】【了】【要】【一】【双】【“】【耐】【克】【”】【苦】【求】【爹】【妈】【,】【这】【对】【那】【些】【拿】【工】【资】【的】【家】【长】【来】【说】【,】【就】【变】【成】【了】【一】【个】【沉】【重】【的】【负】【担】【。】【我】【们】【在】【学】【校】【中】【上】【课】【是】【不】【创】【造】【价】【值】【的】【。】【这】【就】【要】【求】【我】【们】【,】【要】【珍】【惜】【别】【人】【为】【我】【们】【提】【供】【的】【各】【种】【条】【件】【。】【我】【们】【青】【少】【年】【正】【处】【于】【人】【生】【最】【适】【宜】【播】【种】【理】【想】【的】【时】【候】【,】【切】【莫】【沉】【醉】【于】【追】【求】【物】【质】【享】【受】【,】【折】【断】【自】【己】【理】【想】【的】【翅】【膀】【。】【(】【从】【青】【少】【年】【自】【身】【上】【来】【分】【析】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【很】【有】【针】【对】【性】【,】【很】【能】【引】【起】【青】【少】【年】【学】【生】【的】【深】【思】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【香】【港】【的】【“】【船】【王】【”】【包】【玉】【刚】【家】【财】【万】【贯】【,】【却】【依】【然】【以】【俭】【治】【家】【,】【每】【天】【仍】【坐】【公】【共】【汽】【车】【上】【下】【班】【。】【这】【似】【乎】【有】【些】【不】【可】【思】【议】【:】【这】【样】【一】【个】【亿】【万】【富】【翁】【,】【买】【一】【辆】【小】【汽】【车】【又】【算】【什】【么】【,】【何】【至】【于】【“】【抠】【门】【儿】【”】【到】【这】【个】【地】【步】【?】【其】【实】【他】【并】【不】【是】【吝】【惜】【那】【几】【个】【钱】【,】【而】【是】【时】【时】【告】【诫】【自】【己】【切】【莫】【贪】【图】【享】【受】【,】【追】【求】【奢】【侈】【生】【活】【。】【方】【志】【敏】【烈】【士】【有】【这】【样】【一】【句】【话】【:】【“】【清】【贫】【,】【洁】【白】【朴】【素】【的】【生】【活】【,】【正】【是】【我】【们】【革】【命】【者】【能】【够】【战】【胜】【许】【多】【困】【难】【的】【地】【方】【。】【”】【由】【此】【可】【见】【,】【事】【业】【离】【不】【开】【俭】【朴】【。】【(】【运】【用】【事】【实】【与】【道】【理】【论】【据】【相】【结】【合】【的】【方】【式】【,】【有】【力】【地】【证】【明】【了】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【年】【的】【“】【两】【会】【”】【已】【给】【我】【们】【做】【出】【了】【很】【好】【的】【榜】【样】【,】【会】【场】【全】【部】【采】【用】【节】【能】【光】【源】【,】【减】【少】【照】【明】【用】【电】【。】【我】【们】【从】【这】【处】【细】【节】【中】【不】【难】【体】【会】【到】【,】【我】【们】【个】【人】【的】【事】【业】【想】【有】【所】【成】【就】【,】【我】【们】【的】【国】【家】【想】【要】【强】【大】【,】【我】【们】【的】【社】【会】【想】【要】【健】【康】【发】【展】【,】【就】【必】【须】【提】【倡】【俭】【朴】【。】【尤】【其】【是】【中】【学】【生】【,】【应】【该】【反】【对】【高】【消】【费】【。】【(】【既】【总】【结】【上】【文】【,】【又】【回】【应】【开】【篇】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【结】【构】【圆】【合】【,】【主】【题】【鲜】【明】【突】【出】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【后】【的】【作】【文】【较】【符】【合】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【的】【写】【法】【,】【文】【章】【在】【开】【头】【首】【先】【引】【出】【了】【要】【写】【的】【“】【事】【”】【,】【但】【这】【里】【的】【“】【事】【”】【不】【是】【某】【一】【具】【体】【的】【事】【,】【而】【是】【一】【种】【现】【象】【—】【—】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【的】【现】【象】【。】【在】【第】【一】【段】【中】【作】【者】【简】【明】【扼】【要】【的】【叙】【述】【了】【“】【事】【”】【,】【然】【后】【引】【出】【对】【事】【的】【“】【议】【”】【,】【认】【为】【这】【是】【极】【不】【适】【宜】【的】【。】【接】【下】【来】【重】【点】【论】【述】【了】【 】【“】【不】【适】【宜】【”】【的】【理】【由】【:】【一】【是】【高】【消】【费】【不】【符】【合】【国】【情】【,】【二】【是】【高】【消】【费】【是】【腐】【蚀】【剂】【,】【事】【业】【成】【功】【离】【不】【开】【俭】【朴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【纵】【观】【升】【格】【后】【的】【文】【章】【,】【作】【者】【叙】【事】【简】【明】【扼】【要】【,】【议】【论】【恰】【到】【好】【处】【,】【就】【事】【论】【理】【、】【理】【从】【事】【发】【,】【而】【且】【在】【提】【出】【观】【点】【后】【能】【扣】【住】【论】【点】【展】【开】【议】【论】【,】【论】【据】【恰】【当】【、】【说】【服】【力】【强】【,】【较】【符】【合】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【作】【文】【的】【写】【法】【。】【这】【一】【点】【是】【值】【得】【我】【们】【学】【习】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】钢铁苍穹删减镜头【<】【p】【>】【首】【先】【映】【入】【眼】【帘】【的】【是】【一】【大】【片】【草】【地】【,】【绿】【盈】【盈】【的】【,】【令】【人】【感】【到】【无】【比】【生】【机】【。】【再】【往】【内】【走】【,】【便】【是】【一】【大】【片】【的】【山】【茶】【,】【令】【人】【心】【驰】【神】【往】【。】【我】【看】【到】【花】【便】【迫】【不】【及】【待】【拿】【出】【相】【机】【,】【对】【于】【一】【个】【从】【来】【不】【拍】【照】【片】【的】【人】【,】【在】【大】【风】【中】【拍】【出】【聚】【焦】【的】【照】【片】【实】【属】【难】【得】【,】【费】【了】【吃】【奶】【的】【劲】【,】【终】【于】【将】【未】【开】【的】【山】【茶】【花】【苞】【存】【入】【了】【相】【机】【。】【成】【功】【后】【的】【我】【越】【发】【来】【劲】【,】【一】【张】【又】【一】【张】【,】【从】【未】【开】【到】【半】【开】【再】【到】【全】【开】【,】【我】【用】【一】【张】【张】【照】【片】【记】【录】【下】【了】【它】【的】【全】【过】【程】【。】【美】【,】【真】【美】【!】【<】【/】【p】【>】

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