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沈阳工程教务处:搞“盆栽式复绿”!

2019年10月23日 18:14

【我】【们】【一】【群】【人】【来】【到】【普】【陀】【山】【观】【看】【南】【海】【观】【音】【,】【又】【来】【到】【朱】【家】【尖】【观】【赏】【了】【千】【奇】【百】【怪】【的】【沙】【雕】【。】【可】【是】【我】【并】【不】【在】【意】【这】【些】【,】【我】【想】【去】【那】【让】【我】【心】【心】【念】【念】【的】【宁】【波】【方】【特】【乐】【园】【。】

【小】【小】【的】【身】【体】【中】【,】【有】【着】【大】【大】【的】【能】【量】【,】【不】【要】【认】【为】【困】【难】【如】【此】【可】【怕】【,】【其】【实】【只】【要】【肯】【努】【力】【没】【有】【什】【么】【做】【不】【到】【。】【这】【是】【我】【读】【《】【苦】【儿】【流】【浪】【记】【》】【所】【感】【受】【到】【的】【。】沈阳工程教务处【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【倒】【退】【至】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【的】【3】【月】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【班】【长】【冬】【哥】【在】【黑】【板】【右】【侧】【赫】【然】【写】【下】【“】【中】【考】【倒】【计】【时】【1】【0】【0】【天】【”】【的】【红】【色】【字】【样】【。】【这】【几】【个】【字】【就】【像】【行】【将】【就】【木】【的】【囚】【犯】【收】【到】【了】【盖】【上】【红】【印】【章】【的】【行】【刑】【通】【知】【书】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【倒】【吸】【了】【一】【口】【冷】【气】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【还】【剩】【1】【0】【0】【天】【?】【1】【0】【0】【天】【能】【来】【个】【“】【咸】【鱼】【翻】【身】【”】【吗】【?】【大】【家】【几】【乎】【都】【报】【以】【肯】【定】【的】【回】【答】【。】【于】【是】【开】【夜】【车】【的】【人】【更】【多】【了】【,】【问】【问】【题】【的】【人】【更】【多】【了】【,】【认】【真】【听】【讲】【的】【人】【也】【更】【多】【了】【。】【可】【毕】【竟】【是】【持】【久】【战】【,】【大】【家】【的】【劲】【头】【慢】【慢】【地】【被】【时】【间】【削】【弱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【看】【来】【,】【那】【段】【日】【子】【,】【真】【的】【是】【“】【黑】【板】【上】【老】【师】【的】【粉】【笔】【在】【那】【‘】【叽】【叽】【喳】【喳】【’】【写】【个】【不】【停】【”】【,】【再】【伴】【上】【老】【师】【“】【叽】【里】【呱】【啦】【”】【的】【讲】【课】【声】【,】【时】【不】【时】【还】【会】【掺】【杂】【着】【窗】【外】【榕】【树】【上】【的】【鸟】【叫】【声】【,】【而】【这】【些】【豆】【芽】【般】【的】【音】【符】【,】【虽】【萦】【绕】【耳】【畔】【,】【却】【入】【不】【了】【耳】【。】【眼】【皮】【也】【不】【听】【使】【唤】【地】【耷】【拉】【下】【来】【,】【紧】【接】【着】【是】【脑】【袋】【重】【重】【地】【磕】【到】【桌】【上】【,】【然】【后】【猛】【地】【睁】【大】【眼】【睛】【—】【—】【老】【师】【还】【在】【台】【上】【唱】【独】【角】【戏】【,】【环】【顾】【四】【周】【—】【—】【倒】【了】【一】【大】【片】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【眼】【看】【着】【中】【考】【将】【至】【,】【同】【学】【们】【的】【精】【神】【却】【委】【靡】【不】【振】【。】【老】【班】【在】【班】【会】【课】【上】【一】【而】【再】【、】【再】【而】【三】【地】【强】【调】【:】【一】【定】【要】【早】【点】【儿】【睡】【觉】【!】【午】【休】【时】【间】【挺】【允】【足】【的】【,】【也】【可】【以】【睡】【个】【午】【觉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【态】【度】【很】【强】【硬】【,】【但】【我】【们】【知】【道】【,】【老】【师】【总】【是】【为】【我】【们】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【经】【过】【老】【师】【语】【重】【心】【长】【的】【劝】【说】【,】【听】【课】【情】【况】【大】【有】【改】【善】【。】【尽】【管】【课】【堂】【内】【容】【仍】【是】【乏】【味】【的】【做】【试】【卷】【、】【题】【型】【分】【析】【以】【及】【一】【些】【答】【题】【规】【范】【的】【讲】【解】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【与】【此】【同】【时】【,】【放】【学】【后】【的】【体】【育】【集】【训】【也】【必】【不】【可】【少】【。】【为】【了】【不】【在】【这】【一】【块】【儿】【拉】【分】【,】【毕】【业】【班】【的】【同】【学】【们】【都】【积】【极】【参】【加】【了】【。】【在】【那】【个】【红】【绿】【相】【间】【的】【塑】【胶】【场】【上】【,】【允】【盈】【着】【大】【家】【的】【笑】【声】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【强】【度】【的】【体】【能】【训】【练】【加】【上】【复】【习】【进】【度】【总】【慢】【于】【身】【边】【的】【同】【学】【,】【惶】【恐】【不】【安】【的】【情】【绪】【在】【我】【心】【里】【泛】【滥】【。】【每】【次】【与】【身】【在】【异】【地】【的】【爸】【爸】【、】【妈】【妈】【打】【电】【话】【时】【,】【总】【是】【不】【争】【气】【地】【“】【大】【珠】【小】【珠】【落】【玉】【盘】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【过】【,】【幸】【好】【有】【同】【学】【们】【的】【陪】【伴】【和】【鼓】【励】【。】【还】【记】【得】【老】【师】【说】【,】【3】【班】【的】【孩】【子】【都】【很】【乖】【;】【还】【记】【得】【我】【们】【班】【男】【生】【与】【1】【4】【班】【打】【篮】【球】【赛】【,】【要】【么】【赢】【得】【风】【光】【,】【要】【么】【输】【得】【很】【惨】【;】【还】【记】【得】【青】【青】【拼】【命】【三】【郎】【似】【的】【在】【校】【运】【会】【上】【跑】【1】【5】【0】【0】【米】【;】【还】【记】【得】【梁】【老】【大】【把】【“】【纯】【种】【”】【念】【成】【“】【杂】【种】【”】【…】【…】【这】【些】【都】【是】【属】【于】【那】【段】【时】【光】【的】【记】【忆】【,】【我】【将】【永】【远】【铭】【记】【。】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【窝】【在】【教】【室】【的】【一】【角】【,】【听】【着】【物】【理】【老】【师】【口】【若】【悬】【河】【地】【解】【析】【着】【力】【学】【,】【而】【我】【却】【没】【法】【全】【神】【贯】【注】【,】【我】【正】【琢】【磨】【着】【要】【不】【要】【将】【手】【里】【的】【这】【封】【信】【送】【到】【杨】【老】【师】【那】【里】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【封】【信】【早】【在】【几】【天】【前】【就】【写】【好】【了】【,】【只】【是】【我】【一】【直】【都】【在】【犹】【豫】【,】【一】【直】【都】【在】【害】【怕】【,】【我】【以】【前】【可】【没】【这】【么】【大】【胆】【地】【跟】【老】【师】【以】【这】【种】【特】【殊】【的】【方】【式】【交】【流】【过】【,】【虽】【打】【心】【底】【里】【是】【一】【万】【个】【想】【从】【杨】【老】【师】【那】【儿】【获】【取】【帮】【助】【,】【但】【胆】【怯】【仍】【然】【在】【我】【心】【里】【隐】【隐】【作】【怪】【,】【在】【好】【友】【的】【支】【持】【下】【,】【我】【蹑】【手】【蹑】【脚】【地】【往】【办】【公】【室】【的】【方】【向】【走】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【像】【一】【个】【没】【有】【依】【靠】【的】【孩】【子】【,】【缩】【在】【办】【公】【室】【的】【门】【旁】【,】【望】【着】【丝】【毫】【没】【有】【动】【静】【的】【门】【,】【心】【里】【失】【落】【极】【了】【,】【我】【边】【琢】【磨】【着】【边】【转】【身】【向】【教】【室】【方】【向】【走】【去】【,】【嘀】【咕】【着】【这】【信】【还】【是】【不】【送】【了】【吧】【!】【我】【准】【备】【离】【开】【,】【又】【有】【些】【不】【甘】【,】【但】【也】【只】【能】【无】【奈】【地】【摇】【摇】【头】【。】【突】【然】【,】【我】【听】【到】【一】【个】【熟】【悉】【的】【声】【音】【,】【急】【忙】【扭】【过】【头】【去】【,】【透】【过】【窗】【户】【看】【到】【原】【来】【是】【杨】【老】【师】【,】【他】【一】【只】【手】【拿】【着】【手】【机】【正】【在】【打】【电】【话】【,】【另】【一】【只】【手】【还】【忙】【着】【翻】【作】【业】【本】【,】【想】【必】【杨】【老】【师】【一】【定】【很】【忙】【。】【我】【在】【原】【地】【愣】【了】【几】【秒】【,】【又】【徘】【徊】【了】【片】【刻】【,】【然】【后】【怯】【怯】【地】【走】【进】【办】【公】【室】【将】【攥】【在】【手】【心】【里】【的】【信】【递】【向】【杨】【老】【师】【:】【“】【杨】【老】【师】【,】【我】【把】【自】【己】【在】【学】【习】【上】【的】【困】【惑】【写】【在】【了】【信】【上】【,】【恳】【求】【您】【能】【帮】【助】【我】【,】【并】【请】【您】【给】【我】【回】【信】【。】【”】【我】【吞】【吞】【吐】【吐】【地】【说】【完】【了】【这】【一】【切】【,】【不】【敢】【抬】【头】【看】【杨】【老】【师】【。】【“】【嗯】【,】【好】【的】【。】【”】【我】【竟】【没】【想】【到】【他】【如】【此】【爽】【快】【,】【顿】【时】【长】【舒】【了】【一】【口】【气】【,】【有】【一】【种】【释】【然】【的】【感】【觉】【,】【我】【急】【忙】【丢】【下】【一】【句】【“】【谢】【谢】【”】【,】【便】【飞】【快】【地】【跑】【出】【了】【办】【公】【室】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【回】【到】【座】【位】【时】【的】【心】【情】【只】【能】【用】【四】【个】【字】【形】【容】【:】【如】【坐】【针】【毡】【。】【以】【前】【从】【来】【没】【有】【这】【么】【紧】【张】【过】【,】【心】【里】【七】【上】【八】【下】【的】【,】【终】【于】【熬】【完】【了】【一】【节】【课】【,】【我】【正】【忐】【忑】【不】【安】【时】【,】【“】【张】【翠】【婷】【,】【过】【来】【一】【下】【”】【,】【班】【主】【任】【在】【后】【面】【喊】【道】【,】【我】【以】【为】【是】【作】【业】【错】【了】【,】【没】【想】【到】【老】【师】【竟】【说】【:】【“】【这】【是】【教】【导】【处】【杨】【主】【任】【给】【你】【的】【信】【。】【”】【我】【欣】【喜】【地】【接】【了】【过】【来】【,】【明】【显】【感】【觉】【手】【在】【微】【微】【发】【颤】【,】【久】【久】【都】【不】【敢】【拆】【开】【,】【不】【知】【道】【等】【待】【我】【的】【究】【竟】【是】【什】【么】【?】【当】【我】【拆】【开】【信】【后】【,】【天】【啊】【!】【写】【了】【足】【足】【的】【两】【页】【纸】【呢】【,】【这】【刚】【刚】【半】【小】【时】【的】【时】【间】【呀】【?】【杨】【老】【师】【一】【定】【把】【我】【这】【封】【信】【作】【为】【一】【个】【重】【要】【的】【事】【情】【来】【对】【待】【了】【,】【可】【他】【还】【有】【那】【么】【多】【的】【工】【作】【啊】【…】【…】【我】【想】【着】【、】【想】【着】【,】【顿】【时】【心】【里】【激】【起】【阵】【阵】【暖】【流】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【激】【动】【地】【将】【信】【读】【了】【十】【几】【遍】【,】【越】【看】【越】【觉】【得】【对】【我】【有】【启】【迪】【,】【不】【知】【是】【激】【动】【还】【是】【感】【动】【,】【我】【的】【泪】【还】【是】【控】【制】【不】【住】【地】【流】【下】【来】【,】【确】【实】【,】【杨】【老】【师】【这】【封】【信】【给】【了】【我】【莫】【大】【的】【鼓】【舞】【和】【支】【持】【,】【我】【恨】【不】【得】【蹦】【到】【杨】【老】【师】【面】【前】【对】【他】【真】【挚】【地】【说】【声】【:】【“】【谢】【谢】【!】【”】【这】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【知】【道】【我】【做】【了】【一】【件】【特】【别】【正】【确】【的】【事】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【望】【着】【眼】【前】【这】【醉】【人】【的】【夕】【阳】【,】【握】【着】【手】【中】【还】【是】【温】【热】【的】【信】【,】【向】【天】【空】【大】【声】【地】【喊】【道】【:】【“】【今】【天】【真】【好】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【刘】【辉】【)】沈阳工程教务处【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【森】【林】【要】【举】【行】【晚】【会】【啦】【!】【欢】【迎】【大】【家】【来】【报】【名】【参】【加】【。】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【猫】【头】【鹰】【小】【姐】【一】【边】【喊】【一】【边】【把】【海】【报】【发】【到】【小】【动】【物】【们】【的】【手】【上】【。】【瞬】【间】【,】【森】【林】【里】【就】【炸】【开】【了】【锅】【。】【胆】【子】【大】【的】【都】【在】【商】【量】【着】【表】【演】【什】【么】【节】【目】【。】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【范】【例】【欣】【赏】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【痕】【迹】【 】【路】【花】【雨】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【年】【,】【枯】【黄】【的】【落】【叶】【撒】【满】【大】【地】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【和】【她】【踏】【上】【了】【放】【学】【的】【路】【,】【我】【们】【彼】【此】【分】【享】【着】【自】【己】【的】【快】【乐】【。】【当】【我】【提】【到】【我】【的】【水】【品】【天】【鹅】【时】【,】【她】【的】【眼】【里】【透】【出】【羡】【慕】【的】【目】【光】【,】【我】【不】【由】【得】【自】【豪】【起】【来】【。】【水】【品】【天】【鹅】【是】【一】【个】【亲】【戚】【送】【我】【的】【,】【品】【莹】【透】【明】【,】【十】【分】【好】【看】【。】【水】【品】【天】【鹅】【具】【有】【十】【分】【深】【刻】【的】【意】【义】【,】【亲】【戚】【希】【望】【我】【拥】【有】【如】【水】【品】【般】【纯】【洁】【的】【心】【灵】【和】【天】【鹅】【般】【善】【良】【的】【性】【格】【。】【她】【开】【了】【口】【:】【“】【嗯】【,】【能】【不】【能】【把】【它】【带】【过】【来】【?】【我】【想】【看】【看】【…】【…】【”】【我】【满】【心】【欢】【喜】【地】【答】【应】【了】【,】【因】【为】【她】【是】【我】【最】【好】【的】【朋】【友】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【天】【,】【我】【把】【它】【带】【来】【了】【。】【水】【品】【天】【鹅】【,】【雍】【容】【华】【贵】【,】【在】【清】【晨】【微】【弱】【的】【阳】【光】【照】【射】【下】【,】【闪】【闪】【发】【亮】【。】【她】【一】【边】【感】【谢】【我】【,】【一】【边】【爱】【不】【释】【手】【地】【捧】【着】【水】【品】【天】【鹅】【,】【目】【不】【转】【睛】【地】【盯】【着】【,】【仿】【佛】【害】【怕】【天】【鹅】【随】【时】【在】【她】【眼】【前】【消】【失】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【说】【:】【“】【上】【课】【了】【,】【把】【它】【放】【回】【盒】【子】【里】【吧】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【说】【:】【“】【嗯】【,】【能】【不】【能】【借】【我】【一】【天】【,】【就】【一】【天】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【勉】【为】【其】【难】【地】【答】【应】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【事】【后】【多】【天】【,】【当】【我】【向】【她】【要】【回】【水】【品】【天】【鹅】【时】【,】【她】【支】【支】【吾】【吾】【地】【说】【:】【“】【对】【不】【起】【哦】【…】【…】【”】【随】【后】【拿】【出】【水】【品】【天】【鹅】【,】【指】【着】【一】【处】【并】【不】【明】【显】【的】【地】【方】【说】【:】【“】【你】【看】【,】【这】【里】【有】【一】【道】【裂】【痕】【…】【…】【”】【我】【夺】【过】【水】【品】【天】【鹅】【说】【:】【“】【肯】【定】【是】【你】【弄】【的】【吧】【!】【”】【我】【十】【分】【气】【愤】【,】【“】【除】【了】【你】【还】【会】【有】【谁】【?】【我】【恨】【你】【!】【”】【说】【罢】【,】【我】【跑】【回】【自】【己】【的】【座】【位】【上】【,】【忽】【然】【一】【种】【温】【热】【的】【液】【体】【贮】【存】【在】【我】【的】【眼】【眶】【,】【然】【后】【又】【缓】【缓】【落】【下】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【此】【,】【我】【们】【之】【间】【也】【多】【了】【一】【道】【永】【远】【无】【法】【逾】【越】【的】【“】【裂】【痕】【”】【。】【我】【开】【始】【有】【意】【躲】【开】【她】【,】【即】【使】【她】【来】【找】【我】【,】【我】【也】【无】【法】【面】【对】【一】【个】【这】【样】【的】【“】【好】【朋】【友】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【直】【到】【那】【天】【,】【我】【才】【意】【识】【到】【我】【错】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【天】【下】【午】【,】【狂】【风】【大】【作】【,】【疯】【了】【似】【的】【狂】【吹】【着】【树】【叶】【,】【树】【叶】【接】【连】【不】【断】【地】【坠】【落】【在】【地】【上】【。】【我】【顶】【着】【风】【孤】【零】【零】【地】【走】【在】【路】【上】【,】【她】【跟】【在】【我】【后】【面】【,】【却】【一】【直】【没】【有】【上】【前】【。】【当】【我】【加】【快】【了】【脚】【步】【时】【,】【她】【顶】【着】【风】【追】【了】【上】【来】【,】【用】【手】【拍】【拍】【我】【的】【肩】【膀】【,】【但】【我】【毫】【不】【客】【气】【地】【把】【她】【的】【手】【甩】【了】【下】【来】【。】【她】【加】【大】【了】【音】【量】【,】【说】【:】【“】【你】【听】【我】【说】【…】【…】【”】【“】【没】【什】【么】【好】【说】【的】【!】【”】【我】【迈】【着】【更】【大】【的】【步】【子】【,】【她】【吃】【力】【地】【追】【。】【“】【其】【实】【…】【…】【其】【实】【那】【道】【裂】【痕】【在】【你】【给】【我】【之】【前】【就】【已】【经】【有】【了】【,】【我】【怕】【你】【伤】【心】【,】【所】【以】【几】【天】【来】【一】【直】【在】【找】【师】【傅】【修】【补】【,】【或】【者】【买】【个】【新】【的】【,】【但】【一】【直】【没】【找】【到】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【无】【言】【以】【对】【,】【心】【头】【涌】【起】【朵】【朵】【浪】【花】【,】【汹】【涌】【澎】【湃】【地】【冲】【淡】【了】【我】【心】【田】【上】【的】【那】【道】【裂】【痕】【。】【我】【握】【住】【她】【的】【手】【,】【紧】【紧】【的】【。】【忽】【然】【一】【朵】【花】【儿】【开】【在】【了】【她】【手】【上】【,】【那】【是】【我】【的】【泪】【花】【。】【她】【笑】【着】【说】【:】【“】【别】【这】【样】【嘛】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【都】【怪】【我】【太】【鲁】【莽】【了】【!】【虽】【然】【我】【们】【之】【间】【的】【裂】【痕】【消】【失】【了】【,】【可】【是】【这】【件】【事】【在】【我】【的】【成】【长】【经】【历】【中】【烙】【下】【了】【深】【深】【的】【痕】【迹】【。】【我】【们】【伴】【着】【落】【叶】【,】【顶】【着】【狂】【风】【走】【向】【回】【家】【的】【路】【,】【仿】【佛】【路】【还】【很】【长】【很】【长】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【年】【,】【枯】【黄】【的】【落】【叶】【撒】【满】【大】【地】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【以】【水】【品】【天】【鹅】【为】【道】【具】【,】【以】【水】【品】【的】【纯】【洁】【比】【喻】【人】【的】【美】【好】【心】【灵】【,】【以】【天】【鹅】【的】【善】【良】【,】【比】【喻】【人】【的】【友】【善】【性】【格】【。】【夸】【水】【品】【,】【惹】【她】【羡】【慕】【,】【自】【我】【快】【乐】【,】【这】【是】【开】【端】【;】【看】【水】【品】【,】【爱】【不】【释】【手】【,】【自】【我】【陶】【醉】【,】【这】【是】【发】【展】【;】【借】【水】【品】【,】【发】【现】【裂】【痕】【,】【自】【我】【感】【伤】【,】【这】【是】【转】【折】【;】【还】【水】【品】【,】【修】【补】【裂】【痕】【,】【自】【我】【谴】【责】【;】【这】【是】【高】【潮】【,】【也】【是】【结】【局】【。】【巧】【借】【水】【品】【天】【鹅】【,】【以】【实】【写】【虚】【,】【以】【小】【见】【大】【,】【反】【映】【了】【“】【友】【情】【”】【这】【个】【主】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【法】【指】【导】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【给】【友】【情】【设】【置】【一】【个】【“】【道】【具】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【道】【具】【”】【指】【演】【戏】【或】【摄】【制】【影】【视】【片】【时】【表】【演】【用】【的】【器】【物】【,】【这】【里】【指】【传】【递】【友】【情】【的】【媒】【介】【物】【。】【在】【友】【情】【叙】【事】【文】【中】【进】【行】【“】【道】【具】【设】【置】【”】【,】【其】【目】【的】【就】【是】【让】【友】【情】【有】【一】【个】【情】【感】【的】【寄】【托】【物】【,】【让】【主】【人】【公】【睹】【物】【生】【情】【、】【借】【物】【抒】【情】【,】【从】【而】【使】【“】【情】【”】【生】【有】【其】【“】【凶】【”】【、】【“】【情】【”】【抒】【有】【其】【“】【依】【”】【。】【如】【范】【文】【中】【的】【“】【水】【品】【天】【鹅】【”】【就】【是】【见】【证】【“】【我】【”】【和】【“】【她】【”】【的】【友】【情】【道】【具】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【给】【友】【情】【铺】【设】【一】【道】【“】【情】【线】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【叙】【文】【写】【作】【,】【线】【索】【是】【关】【键】【。】【记】【叙】【文】【的】【线】【索】【有】【明】【暗】【之】【分】【,】【作】【正】【面】【描】【写】【的】【叫】【“】【明】【线】【”】【,】【作】【侧】【面】【描】【写】【的】【叫】【“】【暗】【线】【”】【。】【如】【范】【文】【中】【,】【明】【线】【是】【“】【水】【品】【天】【鹅】【”】【,】【暗】【线】【是】【“】【裂】【痕】【”】【,】【它】【们】【明】【暗】【交】【错】【,】【使】【全】【文】【前】【后】【连】【贯】【,】【结】【构】【严】【谨】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【给】【友】【情】【设】【计】【一】【点】【“】【细】【节】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【人】【叙】【事】【需】【要】【以】【丰】【富】【的】【细】【节】【感】【染】【人】【,】【但】【不】【少】【考】【场】【作】【文】【缺】【乏】【的】【就】【是】【打】【动】【人】【心】【的】【细】【节】【:】【或】【是】【一】【味】【叙】【述】【事】【件】【,】【将】【文】【章】【写】【成】【流】【水】【账】【;】【或】【是】【写】【到】【动】【情】【之】【处】【便】【轻】【描】【淡】【写】【,】【在】【读】【者】【泪】【欲】【出】【时】【戛】【然】【收】【笔】【;】【或】【是】【描】【写】【手】【法】【单】【一】【,】【不】【重】【视】【环】【境】【烘】【托】【和】【人】【物】【心】【理】【、】【神】【态】【的】【细】【致】【刻】【画】【。】【如】【范】【文】【中】【,】【对】【“】【她】【”】【多】【处】【神】【态】【的】【描】【绘】【,】【传】【神】【动】【人】【,】【惹】【人】【情】【思】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【.】【给】【友】【情】【记】【录】【一】【段】【“】【过】【程】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【事】【的】【文】【章】【,】【主】【要】【是】【通】【过】【对】【事】【件】【的】【叙】【述】【来】【反】【映】【人】【情】【世】【故】【和】【人】【物】【精】【神】【风】【貌】【,】【而】【这】【一】【点】【主】【要】【是】【在】【事】【件】【经】【过】【中】【折】【射】【出】【来】【的】【。】【所】【以】【,】【对】【于】【事】【情】【的】【“】【经】【过】【”】【这】【部】【分】【就】【应】【当】【详】【写】【,】【“】【起】【因】【”】【“】【结】【果】【”】【部】【分】【则】【要】【略】【写】【。】【在】【写】【“】【经】【过】【”】【时】【,】【最】【能】【说】【明】【问】【题】【,】【最】【能】【体】【现】【中】【心】【的】【情】【节】【则】【更】【应】【详】【写】【,】【其】【余】【说】【明】【起】【承】【接】【、】【过】【渡】【和】【铺】【垫】【作】【用】【的】【内】【容】【则】【略】【写】【。】【如】【范】【文】【,】【详】【写】【彼】【此】【间】【的】【误】【会】【,】【曲】【折】【有】【致】【,】【增】【加】【了】【阅】【读】【情】【趣】【。】沈阳工程教务处【我】【重】【重】【地】【点】【点】【了】【头】【。】【心】【里】【便】【盘】【算】【开】【了】【:】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【嘿】【嘿】【!】【机】【会】【来】【了】【!】【等】【妈】【妈】【走】【后】【,】【我】【迫】【<】【u】【>】【作】【文】【h】【t】【t】【p】【:】【/】【/】【w】【w】【w】【.】【z】【u】【o】【w】【e】【n】【8】【.】【c】【o】【m】【<】【/】【u】【>】【不】【及】【待】【地】【跑】【向】【洗】【漱】【台】【,】【拿】【起】【洗】【面】【奶】【猛】【灌】【了】【一】【大】【口】【。】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【哇】【!】【这】【什】【么】【东】【西】【呀】【?】【好】【难】【喝】【!】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【我】【惊】【叫】【起】【来】【,】【这】【洗】【面】【奶】【不】【仅】【涩】【,】【还】【又】【苦】【又】【油】【。】【真】【是】【说】【不】【出】【的】【滋】【味】【!】

【因】【为】【一】【般】【情】【况】【下】【,】【周】【五】【的】【这】【时】【间】【我】【只】【能】【用】【来】【写】【作】【业】【。】【如】【果】【我】【去】【给】【她】【过】【生】【日】【就】【不】【用】【写】【作】【业】【了】【!】【还】【可】【以】【好】【好】【地】【玩】【!】【我】【一】【回】【家】【,】【就】【把】【这】【个】【消】【息】【告】【诉】【了】【爸】【爸】【。】【可】【爸】【爸】【说】【,】【周】【五】【要】【开】【家】【长】【会】【,】【要】【去】【的】【话】【只】【能】【我】【自】【己】【坐】【公】【交】【回】【去】【,】【但】【我】【心】【里】【就】【没】【个】【底】【,】【我】【可】【没】【有】【自】【己】【坐】【公】【交】【回】【过】【家】【,】【也】【害】【怕】【像】【新】【闻】【里】【报】【道】【的】【那】【样】【,】【被】【偷】【了】【东】【西】【,】【万】【一】【有】【人】【把】【我】【拐】【走】【了】【怎】【么】【办】【。】【但】【是】【我】【也】【始】【终】【期】【待】【着】【这】【天】【的】【到】【来】【,】【不】【知】【道】【自】【己】【一】【个】【人】【参】【加】【生】【日】【会】【是】【个】【怎】【样】【的】【感】【受】【。】沈阳工程教务处【家】【乡】【的】【小】【溪】【绿】【树】【成】【荫】【,】【环】【境】【优】【美】【,】【我】【常】【常】【到】【溪】【边】【玩】【耍】【。】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【诸】【位】【,】【你】【听】【说】【过】【《】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【》】【的】【故】【事】【吗】【?】【这】【故】【事】【可】【真】【是】【撼】【天】【地】【、】【泣】【鬼】【神】【哪】【。】【《】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【》】【是】【元】【代】【纪】【君】【祥】【创】【作】【的】【杂】【剧】【,】【依】【据】【《】【左】【传】【》】【《】【史】【记】【·】【赵】【世】【家】【》】【等】【史】【书】【所】【记】【载】【的】【两】【个】【家】【族】【矛】【盾】【斗】【争】【的】【历】【史】【衍】【生】【而】【成】【,】【悲】【怆】【凄】【切】【,】【驰】【名】【中】【外】【,】【被】【称】【为】【中】【国】【文】【学】【史】【上】【的】【《】【哈】【姆】【雷】【特】【》】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【话】【说】【春】【秋】【时】【期】【的】【晋】【国】【有】【两】【个】【重】【臣】【,】【一】【个】【是】【文】【臣】【赵】【盾】【,】【对】【朝】【廷】【忠】【心】【耿】【耿】【,】【另】【一】【个】【是】【武】【臣】【屠】【岸】【贾】【(】【读】【“】【古】【”】【)】【,】【他】【和】【赵】【盾】【不】【和】【,】【一】【心】【想】【害】【死】【赵】【盾】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【屠】【岸】【贾】【挖】【空】【心】【思】【,】【设】【计】【陷】【害】【赵】【盾】【。】【晋】【国】【国】【君】【中】【了】【计】【,】【以】【为】【赵】【盾】【是】【奸】【臣】【,】【便】【下】【令】【将】【赵】【盾】【全】【家】【包】【括】【仆】【人】【3】【0】【0】【多】【人】【全】【部】【杀】【了】【。】【只】【有】【赵】【盾】【的】【儿】【媳】【妇】【庄】【姬】【因】【为】【是】【公】【主】【,】【没】【有】【被】【杀】【,】【被】【囚】【禁】【在】【皇】【宫】【里】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【时】【庄】【姬】【已】【经】【怀】【孕】【了】【,】【不】【久】【在】【皇】【宫】【罩】【生】【了】【一】【个】【儿】【子】【,】【叫】【“】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【”】【,】【她】【希】【望】【孩】【子】【长】【大】【后】【能】【帮】【赵】【家】【报】【仇】【雪】【恨】【。】【屠】【岸】【贾】【知】【道】【公】【主】【生】【了】【孩】【子】【,】【就】【派】【人】【守】【住】【宫】【门】【,】【想】【等】【孤】【儿】【满】【月】【时】【把】【他】【杀】【死】【,】【以】【除】【后】【患】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【赵】【家】【门】【客】【、】【赵】【盾】【生】【前】【好】【友】【程】【婴】【是】【医】【生】【,】【为】【了】【救】【出】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【,】【就】【背】【着】【药】【箱】【假】【装】【来】【给】【公】【主】【看】【病】【。】【公】【主】【将】【婴】【儿】【托】【付】【给】【程】【婴】【后】【,】【自】【缢】【而】【死】【。】【程】【婴】【强】【忍】【悲】【痛】【把】【婴】【儿】【藏】【在】【药】【箱】【里】【,】【想】【把】【婴】【儿】【偷】【偷】【带】【出】【皇】【宫】【。】【可】【是】【在】【宫】【门】【口】【,】【却】【被】【守】【门】【的】【将】【军】【韩】【厥】【搜】【了】【出】【来】【。】【韩】【厥】【也】【很】【同】【情】【赵】【盾】【一】【家】【,】【就】【放】【走】【了】【程】【婴】【和】【孤】【儿】【,】【自】【己】【拔】【剑】【自】【杀】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【屠】【岸】【贾】【知】【道】【孤】【儿】【被】【救】【走】【以】【后】【,】【下】【令】【:】【如】【果】【3】【天】【内】【没】【有】【人】【交】【出】【孤】【儿】【,】【就】【把】【晋】【国】【所】【有】【1】【岁】【以】【下】【的】【婴】【儿】【都】【杀】【死】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【程】【婴】【和】【赵】【盾】【的】【另】【一】【个】【好】【朋】【友】【公】【孙】【杵】【臼】【紧】【急】【商】【议】【后】【,】【他】【们】【认】【为】【,】【只】【有】【一】【个】【人】【肯】【舍】【出】【性】【命】【,】【带】【着】【一】【个】【婴】【儿】【自】【投】【罗】【网】【,】【才】【能】【拯】【救】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【和】【晋】【国】【其】【他】【婴】【儿】【。】【正】【好】【程】【婴】【自】【己】【有】【一】【个】【孩】【子】【,】【和】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【差】【不】【多】【大】【。】【于】【是】【程】【婴】【就】【忍】【痛】【把】【自】【己】【的】【孩】【子】【交】【给】【公】【孙】【杵】【臼】【,】【然】【后】【准】【备】【扮】【作】【告】【密】【者】【,】【去】【向】【屠】【岸】【贾】【告】【发】【公】【孙】【杵】【臼】【私】【藏】【着】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【。】【公】【孙】【杵】【臼】【慨】【然】【应】【允】【:】【“】【我】【老】【夫】【不】【为】【这】【惊】【世】【冤】【案】【搭】【上】【这】【条】【老】【命】【,】【天】【理】【不】【公】【啊】【!】【”】【临】【行】【前】【,】【程】【婴】【抱】【了】【抱】【自】【己】【的】【儿】【子】【,】【失】【声】【痛】【哭】【:】【“】【我】【的】【儿】【啊】【,】【爹】【爹】【实】【在】【对】【不】【住】【你】【呀】【…】【…】【”】【然】【后】【毅】【然】【扭】【头】【离】【开】【。】【公】【孙】【杵】【臼】【挥】【泪】【作】【别】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【屠】【岸】【贾】【以】【为】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【已】【经】【被】【杀】【,】【非】【常】【高】【兴】【,】【他】【自】【己】【没】【有】【儿】【子】【,】【就】【认】【程】【婴】【的】【儿】【子】【(】【其】【实】【这】【才】【是】【真】【正】【的】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【)】【为】【义】【子】【,】【教】【授】【他】【武】【功】【。】【晋】【国】【的】【人】【都】【认】【为】【是】【因】【程】【婴】【告】【密】【而】【致】【使】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【受】【害】【,】【都】【骂】【他】【忘】【恩】【负】【义】【。】【程】【婴】【却】【毫】【不】【辩】【解】【,】【忍】【辱】【负】【重】【,】【尽】【心】【抚】【养】【着】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【5】【年】【后】【,】【晋】【国】【另】【一】【位】【忠】【臣】【大】【将】【魏】【绛】【从】【边】【关】【回】【来】【,】【听】【说】【了】【赵】【盾】【全】【家】【被】【杀】【和】【程】【婴】【告】【密】【献】【出】【孤】【儿】【的】【事】【,】【非】【常】【生】【气】【,】【就】【把】【程】【婴】【痛】【打】【了】【一】【顿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【程】【婴】【也】【不】【吭】【声】【,】【他】【被】【魏】【绛】【打】【得】【越】【狠】【,】【心】【里】【就】【越】【坦】【然】【,】【因】【为】【魏】【绛】【打】【得】【越】【厉】【害】【,】【就】【越】【说】【明】【他】【越】【痛】【恨】【奸】【臣】【,】【程】【婴】【希】【望】【他】【能】【帮】【助】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【报】【仇】【。】【程】【婴】【试】【探】【出】【魏】【绛】【的】【忠】【心】【后】【,】【就】【把】【自】【己】【舍】【弃】【亲】【生】【儿】【子】【、】【公】【孙】【杵】【臼】【舍】【弃】【性】【命】【救】【护】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【的】【事】【告】【诉】【了】【魏】【绛】【。】【魏】【绛】【很】【感】【动】【,】【答】【应】【帮】【助】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【报】【仇】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【回】【家】【以】【后】【,】【程】【婴】【把】【当】【年】【赵】【家】【的】【冤】【情】【画】【成】【图】【面】【告】【诉】【了】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【。】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【这】【才】【知】【道】【了】【自】【己】【的】【身】【世】【,】【他】【义】【愤】【填】【膺】【,】【大】【声】【哭】【喊】【:】【“】【不】【报】【这】【深】【仇】【大】【恨】【,】【我】【誓】【不】【为】【人】【!】【”】【程】【婴】【忙】【劝】【告】【他】【:】【“】【屠】【岸】【贾】【兵】【权】【在】【手】【,】【野】【心】【很】【大】【,】【不】【能】【打】【草】【惊】【蛇】【。】【上】【卿】【魏】【绛】【已】【经】【向】【晋】【悼】【公】【奏】【明】【你】【赵】【家】【的】【冤】【情】【,】【并】【准】【备】【除】【了】【他】【,】【为】【你】【赵】【家】【报】【仇】【雪】【恨】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【天】【,】【程】【婴】【带】【着】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【去】【见】【魏】【绛】【,】【三】【个】【人】【商】【量】【好】【,】【在】【大】【街】【上】【由】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【做】【内】【应】【,】【最】【终】【抓】【住】【了】【屠】【岸】【贾】【。】【屠】【岸】【贾】【这】【才】【知】【道】【,】【自】【己】【养】【了】【2】【0】【年】【的】【义】【子】【,】【正】【是】【幸】【存】【下】【来】【的】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【晋】【悼】【公】【为】【赵】【盾】【一】【家】【平】【反】【昭】【雪】【,】【斩】【了】【屠】【岸】【贾】【,】【为】【韩】【厥】【、】【公】【孙】【杵】【臼】【立】【碑】【表】【示】【哀】【思】【。】【屠】【岸】【贾】【临】【死】【前】【疯】【狂】【大】【喊】【:】【“】【哈】【哈】【哈】【…】【…】【报】【应】【啊】【报】【应】【!】【”】【程】【婴】【回】【应】【:】【“】【奸】【臣】【死】【有】【余】【辜】【,】【老】【天】【睁】【眼】【啦】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【程】【婴】【舍】【儿】【救】【孤】【,】【终】【于】【助】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【报】【了】【血】【海】【深】【仇】【。】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【赡】【养】【程】【婴】【到】【老】【,】【尽】【了】【自】【己】【的】【孝】【心】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【正】【是】【:】【舍】【生】【为】【义】【感】【世】【人】【,】【邪】【恶】【必】【亡】【正】【气】【存】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【以】【评】【传】【形】【式】【来】【叙】【述】【故】【事】【,】【体】【裁】【新】【颖】【,】【内】【容】【丰】【富】【生】【动】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【展】【开】【了】【丰】【富】【的】【想】【象】【,】【运】【用】【语】【言】【描】【写】【、】【行】【动】【描】【写】【和】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【刻】【画】【了】【个】【性】【鲜】【明】【的】【人】【物】【形】【象】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【入】【情】【入】【理】【的】【虚】【构】【,】【是】【一】【种】【写】【作】【技】【巧】【,】【能】【使】【得】【作】【文】【内】【容】【摇】【曳】【多】【姿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【孟】【宪】【法】【)】沈阳工程教务处【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【病】【文】【展】【示】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【暖】【暖】【的】【豆】【浆】【 】【牵】【动】【我】【的】【情】【思】【 】【庞】【梅】【欣】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【中】【阳】【台】【上】【有】【一】【方】【陈】【旧】【土】【气】【的】【石】【磨】【,】【与】【室】【内】【现】【代】【的】【装】【修】【风】【格】【显】【得】【格】【格】【不】【入】【,】【可】【每】【每】【闻】【到】【那】【股】【从】【阳】【台】【飘】【来】【的】【甜】【香】【却】【牵】【动】【着】【我】【的】【情】【思】【。】【(】【倒】【叙】【开】【头】【,】【巧】【用】【对】【比】【,】【巧】【妙】【地】【引】【起】【下】【文】【。】【但】【最】【后】【一】【句】【表】【意】【不】【准】【,】【需】【要】【稍】【作】【修】【改】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【每】【天】【清】【晨】【我】【都】【会】【喝】【到】【奶】【奶】【为】【我】【磨】【的】【豆】【浆】【。】【看】【着】【白】【花】【花】【的】【豆】【浆】【顺】【着】【石】【磨】【向】【下】【流】【淌】【,】【那】【时】【觉】【得】【豆】【浆】【是】【天】【底】【下】【最】【美】【味】【可】【口】【的】【饮】【品】【,】【喝】【下】【去】【真】【是】【美】【滋】【滋】【的】【。】【(】【“】【清】【晨】【”】【“】【那】【时】【”】【时】【间】【交】【代】【不】【确】【切】【,】【使】【得】【叙】【事】【不】【明】【确】【,】【并】【且】【其】【语】【言】【表】【达】【情】【味】【不】【浓】【,】【缺】【乏】【感】【染】【力】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【每】【天】【醒】【来】【,】【首】【先】【飘】【进】【来】【的】【一】【定】【是】【豆】【浆】【浓】【郁】【的】【香】【味】【,】【(】【“】【浓】【郁】【”】【一】【词】【,】【表】【意】【不】【准】【,】【改】【为】【“】【淡】【淡】【”】【为】【宜】【。】【)】【似】【乎】【闻】【着】【这】【股】【香】【气】【,】【一】【天】【都】【会】【精】【神】【百】【倍】【。】【(】【此】【句】【叙】【写】【内】【容】【与】【后】【文】【关】【联】【不】【大】【,】【应】【移】【到】【第】【二】【段】【为】【宜】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【表】【意】【更】【顺】【畅】【。】【)】【一】【天】【,】【我】【刚】【睡】【醒】【,】【就】【看】【到】【一】【碗】【豆】【浆】【摆】【在】【餐】【桌】【上】【。】【我】【轻】【轻】【地】【抿】【了】【一】【口】【,】【依】【旧】【是】【那】【般】【香】【甜】【,】【但】【却】【多】【了】【一】【股】【味】【道】【。】【我】【去】【找】【奶】【奶】【,】【想】【知】【道】【这】【股】【味】【道】【来】【源】【的】【时】【候】【,】【却】【发】【现】【,】【奶】【奶】【在】【操】【作】【妈】【妈】【买】【的】【豆】【浆】【机】【。】【(】【时】【间】【交】【代】【不】【明】【,】【文】【中】【缺】【少】【必】【要】【交】【代】【,】【使】【得】【上】【下】【文】【衔】【接】【不】【紧】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【没】【有】【问】【怪】【味】【的】【来】【源】【,】【抓】【起】【书】【包】【走】【出】【门】【去】【,】【经】【过】【阳】【台】【时】【又】【看】【见】【了】【那】【方】【石】【磨】【,】【奶】【奶】【不】【再】【用】【石】【磨】【了】【,】【我】【也】【喝】【不】【到】【那】【样】【香】【甜】【的】【豆】【浆】【了】【。】【(】【心】【理】【活】【动】【描】【写】【欠】【细】【腻】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【缺】【乏】【生】【动】【性】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【上】【午】【的】【课】【,】【我】【一】【个】【字】【也】【没】【听】【进】【去】【。】【(】【时】【间】【交】【代】【不】【明】【,】【叙】【事】【不】【清】【楚】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【放】【学】【后】【,】【我】【无】【精】【打】【采】【地】【回】【到】【家】【中】【,】【奶】【奶】【向】【爷】【爷】【嘟】【囔】【着】【:】【“】【这】【豆】【浆】【机】【我】【还】【真】【不】【会】【用】【,】【你】【快】【来】【看】【看】【。】【还】【有】【,】【我】【早】【上】【在】【磨】【豆】【浆】【时】【放】【了】【把】【核】【桃】【,】【女】【儿】【说】【那】【东】【西】【补】【脑】【,】【可】【丫】【头】【好】【像】【不】【喜】【欢】【,】【早】【上】【才】【喝】【一】【口】【就】【不】【喝】【了】【。】【好】【像】【有】【些】【不】【高】【兴】【呢】【!】【”】【我】【顿】【时】【惊】【呆】【了】【,】【不】【知】【是】【喜】【是】【愁】【。】【(】【缺】【少】【必】【要】【交】【代】【,】【叙】【事】【不】【连】【贯】【,】【并】【且】【内】【心】【情】【感】【表】【达】【欠】【准】【确】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【天】【清】【晨】【,】【奶】【奶】【又】【在】【磨】【豆】【浆】【,】【一】【盘】【核】【桃】【放】【在】【一】【边】【可】【却】【未】【动】【过】【。】【石】【磨】【磨】【着】【豆】【浆】【,】【而】【我】【在】【磨】【着】【奶】【奶】【的】【心】【。】【(】【一】【语】【双】【关】【,】【意】【蕴】【无】【穷】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【走】【过】【去】【,】【奶】【奶】【仍】【磨】【着】【豆】【浆】【,】【额】【间】【冒】【出】【的】【汗】【珠】【慢】【慢】【滑】【落】【。】【我】【用】【手】【中】【的】【纸】【巾】【小】【心】【抹】【去】【奶】【奶】【额】【头】【的】【汗】【水】【并】【帮】【着】【奶】【奶】【推】【动】【笨】【重】【的】【木】【把】【手】【,】【她】【吃】【惊】【地】【望】【了】【望】【我】【,】【竟】【傻】【傻】【地】【笑】【了】【…】【…】【(】【“】【推】【动】【、】【笨】【重】【、】【傻】【傻】【”】【等】【词】【,】【用】【语】【不】【当】【,】【描】【述】【欠】【精】【准】【,】【描】【写】【不】【生】【动】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【情】【韵】【大】【打】【折】【扣】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【暖】【暖】【的】【豆】【浆】【总】【是】【牵】【动】【我】【的】【情】【思】【。】【(】【结】【尾】【要】【总】【收】【全】【文】【,】【升】【华】【中】【心】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【指】【导】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【选】【材】【真】【实】【,】【主】【旨】【鲜】【明】【,】【情】【感】【真】【切】【,】【然】【而】【被】【定】【为】【三】【类】【文】【,】【其】【主】【要】【原】【因】【就】【是】【要】【素】【交】【代】【不】【明】【,】【事】【件】【过】【程】【不】【清】【,】【描】【写】【不】【够】【具】【体】【生】【动】【。】【主】【要】【表】【现】【在】【如】【下】【方】【面】【:】【一】【、】【未】【能】【清】【楚】【地】【交】【代】【时】【空】【,】【使】【得】【思】【路】【不】【明】【晰】【,】【文】【意】【表】【达】【不】【畅】【;】【二】【、】【有】【些】【句】【子】【上】【下】【文】【衔】【接】【不】【紧】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【结】【构】【不】【紧】【凑】【、】【不】【完】【整】【;】【三】【、】【对】【于】【事】【件】【的】【经】【过】【叙】【述】【过】【于】【简】【略】【,】【缺】【少】【生】【动】【的】【描】【写】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【中】【心】【不】【突】【出】【。】【另】【外】【,】【有】【些】【语】【言】【过】【于】【粗】【糙】【,】【用】【词】【不】【准】【,】【缺】【少】【美】【感】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【生】【动】【性】【大】【打】【折】【扣】【。】【此】【文】【若】【在】【以】【上】【方】【面】【反】【复】【推】【敲】【,】【精】【心】【锤】【炼】【,】【定】【会】【臻】【于】【完】【美】【,】【分】【外】【出】【彩】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【作】【文】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【暖】【暖】【的】【豆】【浆】【 】【牵】【动】【我】【的】【情】【思】【 】【庞】【梅】【欣】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【中】【阳】【台】【上】【有】【一】【方】【陈】【旧】【土】【气】【的】【石】【磨】【,】【与】【室】【内】【现】【代】【的】【装】【修】【风】【格】【显】【得】【格】【格】【不】【入】【,】【可】【每】【每】【闻】【到】【从】【阳】【台】【飘】【来】【的】【豆】【浆】【清】【香】【,】【心】【中】【便】【涌】【起】【暖】【暖】【的】【热】【流】【,】【总】【会】【牵】【动】【着】【我】【那】【绵】【绵】【的】【情】【思】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【还】【是】【在】【上】【小】【学】【时】【,】【每】【天】【醒】【来】【我】【一】【定】【会】【闻】【到】【淡】【淡】【的】【豆】【浆】【清】【香】【,】【似】【乎】【闻】【着】【这】【股】【香】【味】【,】【从】【早】【到】【晚】【都】【会】【精】【神】【百】【倍】【。】【每】【天】【清】【晨】【都】【会】【喝】【到】【奶】【奶】【为】【我】【磨】【的】【豆】【浆】【,】【看】【着】【白】【花】【花】【的】【豆】【浆】【顺】【着】【石】【磨】【向】【下】【流】【淌】【,】【奶】【奶】【对】【我】【的】【爱】【也】【一】【缕】【缕】【注】【入】【我】【的】【心】【田】【。】【那】【时】【记】【忆】【中】【最】【甜】【的】【不】【是】【糖】【,】【而】【是】【那】【暖】【暖】【的】【豆】【浆】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【初】【中】【后】【的】【一】【天】【早】【晨】【,】【我】【刚】【睡】【醒】【,】【就】【看】【到】【一】【碗】【豆】【浆】【摆】【在】【餐】【桌】【上】【。】【我】【轻】【轻】【地】【抿】【了】【一】【口】【,】【依】【旧】【是】【那】【般】【香】【甜】【,】【但】【却】【多】【了】【一】【股】【说】【不】【出】【的】【味】【道】【。】【我】【去】【找】【奶】【奶】【,】【想】【明】【白】【这】【股】【怪】【味】【的】【缘】【由】【,】【只】【见】【奶】【奶】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【操】【作】【着】【妈】【妈】【买】【的】【豆】【浆】【机】【。】【以】【前】【奶】【奶】【不】【总】【说】【豆】【浆】【机】【做】【的】【不】【如】【自】【己】【磨】【的】【味】【道】【好】【吗】【?】【今】【天】【她】【却】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【没】【有】【再】【追】【问】【出】【现】【怪】【味】【的】【原】【因】【,】【抓】【起】【书】【包】【走】【出】【门】【去】【,】【经】【过】【阳】【台】【时】【又】【看】【见】【了】【那】【方】【石】【磨】【,】【仿】【佛】【上】【面】【还】【有】【水】【滴】【,】【阳】【光】【的】【反】【射】【刺】【得】【我】【眼】【睛】【生】【疼】【,】【奶】【奶】【不】【再】【用】【石】【磨】【了】【,】【我】【再】【也】【喝】【不】【到】【那】【样】【香】【甜】【的】【豆】【浆】【了】【。】【其】【实】【我】【知】【道】【,】【我】【是】【怕】【奶】【奶】【那】【份】【爱】【会】【随】【着】【时】【光】【淡】【去】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【天】【一】【上】【午】【的】【课】【,】【我】【一】【个】【字】【也】【没】【听】【进】【去】【。】【无】【精】【打】【采】【地】【回】【到】【家】【中】【,】【一】【个】【人】【独】【自】【闷】【在】【书】【房】【里】【,】【情】【绪】【低】【落】【得】【如】【秋】【风】【里】【飘】【飞】【的】【黄】【叶】【。】【蓦】【然】【听】【到】【门】【外】【的】【奶】【奶】【向】【爷】【爷】【嘟】【囔】【着】【:】【“】【这】【豆】【浆】【机】【我】【还】【真】【不】【会】【用】【,】【你】【快】【来】【看】【看】【。】【还】【有】【,】【我】【早】【上】【在】【磨】【豆】【浆】【时】【放】【了】【把】【核】【桃】【,】【女】【儿】【说】【那】【东】【西】【补】【脑】【,】【可】【丫】【头】【好】【像】【不】【喜】【欢】【,】【早】【上】【才】【喝】【一】【口】【就】【不】【喝】【了】【。】【可】【能】【是】【味】【儿】【不】【正】【,】【也】【可】【能】【没】【有】【用】【石】【磨】【磨】【的】【味】【道】【好】【,】【要】【不】【她】【怎】【么】【会】【好】【像】【有】【些】【不】【高】【兴】【呢】【!】【”】【我】【顿】【时】【惊】【呆】【了】【,】【为】【自】【己】【莫】【名】【的】【忧】【伤】【而】【后】【悔】【,】【原】【来】【奶】【奶】【依】【然】【对】【我】【倾】【注】【她】【全】【部】【的】【爱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【天】【清】【晨】【,】【奶】【奶】【又】【在】【磨】【豆】【浆】【,】【一】【盘】【核】【桃】【放】【在】【一】【边】【却】【未】【曾】【动】【过】【。】【石】【磨】【磨】【着】【豆】【浆】【,】【而】【我】【在】【磨】【着】【奶】【奶】【的】【心】【。】【我】【轻】【手】【轻】【脚】【地】【走】【过】【去】【,】【奶】【奶】【仍】【在】【专】【心】【致】【志】【地】【磨】【着】【豆】【浆】【。】【她】【微】【喘】【着】【,】【显】【然】【有】【些】【吃】【力】【了】【,】【额】【间】【冒】【出】【的】【汗】【珠】【慢】【慢】【滑】【落】【。】【我】【用】【手】【中】【的】【纸】【巾】【小】【心】【抹】【去】【奶】【奶】【额】【头】【的】【汗】【水】【,】【并】【帮】【着】【奶】【奶】【摇】【动】【着】【笨】【拙】【的】【木】【把】【手】【,】【她】【吃】【惊】【地】【看】【了】【看】【我】【,】【然】【后】【甜】【甜】【地】【笑】【了】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【无】【数】【次】【闻】【到】【街】【头】【的】【豆】【浆】【香】【味】【,】【却】【怎】【么】【也】【比】【不】【上】【奶】【奶】【磨】【的】【豆】【浆】【那】【般】【甜】【香】【。】【正】【是】【那】【份】【沉】【甸】【甸】【的】【爱】【,】【让】【这】【淡】【淡】【的】【豆】【浆】【滋】【味】【醇】【厚】【,】【回】【味】【无】【穷】【。】【无】【论】【何】【时】【何】【地】【,】【那】【暖】【暖】【的】【豆】【浆】【总】【是】【牵】【动】【我】【浓】【浓】【的】【情】【思】【,】【让】【我】【想】【念】【到】【永】【远】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【评】【点】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【倒】【叙】【开】【篇】【,】【引】【起】【下】【文】【,】【接】【着】【以】【“】【豆】【浆】【”】【为】【线】【,】【追】【忆】【儿】【时】【喝】【豆】【浆】【的】【感】【受】【与】【滋】【味】【,】【为】【下】【文】【作】【铺】【垫】【,】【然】【后】【详】【写】【因】【豆】【浆】【味】【道】【而】【引】【发】【的】【一】【次】【误】【会】【,】【真】【切】【展】【现】【奶】【奶】【的】【爱】【孙】【之】【情】【,】【最】【后】【总】【收】【全】【文】【,】【升】【华】【中】【心】【,】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【地】【抒】【发】【了】【我】【对】【奶】【奶】【的】【敬】【爱】【与】【感】【激】【之】【情】【。】【修】【改】【之】【后】【,】【要】【素】【分】【明】【,】【脉】【络】【明】【晰】【,】【叙】【事】【清】【楚】【,】【描】【写】【生】【动】【,】【详】【略】【得】【当】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【结】【构】【紧】【凑】【,】【中】【心】【突】【出】【,】【读】【之】【情】【感】【浓】【郁】【,】【感】【人】【至】【深】【,】【回】【味】【无】【穷】【。】

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