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2019年10月19日 04:42

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【题】【目】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【每】【个】【人】【对】【于】【成】【功】【的】【标】【准】【都】【不】【一】【样】【,】【虽】【然】【我】【的】【名】【字】【和】【我】【的】【自】【身】【条】【件】【有】【很】【大】【差】【距】【,】【但】【我】【心】【中】【时】【刻】【拥】【有】【阳】【光】【,】【谁】【又】【能】【说】【我】【不】【是】【真】【的】【阳】【光】【呢】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【家】【还】【记】【得】【这】【位】【来】【自】【于】【哈】【尔】【滨】【的】【盲】【人】【歌】【手】【吗】【?】【还】【在】【襁】【褓】【中】【的】【他】【就】【因】【病】【双】【目】【失】【明】【,】【从】【此】【陷】【入】【了】【黑】【暗】【的】【深】【渊】【,】【一】【直】【到】【今】【天】【,】【在】【他】【的】【头】【脑】【中】【仍】【没】【有】【任】【何】【色】【彩】【的】【概】【念】【。】【他】【,】【就】【是】【近】【几】【年】【享】【誉】【歌】【坛】【的】【盲】【人】【歌】【手】【—】【—】【杨】【光】【。】【多】【年】【以】【来】【,】【他】【用】【发】【自】【肺】【腑】【的】【音】【乐】【来】【诠】【释】【自】【己】【的】【内】【心】【世】【界】【。】【虽】【然】【他】【看】【不】【到】【光】【明】【,】【也】【无】【法】【分】【辨】【各】【种】【色】【彩】【,】【但】【他】【能】【以】【心】【中】【的】【乐】【观】【寻】【找】【色】【彩】【,】【用】【美】【妙】【的】【音】【符】【描】【绘】【着】【多】【彩】【的】【生】【活】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【述】【文】【字】【勾】【起】【了】【你】【什】【么】【样】【的】【回】【忆】【和】【思】【绪】【,】【又】【引】【发】【了】【你】【怎】【样】【的】【思】【考】【和】【联】【想】【?】【请】【自】【拟】【题】【目】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【不】【少】【于】【6】【0】【0】【字】【的】【文】【章】【,】【文】【体】【不】【限】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【我】【的】【脑】【海】【中】【,】【浮】【现】【出】【了】【期】【末】【考】【试】【前】【的】【情】【形】【:】【考】【分】【这】【一】【张】【无】【情】【的】【网】【罩】【在】【了】【我】【们】【每】【一】【个】【人】【的】【身】【上】【,】【包】【括】【同】【学】【、】【老】【师】【和】【家】【长】【。】【那】【几】【天】【,】【教】【室】【内】【同】【学】【们】【的】【欢】【笑】【消】【失】【得】【无】【影】【无】【踪】【,】【老】【师】【上】【课】【也】【不】【再】【讲】【一】【些】【令】【我】【们】【捧】【腹】【大】【笑】【的】【笑】【话】【,】【而】【是】【竭】【力】【地】【指】【导】【我】【们】【如】【何】【复】【习】【。】【而】【我】【呢】【,】【更】【是】【埋】【头】【于】【那】【令】【我】【窒】【息】【的】【题】【海】【之】【中】【,】【往】【日】【的】【活】【泼】【和】【欢】【乐】【也】【不】【复】【存】【在】【。】【由】【于】【考】【试】【前】【几】【天】【过】【度】【疲】【劳】【,】【在】【考】【试】【当】【天】【,】【我】【的】【大】【脑】【乱】【哄】【哄】【的】【,】【眼】【前】【的】【试】【卷】【像】【一】【个】【张】【牙】【舞】【爪】【的】【恶】【魔】【,】【几】【乎】【将】【我】【吞】【噬】【。】【我】【一】【阵】【眩】【晕】【…】【…】【考】【试】【的】【结】【果】【不】【言】【而】【喻】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【这】【样】【,】【我】【一】【边】【走】【,】【一】【边】【在】【胡】【思】【乱】【想】【着】【。】【不】【知】【过】【了】【多】【久】【,】【一】【阵】【凉】【风】【吹】【来】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【打】【了】【个】【冷】【战】【,】【大】【脑】【霎】【时】【清】【醒】【了】【许】【多】【,】【烦】【乱】【压】【抑】【的】【心】【情】【也】【平】【静】【了】【许】【多】【。】【突】【然】【,】【一】【道】【刺】【眼】【的】【光】【芒】【透】【过】【树】【叶】【直】【射】【下】【来】【,】【我】【不】【由】【得】【眯】【起】【双】【眼】【。】【是】【阳】【光】【?】【灰】【蒙】【蒙】【的】【天】【幕】【,】【不】【知】【怎】【的】【被】【撕】【裂】【了】【一】【道】【大】【口】【子】【,】【一】【缕】【缕】【金】【光】【射】【出】【来】【,】【洒】【下】【一】【片】【光】【明】【。】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【随】【着】【那】【道】【口】【子】【越】【来】【越】【大】【,】【满】【满】【的】【阳】【光】【整】【个】【地】【倾】【泻】【到】【我】【的】【心】【田】【,】【我】【似】【乎】【觉】【得】【自】【己】【心】【中】【的】【坚】【冰】【随】【之】【而】【慢】【慢】【融】【化】【。】【(】【把】【自】【己】【沉】【重】【压】【抑】【的】【心】【比】【作】【“】【心】【中】【的】【坚】【冰】【”】【,】【生】【动】【恰】【切】【,】【有】【力】【地】【突】【出】【了】【阳】【光】【的】【巨】【大】【力】【量】【。】【但】【在】【上】【文】【没】【有】【伏】【笔】【与】【之】【照】【应】【。】【)】【阳】【光】【暖】【暖】【的】【,】【亮】【亮】【的】【,】【充】【溢】【在】【我】【的】【心】【胸】【。】【它】【驱】【散】【了】【我】【心】【中】【的】【阴】【霾】【,】【让】【我】【重】【新】【找】【回】【了】【自】【信】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【阳】【光】【真】【好】【!】【它】【是】【大】【自】【然】【赐】【予】【人】【类】【最】【好】【的】【馈】【赠】【,】【是】【最】【宝】【贵】【、】【也】【是】【最】【无】【私】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【阳】【光】【真】【好】【!】【它】【使】【我】【们】【拥】【有】【了】【晴】【朗】【的】【天】【空】【,】【同】【时】【又】【拥】【有】【了】【灿】【烂】【的】【心】【情】【。】【(】【结】【尾】【处】【“】【阳】【光】【”】【仍】【是】【自】【然】【之】【物】【,】【其】【深】【层】【意】【蕴】【没】【能】【真】【正】【地】【挖】【掘】【出】【来】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【病】【因】【诊】【断】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【在】【本】【文】【中】【着】【重】【抒】【写】【了】【自】【己】【一】【次】【考】【试】【失】【败】【之】【后】【的】【内】【心】【感】【受】【,】【生】【动】【而】【又】【细】【腻】【地】【刻】【画】【了】【自】【己】【的】【心】【理】【活】【动】【。】【但】【是】【,】【本】【文】【也】【有】【较】【大】【的】【失】【误】【,】【那】【就】【是】【文】【章】【的】【立】【意】【不】【深】【刻】【。】【究】【其】【原】【因】【,】【主】【要】【是】【由】【于】【没】【能】【准】【确】【地】【把】【握】【材】【料】【的】【内】【涵】【。】【结】【合】【全】【文】【内】【容】【来】【看】【,】【作】【者】【所】【写】【的】【“】【阳】【光】【”】【仅】【仅】【指】【的】【是】【自】【然】【界】【的】【阳】【光】【,】【没】【有】【揭】【示】【出】【阳】【光】【的】【象】【征】【意】【义】【。】【就】【事】【论】【事】【,】【是】【无】【法】【有】【力】【地】【彰】【显】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【另】【外】【,】【作】【者】【在】【文】【章】【开】【头】【借】【助】【景】【物】【描】【写】【烘】【托】【自】【己】【的】【心】【情】【,】【较】【好】【。】【但】【是】【,】【第】【二】【段】【所】【表】【现】【的】【景】【物】【特】【点】【与】【人】【物】【的】【心】【情】【不】【相】【吻】【合】【。】【从】【结】【构】【上】【看】【,】【文】【章】【开】【头】【直】【接】【交】【代】【了】【考】【试】【的】【结】【果】【,】【显】【得】【有】【些】【突】【兀】【,】【无】【法】【做】【到】【引】【人】【入】【胜】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【示】【例】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【阳】【光】【真】【好】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【刘】【梦】【迪】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【几】【滴】【冰】【冷】【的】【雨】【珠】【打】【在】【脸】【上】【,】【如】【利】【刃】【一】【般】【刺】【入】【我】【的】【心】【脏】【。】【天】【上】【的】【云】【层】【越】【来】【越】【厚】【,】【潮】【湿】【而】【沉】【闷】【的】【空】【气】【让】【我】【压】【抑】【得】【透】【不】【过】【气】【来】【,】【心】【中】【如】【结】【了】【一】【层】【厚】【厚】【的】【坚】【冰】【。】【放】【学】【回】【家】【的】【路】【上】【,】【只】【留】【下】【我】【一】【串】【串】【悲】【伤】【的】【脚】【印】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【路】【两】【边】【的】【树】【木】【无】【精】【打】【采】【地】【低】【垂】【着】【脑】【袋】【,】【伴】【随】【着】【阵】【阵】【萧】【瑟】【的】【寒】【风】【,】【不】【时】【地】【打】【着】【冷】【战】【,】【抖】【落】【下】【所】【剩】【无】【几】【的】【几】【片】【枯】【叶】【。】【望】【着】【眼】【前】【这】【毫】【无】【生】【机】【的】【一】【切】【,】【我】【踽】【踽】【独】【行】【,】【任】【凭】【雨】【水】【滴】【落】【在】【我】【的】【脸】【上】【,】【伴】【着】【哀】【伤】【的】【泪】【水】【滴】【进】【我】【的】【心】【底】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【脑】【海】【中】【,】【浮】【现】【出】【了】【期】【末】【考】【试】【前】【的】【情】【形】【:】【考】【分】【这】【一】【张】【无】【情】【的】【网】【罩】【在】【了】【我】【们】【每】【一】【个】【人】【的】【身】【上】【,】【包】【括】【同】【学】【、】【老】【师】【和】【家】【长】【。】【那】【几】【天】【,】【教】【室】【内】【同】【学】【们】【的】【欢】【笑】【消】【失】【得】【无】【影】【无】【踪】【,】【老】【师】【上】【课】【也】【不】【再】【讲】【一】【些】【令】【我】【们】【捧】【腹】【大】【笑】【的】【笑】【话】【,】【而】【是】【竭】【力】【地】【指】【导】【我】【们】【如】【何】【复】【习】【。】【而】【我】【呢】【,】【更】【是】【埋】【头】【于】【那】【令】【我】【窒】【息】【的】【题】【海】【之】【中】【,】【往】【日】【的】【活】【泼】【和】【欢】【乐】【消】【失】【得】【荡】【然】【无】【存】【。】【由】【于】【考】【试】【前】【几】【天】【过】【度】【疲】【劳】【,】【在】【考】【试】【当】【天】【,】【我】【的】【大】【脑】【乱】【哄】【哄】【的】【,】【眼】【前】【的】【试】【卷】【像】【一】【个】【张】【牙】【舞】【爪】【的】【恶】【魔】【,】【几】【乎】【将】【我】【吞】【噬】【。】【我】【一】【阵】【眩】【晕】【…】【…】【考】【试】【的】【结】【果】【不】【言】【而】【喻】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【这】【样】【,】【我】【一】【边】【走】【,】【一】【边】【在】【胡】【思】【乱】【想】【着】【。】【不】【知】【过】【了】【多】【久】【,】【一】【阵】【凉】【风】【吹】【来】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【打】【了】【个】【冷】【战】【,】【大】【脑】【霎】【时】【清】【醒】【了】【许】【多】【,】【烦】【乱】【压】【抑】【的】【心】【情】【也】【平】【静】【了】【许】【多】【。】【突】【然】【,】【一】【道】【刺】【眼】【的】【光】【芒】【透】【过】【树】【叶】【直】【射】【下】【来】【,】【我】【不】【由】【得】【眯】【起】【双】【眼】【。】【是】【阳】【光】【?】【灰】【蒙】【蒙】【的】【天】【幕】【,】【不】【知】【怎】【的】【被】【撕】【裂】【了】【一】【道】【大】【口】【子】【,】【一】【缕】【缕】【金】【光】【射】【出】【来】【,】【洒】【下】【一】【片】【光】【明】【。】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【随】【着】【那】【道】【口】【子】【越】【来】【越】【大】【,】【满】【满】【的】【阳】【光】【整】【个】【地】【倾】【泻】【到】【我】【的】【心】【田】【,】【我】【似】【乎】【觉】【得】【自】【己】【心】【中】【的】【坚】【冰】【随】【之】【慢】【慢】【融】【化】【。】【阳】【光】【暖】【暖】【的】【,】【亮】【亮】【的】【,】【充】【溢】【在】【我】【的】【心】【胸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【阳】【光】【真】【好】【。】【它】【洒】【在】【树】【木】【的】【身】【上】【,】【原】【本】【垂】【下】【头】【的】【枝】【叶】【也】【昂】【起】【了】【自】【信】【的】【头】【颅】【。】【尽】【管】【乌】【云】【还】【没】【有】【完】【全】【消】【散】【,】【它】【也】【毫】【不】【介】【意】【,】【因】【为】【它】【的】【心】【中】【拥】【有】【了】【一】【片】【自】【信】【的】【阳】【光】【。】【它】【坚】【信】【,】【只】【要】【有】【阳】【光】【,】【无】【论】【环】【境】【如】【何】【恶】【劣】【,】【它】【都】【会】【昂】【首】【阔】【步】【,】【奋】【勇】【前】【行】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【阳】【光】【真】【好】【。】【它】【驱】【散】【了】【我】【心】【中】【的】【阴】【霾】【,】【让】【我】【重】【新】【拾】【回】【了】【自】【信】【。】【我】【潇】【洒】【地】【挥】【了】【挥】【手】【,】【告】【别】【昨】【日】【的】【阴】【云】【,】【哀】【愁】【和】【悲】【伤】【荡】【然】【无】【存】【。】【阳】【光】【永】【驻】【,】【自】【信】【永】【恒】【!】【我】【坚】【信】【拥】【有】【阳】【光】【的】【明】【天】【将】【会】【更】【加】【灿】【烂】【、】【辉】【煌】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【启】【示】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【千】【古】【文】【章】【意】【为】【高】【”】【,】【立】【意】【是】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【的】【灵】【魂】【。】【所】【以】【,】【升】【格】【作】【文】【时】【,】【先】【看】【立】【意】【是】【否】【准】【确】【和】【深】【刻】【。】【结】【合】【本】【文】【来】【看】【,】【改】【前】【立】【意】【较】【肤】【浅】【。】【升】【格】【以】【后】【,】【文】【章】【的】【主】【旨】【得】【到】【了】【进】【一】【步】【的】【升】【华】【。】【文】【中】【的】【阳】【光】【不】【仅】【仅】【指】【的】【是】【自】【然】【界】【中】【的】【阳】【光】【,】【作】【者】【赋】【予】【了】【它】【一】【定】【的】【象】【征】【意】【义】【,】【象】【征】【了】【豁】【达】【乐】【观】【的】【思】【想】【、】【积】【极】【向】【上】【的】【品】【质】【、】【执】【著】【追】【求】【的】【精】【神】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【外】【,】【语】【言】【的】【组】【织】【和】【表】【达】【对】【突】【出】【和】【深】【化】【文】【章】【中】【心】【也】【起】【着】【至】【关】【重】【要】【的】【作】【用】【。】【升】【格】【时】【,】【作】【者】【通】【过】【对】【文】【中】【个】【别】【句】【子】【的】【修】【改】【,】【使】【之】【更】【准】【确】【地】【抒】【发】【自】【己】【的】【内】【心】【情】【感】【,】【更】【加】【贴】【近】【文】【章】【的】【主】【旨】【,】【立】【意】【才】【能】【更】【加】【深】【刻】【。】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【鉴】【宝】【类】【的】【节】【目】【,】【发】【现】【一】【个】【很】【有】【趣】【的】【现】【象】【,】【很】【多】【东】【西】【,】【因】【为】【古】【人】【在】【制】【作】【时】【犯】【了】【点】【错】【,】【让】【它】【与】【同】【类】【的】【东】【西】【格】【格】【不】【入】【,】【不】【过】【它】【不】【但】【没】【有】【遭】【到】【淘】【汰】【,】【反】【而】【身】【价】【一】【路】【飙】【升】【,】【凌】【驾】【于】【其】【他】【物】【品】【之】【上】【。】【就】【算】【是】【古】【人】【犯】【的】【错】【比】【较】【离】【谱】【,】【让】【这】【件】【东】【西】【有】【了】【缺】【陷】【,】【失】【了】【些】【美】【感】【,】【无】【法】【与】【其】【他】【同】【类】【东】【西】【相】【提】【并】【论】【,】【它】【也】【依】【然】【有】【收】【藏】【的】【价】【值】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【到】【这】【些】【,】【我】【常】【常】【忍】【不】【住】【想】【,】【那】【些】【古】【人】【当】【初】【犯】【错】【时】【,】【一】【定】【也】【是】【懊】【悔】【至】【极】【,】【甚】【至】【充】【满】【了】【挫】【败】【感】【吧】【?】【只】【是】【,】【他】【们】【一】【定】【想】【不】【到】【,】【若】【干】【年】【后】【,】【那】【些】【做】【错】【的】【东】【西】【一】【件】【也】【没】【有】【浪】【费】【,】【反】【而】【有】【了】【新】【的】【价】【值】【与】【意】【义】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【个】【世】【界】【上】【,】【真】【的】【没】【有】【一】【种】【错】【误】【会】【浪】【费】【。】【我】【们】【轻】【易】【坠】【入】【情】【网】【,】【频】【频】【付】【出】【后】【,】【却】【得】【不】【到】【相】【应】【的】【回】【报】【,】【甚】【至】【被】【伤】【得】【体】【无】【完】【肤】【。】【我】【们】【赫】【然】【发】【现】【,】【原】【来】【自】【己】【看】【走】【了】【眼】【,】【爱】【错】【了】【人】【。】【这】【个】【错】【误】【,】【让】【我】【们】【付】【出】【了】【惨】【痛】【的】【代】【价】【,】【要】【好】【久】【才】【能】【走】【出】【伤】【痛】【的】【阴】【影】【。】【幸】【运】【的】【是】【,】【失】【恋】【能】【让】【一】【个】【人】【快】【速】【成】【长】【,】【我】【们】【变】【得】【更】【加】【勇】【敢】【,】【变】【得】【理】【智】【,】【善】【于】【思】【考】【,】【当】【下】【一】【段】【感】【情】【来】【临】【时】【,】【我】【们】【终】【于】【学】【会】【用】【正】【确】【的】【方】【式】【对】【待】【,】【学】【会】【了】【享】【受】【爱】【,】【维】【护】【爱】【,】【经】【营】【爱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【每】【个】【人】【初】【入】【职】【场】【,】【都】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【,】【勤】【奋】【努】【力】【,】【可】【是】【,】【却】【总】【免】【不】【了】【不】【断】【犯】【错】【,】【这】【些】【错】【误】【,】【让】【别】【人】【耻】【笑】【,】【让】【领】【导】【训】【斥】【,】【像】【汹】【涌】【的】【潮】【水】【,】【一】【次】【次】【击】【打】【着】【我】【们】【的】【自】【信】【。】【这】【些】【错】【误】【,】【虽】【然】【让】【我】【们】【显】【得】【笨】【拙】【而】【稚】【嫩】【,】【却】【能】【让】【我】【们】【飞】【速】【前】【进】【。】【在】【一】【次】【又】【一】【次】【的】【摔】【打】【中】【,】【我】【们】【学】【会】【了】【合】【理】【地】【安】【排】【时】【间】【,】【巧】【妙】【地】【和】【同】【事】【周】【旋】【,】【学】【会】【了】【处】【理】【各】【种】【棘】【手】【问】【题】【,】【一】【只】【职】【场】【菜】【鸟】【,】【终】【于】【慢】【慢】【长】【成】【一】【棵】【独】【立】【的】【大】【树】【,】【能】【够】【独】【当】【一】【面】【。】【看】【看】【那】【些】【职】【场】【精】【英】【,】【每】【个】【人】【都】【会】【有】【一】【部】【犯】【错】【史】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【很】【多】【创】【业】【的】【人】【,】【虽】【然】【准】【备】【充】【分】【,】【可】【总】【免】【不】【了】【一】【开】【始】【就】【摔】【几】【个】【大】【跟】【头】【。】【这】【些】【错】【误】【五】【花】【八】【门】【,】【有】【人】【是】【因】【为】【掌】【握】【了】【错】【误】【的】【信】【息】【,】【有】【人】【是】【因】【为】【被】【朋】【友】【欺】【骗】【,】【有】【人】【是】【因】【为】【管】【理】【不】【善】【,】【这】【些】【错】【误】【,】【像】【一】【柄】【利】【剑】【,】【深】【深】【地】【刺】【进】【当】【事】【人】【的】【心】【脏】【,】【让】【他】【们】【输】【光】【了】【血】【本】【,】【痛】【苦】【得】【无】【以】【名】【状】【。】【可】【是】【,】【如】【果】【他】【们】【能】【勇】【敢】【地】【振】【作】【起】【来】【,】【从】【这】【些】【错】【误】【中】【汲】【取】【教】【训】【,】【他】【们】【就】【会】【变】【成】【精】【明】【的】【老】【板】【、】【善】【于】【识】【人】【的】【管】【理】【者】【,】【创】【建】【一】【份】【之】【前】【不】【敢】【想】【象】【的】【大】【事】【业】【,】【并】【且】【练】【就】【一】【颗】【强】【大】【的】【心】【脏】【,】【多】【大】【的】【风】【浪】【都】【不】【会】【再】【将】【他】【们】【轻】【易】【打】【倒】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【高】【险】【峰】【 】【选】【自】【《】【渤】【海】【早】【报】【》】【,】【2】【0】【1】【4】【年】【1】【1】【月】【1】【6】【日】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【孩】【子】【摔】【了】【无】【数】【次】【跤】【才】【学】【会】【走】【路】【,】【大】【人】【在】【一】【个】【又】【一】【个】【错】【误】【中】【成】【熟】【。】【人】【的】【一】【生】【,】【从】【出】【生】【起】【就】【不】【停】【在】【犯】【错】【,】【犯】【错】【真】【的】【没】【什】【么】【可】【怕】【,】【只】【要】【你】【不】【被】【这】【些】【错】【误】【打】【倒】【,】【并】【从】【中】【汲】【取】【正】【能】【量】【,】【这】【些】【错】【误】【,】【就】【只】【是】【成】【长】【的】【助】【推】【剂】【,】【能】【够】【让】【你】【变】【得】【越】【来】【越】【强】【大】【,】【越】【来】【越】【美】【好】【。】剧本创作【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【摘】【 】【要】【:】【在】【网】【络】【环】【境】【下】【的】【作】【文】【教】【学】【过】【程】【中】【,】【教】【师】【必】【须】【通】【过】【下】【列】【途】【径】【充】【分】【发】【挥】【网】【络】【中】【作】【文】【教】【学】【资】【源】【的】【巨】【大】【作】【用】【,】【以】【此】【提】【高】【作】【文】【教】【学】【的】【效】【果】【:】【一】【、】【灵】【活】【运】【用】【网】【络】【资】【源】【,】【创】【设】【作】【文】【教】【学】【情】【境】【;】【二】【、】【开】【发】【利】【用】【网】【络】【资】【源】【,】【积】【累】【写】【作】【素】【材】【;】【三】【、】【促】【进】【师】【生】【互】【动】【,】【创】【新】【作】【文】【教】【学】【模】【式】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【关】【键】【词】【:】【网】【络】【;】【环】【境】【;】【作】【文】【;】【教】【学】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【近】【年】【来】【,】【网】【络】【的】【普】【及】【在】【变】【革】【人】【们】【的】【生】【活】【方】【式】【与】【生】【产】【方】【式】【的】【同】【时】【,】【也】【在】【很】【大】【程】【度】【上】【变】【革】【了】【语】【文】【教】【学】【中】【的】【作】【文】【教】【学】【方】【式】【。】【当】【然】【,】【无】【论】【如】【何】【变】【革】【,】【在】【网】【络】【环】【境】【下】【的】【作】【文】【教】【学】【过】【程】【中】【,】【教】【师】【永】【远】【是】【教】【学】【的】【主】【导】【,】【学】【生】【永】【远】【是】【学】【习】【的】【主】【体】【,】【网】【络】【资】【源】【永】【远】【是】【辅】【助】【资】【源】【与】【辅】【助】【手】【段】【。】【那】【么】【,】【在】【具】【体】【的】【作】【文】【教】【学】【过】【程】【中】【,】【我】【们】【怎】【样】【有】【效】【利】【用】【网】【络】【资】【源】【开】【展】【作】【文】【教】【学】【活】【动】【,】【以】【此】【迅】【速】【提】【高】【学】【生】【的】【作】【文】【质】【量】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【灵】【活】【运】【用】【网】【络】【资】【源】【,】【创】【设】【作】【文】【教】【学】【情】【境】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【众】【所】【周】【知】【,】【语】【文】【教】【学】【中】【的】【“】【大】【语】【文】【”】【与】【“】【小】【语】【文】【”】【既】【有】【区】【别】【又】【有】【联】【系】【。】【同】【理】【,】【作】【为】【语】【文】【教】【学】【重】【要】【组】【成】【部】【分】【的】【作】【文】【教】【学】【,】【其】【“】【大】【课】【堂】【”】【(】【社】【会】【生】【活】【)】【与】【“】【小】【课】【堂】【”】【(】【4】【5】【分】【钟】【)】【同】【样】【既】【有】【区】【别】【又】【有】【联】【系】【。】【这】【就】【要】【求】【我】【们】【的】【作】【文】【教】【学】【在】【网】【络】【环】【境】【下】【,】【既】【要】【关】【注】【学】【生】【在】【社】【会】【生】【活】【“】【大】【课】【堂】【”】【中】【的】【历】【练】【,】【又】【要】【加】【强】【在】【4】【0】【分】【钟】【“】【小】【课】【堂】【”】【内】【对】【学】【生】【作】【文】【的】【指】【导】【。】【故】【此】【,】【每】【次】【作】【文】【指】【导】【课】【上】【,】【我】【都】【会】【引】【导】【学】【生】【首】【先】【从】【社】【会】【生】【活】【大】【课】【堂】【中】【的】【“】【无】【意】【注】【意】【”】【中】【入】【手】【,】【巧】【妙】【运】【用】【网】【络】【信】【息】【资】【源】【,】【引】【导】【学】【生】【从】【社】【会】【生】【活】【大】【课】【堂】【中】【的】【“】【无】【意】【注】【意】【”】【转】【入】【4】【0】【分】【钟】【“】【小】【课】【堂】【”】【的】【有】【意】【注】【意】【,】【引】【导】【学】【生】【采】【取】【自】【主】【、】【探】【究】【、】【合】【作】【的】【作】【文】【训】【练】【方】【式】【,】【顺】【利】【走】【进】【作】【文】【训】【练】【天】【地】【,】【继】【之】【,】【写】【出】【见】【解】【独】【到】【的】【习】【作】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【如】【,】【在】【轰】【动】【全】【国】【的】【“】【小】【悦】【悦】【事】【件】【”】【发】【生】【之】【际】【,】【我】【从】【网】【络】【下】【载】【了】【“】【小】【悦】【悦】【事】【件】【”】【惨】【剧】【发】【生】【的】【视】【频】【。】【次】【日】【语】【文】【课】【上】【课】【伊】【始】【,】【我】【运】【用】【多】【媒】【体】【设】【施】【为】【学】【生】【播】【放】【了】【这】【段】【令】【人】【惨】【不】【忍】【睹】【的】【视】【频】【。】【当】【时】【,】【我】【一】【边】【播】【放】【“】【小】【悦】【悦】【事】【件】【”】【视】【频】【,】【一】【边】【饱】【含】【深】【情】【地】【解】【说】【。】【很】【多】【学】【生】【被】【这】【惨】【不】【忍】【睹】【的】【视】【频】【与】【我】【发】【自】【内】【心】【情】【感】【的】【解】【说】【感】【动】【得】【留】【下】【了】【泪】【水】【。】【于】【是】【,】【我】【趁】【热】【打】【铁】【,】【鼓】【励】【学】【生】【在】【作】【文】【本】【中】【写】【出】【自】【己】【想】【做】【的】【事】【,】【说】【出】【自】【己】【想】【说】【的】【话】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【开】【发】【利】【用】【网】【络】【资】【源】【,】【积】【累】【写】【作】【素】【材】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【网】【络】【资】【源】【大】【致】【分】【为】【下】【列】【四】【类】【:】【可】【直】【接】【应】【用】【于】【作】【文】【教】【学】【的】【素】【材】【资】【源】【;】【适】【用】【于】【网】【络】【环】【境】【下】【学】【生】【自】【主】【作】【文】【训】【练】【的】【视】【频】【或】【者】【“】【课】【件】【”】【资】【源】【;】【网】【络】【环】【境】【下】【学】【生】【互】【相】【探】【究】【作】【文】【训】【练】【途】【径】【的】【资】【源】【;】【可】【用】【于】【学】【生】【作】【文】【的】【社】【会】【实】【事】【动】【态】【信】【息】【资】【源】【等】【。】【在】【合】【理】【开】【发】【与】【运】【用】【上】【述】【网】【络】【资】【源】【方】【面】【,】【我】【授】【予】【学】【生】【2】【种】【最】【基】【本】【的】【方】【法】【:】【一】【是】【搜】【索】【、】【浏】【览】【与】【作】【文】【训】【练】【相】【关】【的】【网】【站】【、】【视】【频】【、】【课】【件】【等】【,】【有】【选】【择】【性】【地】【获】【取】【自】【己】【需】【要】【的】【作】【文】【训】【练】【素】【材】【,】【并】【对】【之】【加】【工】【应】【用】【;】【二】【是】【参】【与】【到】【建】【设】【网】【络】【作】【文】【资】【源】【的】【行】【列】【中】【来】【,】【比】【如】【,】【在】【网】【络】【平】【台】【交】【流】【作】【文】【资】【源】【,】【发】【布】【自】【己】【的】【佳】【作】【等】【。】【对】【此】【,】【学】【生】【非】【常】【感】【兴】【趣】【,】【均】【积】【极】【投】【入】【到】【合】【理】【开】【发】【与】【运】【用】【作】【文】【网】【络】【资】【源】【的】【行】【列】【中】【。】【鉴】【于】【学】【校】【的】【计】【算】【机】【网】【络】【教】【室】【向】【学】【生】【全】【天】【开】【放】【,】【学】【生】【可】【以】【在】【课】【余】【随】【时】【使】【用】【网】【络】【设】【备】【,】【我】【常】【常】【要】【求】【学】【生】【利】【用】【课】【余】【时】【间】【完】【成】【开】【发】【与】【运】【用】【作】【文】【网】【络】【资】【源】【的】【任】【务】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【教】【学】【完】【《】【长】【江】【之】【歌】【》】【之】【后】【,】【我】【要】【求】【学】【生】【带】【着】【下】【列】【任】【务】【上】【网】【,】【有】【目】【的】【地】【搜】【索】【网】【络】【中】【的】【下】【列】【信】【息】【:】【1】【.】【 】【长】【江】【的】【源】【头】【、】【流】【经】【的】【区】【域】【、】【流】【域】【面】【积】【、】【水】【量】【等】【;】【2】【.】【古】【往】【今】【来】【与】【长】【江】【相】【关】【的】【诗】【词】【歌】【赋】【对】【联】【等】【;】【3】【.】【长】【江】【的】【过】【去】【、】【现】【在】【与】【未】【来】【。】【然】【后】【要】【求】【学】【生】【完】【成】【下】【列】【2】【个】【任】【务】【:】【1】【.】【将】【自】【己】【搜】【集】【到】【的】【资】【料】【上】【传】【到】【班】【级】【群】【Q】【Q】【的】【群】【文】【件】【中】【;】【2】【.】【以】【“】【长】【江】【”】【为】【话】【题】【,】【自】【选】【角】【度】【、】【自】【拟】【题】【目】【、】【自】【选】【文】【体】【写】【一】【篇】【4】【0】【0】【-】【5】【0】【0】【字】【的】【文】【章】【,】【如】【果】【选】【择】【现】【代】【诗】【文】【体】【,】【诗】【句】【不】【得】【少】【于】【8】【行】【,】【并】【将】【自】【己】【写】【作】【的】【反】【复】【修】【改】【过】【的】【作】【文】【上】【传】【到】【班】【级】【群】【Q】【Q】【的】【群】【文】【件】【中】【,】【以】【便】【我】【在】【适】【当】【的】【时】【候】【组】【织】【学】【生】【运】【用】【网】【络】【平】【台】【集】【体】【批】【阅】【学】【生】【的】【作】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【促】【进】【师】【生】【互】【动】【,】【创】【新】【作】【文】【教】【学】【模】【式】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【网】【络】【作】【文】【教】【学】【的】【最】【大】【特】【点】【即】【为】【开】【放】【性】【。】【作】【文】【教】【学】【时】【,】【我】【们】【可】【以】【在】【超】【链】【接】【的】【导】【引】【下】【,】【引】【导】【学】【生】【自】【由】【地】【遨】【游】【于】【网】【路】【中】【海】【量】【的】【作】【文】【素】【材】【中】【,】【广】【泛】【收】【集】【新】【发】【明】【信】【息】【、】【新】【科】【技】【信】【息】【、】【时】【事】【政】【治】【信】【息】【等】【,】【引】【导】【学】【生】【将】【之】【充】【实】【到】【自】【己】【的】【作】【文】【中】【,】【以】【此】【增】【加】【作】【文】【内】【容】【的】【信】【息】【量】【,】【使】【学】【生】【的】【作】【文】【内】【容】【更】【加】【充】【实】【,】【更】【加】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【,】【更】【加】【富】【于】【时】【代】【精】【神】【。】【其】【操】【作】【方】【法】【如】【下】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【1】【在】【网】【络】【环】【境】【下】【的】【作】【文】【教】【学】【过】【程】【中】【,】【为】【了】【引】【导】【学】【生】【顺】【利】【完】【成】【教】【师】【布】【置】【的】【作】【文】【训】【练】【任】【务】【,】【笔】【者】【常】【常】【采】【用】【网】【页】【辅】【导】【的】【形】【式】【,】【给】【学】【生】【的】【作】【文】【训】【练】【提】【供】【便】【捷】【的】【指】【导】【与】【帮】【助】【。】【比】【如】【,】【在】【指】【导】【学】【生】【训】【练】【记】【叙】【文】【写】【作】【时】【,】【我】【将】【《】【小】【学】【尖】【子】【生】【记】【叙】【文】【典】【范】【》】【中】【的】【主】【要】【内】【容】【比】【如】【“】【一】【、】【作】【文】【无】【内】【容】【可】【写】【怎】【么】【办】【?】【”】【、】【“】【二】【、】【写】【景】【文】【章】【不】【形】【象】【怎】【么】【办】【?】【”】【等】【制】【作】【成】【网】【页】【,】【上】【传】【到】【班】【级】【Q】【Q】【群】【文】【件】【夹】【中】【,】【供】【学】【生】【参】【考】【学】【习】【记】【叙】【文】【的】【六】【个】【要】【素】【,】【了】【解】【最】【基】【本】【的】【积】【累】【素】【材】【技】【巧】【与】【写】【景】【记】【事】【的】【方】【法】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【2】【利】【用】【班】【级】【Q】【Q】【群】【空】【间】【,】【创】【设】【人】【性】【化】【的】【作】【文】【网】【络】【学】【习】【环】【境】【,】【指】【导】【学】【生】【解】【决】【作】【文】【训】【练】【过】【程】【中】【遇】【到】【的】【各】【种】【疑】【难】【问】【题】【,】【为】【学】【生】【自】【主】【作】【文】【提】【供】【准】【确】【的】【、】【便】【捷】【的】【、】【全】【方】【位】【的】【指】【导】【,】【帮】【助】【学】【生】【顺】【利】【解】【决】【作】【文】【过】【程】【中】【遇】【到】【的】【各】【种】【难】【题】【,】【顺】【利】【达】【成】【作】【文】【训】【练】【目】【标】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【3】【通】【过】【网】【络】【的】【硬】【件】【环】【境】【,】【搭】【建】【师】【生】【之】【间】【作】【文】【分】【层】【施】【教】【与】【个】【别】【辅】【助】【的】【平】【台】【,】【实】【现】【作】【文】【教】【学】【过】【程】【中】【因】【材】【施】【教】【的】【个】【别】【化】【教】【育】【目】【标】【。】【比】【如】【,】【我】【班】【学】【生】【X】【X】【X】【与】【X】【X】【X】【作】【文】【储】【备】【比】【较】【薄】【弱】【,】【我】【便】【经】【常】【通】【过】【网】【络】【的】【硬】【件】【环】【境】【与】【之】【分】【别】【搭】【建】【个】【别】【辅】【助】【的】【平】【台】【:】【每】【次】【布】【置】【作】【文】【,】【我】【都】【给】【这】【二】【位】【学】【生】【提】【供】【二】【篇】【主】【题】【相】【同】【但】【是】【语】【言】【风】【格】【、】【行】【文】【结】【构】【等】【不】【同】【的】【范】【文】【,】【指】【导】【二】【位】【学】【生】【借】【鉴】【范】【文】【的】【内】【容】【或】【者】【行】【文】【结】【构】【进】【行】【写】【作】【。】【经】【过】【一】【段】【时】【间】【的】【个】【别】【辅】【导】【,】【X】【X】【X】【与】【X】【X】【X】【二】【位】【学】【生】【的】【作】【文】【储】【备】【日】【渐】【丰】【厚】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【总】【之】【,】【在】【网】【络】【环】【境】【下】【的】【作】【文】【教】【学】【过】【程】【中】【,】【教】【师】【必】【须】【掌】【握】【相】【应】【的】【计】【算】【机】【教】【学】【硬】【件】【技】【术】【与】【软】【件】【技】【术】【,】【加】【强】【整】【理】【网】【络】【中】【的】【作】【文】【教】【学】【资】【源】【,】【整】【合】【网】【络】【资】【源】【中】【与】【作】【文】【教】【学】【相】【关】【的】【视】【频】【、】【动】【画】【、】【图】【像】【、】【声】【音】【、】【文】【字】【、】【图】【形】【等】【多】【媒】【体】【元】【素】【,】【充】【分】【发】【挥】【网】【络】【中】【作】【文】【教】【学】【资】【源】【的】【巨】【大】【作】【用】【,】【以】【此】【提】【高】【作】【文】【教】【学】【的】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【参】【考】【文】【献】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【1】【]】【张】【连】【友】【,】【小】【语】【作】【文】【教】【学】【中】【的】【几】【点】【感】【悟】【,】【J】【,】【读】【与】【写】【(】【教】【育】【教】【学】【刊】【)】【,】【2】【0】【1】【5】【年】【1】【月】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【2】【]】【李】【秋】【兰】【,】【论】【小】【学】【作】【文】【教】【学】【优】【化】【策】【略】【,】【J】【,】【赤】【子】【(】【上】【中】【旬】【,】【2】【0】【1】【5】【年】【2】【月】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【3】【]】【张】【年】【芳】【,】【张】【松】【祥】【,】【中】【小】【学】【作】【文】【教】【学】【的】【迷】【思】【及】【其】【返】【正】【,】【J】【,】【教】【学】【与】【管】【理】【,】【2】【0】【1】【5】【年】【3】【月】【。】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【今】【,】【在】【这】【个】【彰】【显】【个】【性】【的】【时】【代】【,】【游】【览】【名】【胜】【古】【迹】【早】【已】【无】【法】【满】【足】【人】【们】【对】【大】【自】【然】【的】【好】【奇】【心】【了】【。】【人】【们】【转】【而】【向】【人】【迹】【罕】【至】【、】【寥】【无】【人】【烟】【的】【地】【方】【发】【动】【“】【进】【攻】【”】【。】【这】【种】【行】【为】【早】【已】【成】【为】【一】【种】【时】【尚】【,】【而】【人】【们】【因】【这】【一】【蔚】【然】【成】【风】【的】【“】【时】【尚】【”】【付】【出】【的】【是】【一】【个】【又】【一】【个】【惨】【痛】【的】【代】【价】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【云】【南】【香】【格】【里】【拉】【旅】【行】【车】【坠】【崖】【,】【死】【者】【中】【有】【清】【华】【学】【子】【;】【新】【疆】【3】【1】【名】【户】【外】【运】【动】【爱】【好】【者】【穿】【越】【车】【师】【古】【道】【时】【遭】【遇】【暴】【风】【雪】【,】【失】【踪】【三】【日】【后】【获】【救】【;】【内】【蒙】【古】【库】【尔】【齐】【沙】【漠】【更】【有】【数】【支】【队】【伍】【遇】【险】【,】【其】【中】【一】【女】【中】【暑】【身】【亡】【…】【…】【这】【些】【事】【例】【让】【人】【感】【慨】【万】【千】【。】【就】【在】【这】【些】【事】【件】【被】【报】【道】【之】【后】【,】【随】【之】【而】【来】【的】【是】【一】【片】【指】【责】【声】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【所】【有】【的】【矛】【头】【都】【指】【向】【“】【探】【险】【”】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【在】【想】【一】【个】【问】【题】【,】【上】【述】【事】【例】【难】【道】【真】【是】【探】【险】【行】【为】【吗】【?】【于】【是】【我】【去】【查】【词】【典】【,】【词】【典】【中】【的】【解】【释】【是】【:】【“】【到】【从】【来】【没】【人】【去】【过】【或】【少】【有】【人】【去】【过】【的】【地】【方】【考】【察】【。】【”】【我】【认】【为】【上】【述】【的】【悲】【剧】【根】【本】【不】【是】【探】【险】【,】【我】【觉】【得】【倒】【像】【是】【不】【顾】【危】【险】【的】【冒】【险】【行】【为】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【虽】【然】【要】【探】【险】【就】【会】【冒】【险】【,】【但】【探】【险】【绝】【不】【等】【同】【于】【冒】【险】【。】【正】【如】【中】【国】【首】【席】【女】【试】【飞】【员】【邹】【延】【龄】【所】【说】【,】【“】【试】【飞】【不】【是】【傻】【飞】【,】【敢】【干】【不】【能】【蛮】【干】【,】【探】【险】【就】【要】【冒】【险】【。】【”】【的】【确】【,】【探】【险】【也】【会】【像】【冒】【险】【一】【样】【要】【面】【对】【危】【险】【与】【牺】【牲】【,】【但】【是】【探】【险】【与】【冒】【险】【有】【着】【实】【质】【性】【的】【不】【同】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【首】【先】【,】【目】【的】【不】【同】【。】【冒】【险】【的】【目】【的】【是】【为】【了】【追】【求】【时】【尚】【,】【在】【茶】【余】【饭】【后】【添】【点】【谈】【资】【免】【得】【落】【伍】【。】【或】【是】【寻】【求】【刺】【激】【,】【满】【足】【自】【己】【的】【虚】【荣】【心】【,】【将】【这】【样】【的】【一】【次】【历】【险】【作】【为】【炫】【耀】【的】【资】【本】【。】【而】【探】【险】【则】【不】【同】【,】【探】【险】【既】【然】【有】【考】【察】【的】【目】【的】【,】【那】【目】【的】【就】【是】【很】【明】【确】【—】【—】【以】【学】【术】【研】【究】【为】【目】【的】【,】【解】【开】【千】【百】【年】【来】【难】【解】【的】【大】【自】【然】【之】【谜】【,】【让】【人】【类】【文】【明】【迈】【出】【新】【的】【一】【步】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【次】【,】【事】【前】【准】【备】【不】【同】【。】【冒】【险】【,】【说】【到】【底】【根】【本】【没】【有】【什】【么】【提】【前】【准】【备】【,】【准】【备】【可】【能】【只】【是】【上】【网】【查】【查】【资】【料】【罢】【了】【,】【一】【些】【人】【根】【本】【没】【有】【求】【生】【的】【技】【能】【,】【当】【遇】【到】【恶】【劣】【的】【环】【境】【时】【,】【遇】【险】【也】【就】【在】【所】【难】【免】【。】【但】【探】【险】【有】【着】【充】【分】【的】【准】【备】【,】【技】【术】【、】【体】【能】【、】【装】【备】【到】【心】【理】【状】【态】【,】【一】【个】【都】【不】【能】【少】【,】【虽】【然】【死】【亡】【无】【法】【避】【免】【,】【但】【死】【也】【要】【当】【一】【个】【“】【明】【白】【鬼】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【后】【,】【是】【牺】【牲】【的】【价】【值】【不】【同】【。】【因】【冒】【险】【而】【牺】【牲】【是】【一】【种】【追】【求】【时】【尚】【导】【致】【的】【悲】【剧】【后】【果】【,】【这】【种】【牺】【牲】【未】【免】【太】【无】【意】【义】【了】【,】【还】【不】【如】【为】【社】【会】【多】【做】【些】【奉】【献】【。】【可】【探】【险】【却】【不】【同】【了】【,】【还】【记】【得】【在】【罗】【布】【泊】【发】【现】【的】【那】【具】【干】【尸】【吗】【?】【干】【尸】【的】【出】【现】【让】【人】【再】【一】【次】【想】【起】【2】【6】【年】【前】【的】【一】【次】【考】【察】【,】【就】【在】【那】【一】【次】【探】【险】【中】【,】【著】【名】【植】【物】【病】【毒】【专】【家】【彭】【加】【木】【献】【出】【了】【年】【轻】【的】【生】【命】【。】【而】【他】【生】【前】【也】【说】【过】【,】【“】【就】【算】【死】【在】【罗】【布】【泊】【,】【也】【要】【用】【肉】【身】【增】【加】【点】【中】【国】【的】【有】【机】【质】【。】【”】【这】【种】【牺】【牲】【才】【是】【有】【价】【值】【的】【,】【才】【是】【实】【现】【生】【命】【的】【真】【正】【意】【义】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【探】【险】【不】【同】【于】【冒】【险】【,】【探】【险】【是】【实】【现】【自】【身】【生】【命】【价】【值】【的】【一】【种】【途】【径】【,】【如】【果】【把】【探】【险】【定】【义】【为】【时】【尚】【,】【未】【免】【有】【些】【太】【浅】【薄】【了】【吧】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】剧本创作【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【教】【学】【实】【践】【告】【诉】【我】【们】【,】【作】【文】【指】【导】【要】【培】【养】【学】【生】【的】【写】【作】【兴】【趣】【,】【开】【拓】【他】【们】【的】【写】【作】【思】【路】【,】【才】【能】【调】【动】【他】【们】【写】【作】【的】【积】【极】【性】【,】【享】【受】【写】【作】【的】【乐】【趣】【,】【提】【高】【他】【们】【写】【作】【的】【自】【信】【心】【。】【这】【就】【需】【要】【我】【们】【在】【语】【文】【教】【学】【中】【,】【把】【课】【内】【外】【阅】【读】【和】【作】【文】【教】【学】【进】【行】【有】【效】【的】【整】【合】【,】【让】【学】【生】【在】【阅】【读】【时】【能】【够】【自】【觉】【吸】【收】【优】【美】【的】【音】【乐】【语】【言】【,】【提】【高】【他】【们】【的】【思】【维】【活】【跃】【度】【,】【从】【而】【提】【升】【写】【作】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【音】【乐】【语】【言】【的】【积】【累】【与】【感】【悟】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【语】【文】【课】【堂】【教】【学】【中】【渗】【透】【音】【乐】【,】【也】【符】【合】【青】【少】【年】【的】【心】【理】【发】【展】【特】【点】【,】【这】【时】【的】【他】【们】【对】【充】【满】【激】【情】【的】【音】【乐】【往】【往】【也】【有】【着】【极】【大】【的】【兴】【趣】【,】【语】【文】【教】【师】【应】【该】【根】【据】【这】【样】【的】【特】【别】【,】【再】【结】【合】【文】【本】【,】【选】【择】【合】【适】【的】【音】【乐】【来】【帮】【助】【学】【生】【学】【习】【。】【如】【学】【习】【《】【假】【如】【我】【是】【老】【师】【》】【一】【文】【时】【,】【与】【学】【生】【一】【起】【欣】【赏】【宋】【祖】【英】【演】【唱】【的】【《】【长】【大】【后】【我】【就】【成】【了】【你】【》】【,】【对】【其】【中】【的】【音】【乐】【语】【言】【:】【“】【小】【时】【候】【,】【我】【认】【为】【你】【很】【美】【丽】【,】【领】【着】【一】【群】【小】【鸟】【飞】【来】【飞】【去】【,】【长】【大】【后】【我】【就】【成】【了】【你】【,】【才】【知】【道】【那】【只】【粉】【笔】【画】【出】【的】【是】【彩】【虹】【,】【写】【下】【的】【是】【泪】【滴】【;】【才】【知】【道】【那】【块】【黑】【板】【写】【下】【的】【是】【真】【理】【;】【才】【知】【道】【举】【起】【的】【是】【别】【人】【,】【奉】【献】【的】【是】【自】【己】【…】【…】【”】【进】【行】【具】【体】【的】【学】【习】【品】【味】【,】【学】【生】【就】【会】【自】【然】【的】【感】【受】【到】【教】【师】【的】【职】【业】【崇】【高】【性】【,】【并】【联】【系】【实】【际】【生】【活】【来】【感】【受】【教】【师】【职】【业】【的】【伟】【大】【性】【,】【学】【生】【在】【习】【作】【过】【程】【中】【,】【就】【会】【自】【觉】【的】【寻】【找】【相】【类】【似】【的】【语】【言】【来】【描】【写】【教】【师】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【情】【境】【创】【设】【、】【情】【感】【酝】【酿】【与】【音】【乐】【渗】【透】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【新】【课】【标】【提】【出】【:】【“】【要】【引】【导】【学】【生】【在】【作】【文】【中】【说】【真】【话】【、】【实】【话】【、】【心】【里】【话】【,】【表】【达】【真】【情】【实】【感】【。】【”】【 】【作】【文】【不】【是】【简】【单】【的】【文】【字】【游】【戏】【,】【而】【是】【需】【要】【学】【生】【把】【自】【己】【的】【真】【实】【生】【活】【感】【受】【和】【思】【想】【情】【感】【利】【用】【文】【字】【真】【实】【地】【传】【达】【给】【别】【人】【。】【因】【此】【首】【先】【要】【学】【会】【观】【察】【生】【活】【,】【具】【有】【表】【达】【的】【欲】【望】【与】【冲】【动】【,】【然】【后】【才】【有】【富】【有】【真】【情】【实】【感】【的】【作】【文】【,】【当】【写】【作】【欲】【望】【和】【冲】【动】【到】【来】【之】【时】【,】【作】【者】【常】【常】【会】【动】【情】【动】【心】【,】【行】【文】【时】【也】【就】【文】【思】【泉】【涌】【、】【得】【心】【应】【手】【。】【因】【此】【,】【作】【文】【的】【情】【则】【是】【作】【文】【的】【灵】【魂】【。】【教】【师】【在】【作】【文】【教】【学】【中】【应】【善】【于】【创】【设】【情】【境】【,】【让】【学】【生】【有】【置】【身】【于】【情】【境】【之】【中】【,】【进】【行】【情】【感】【体】【验】【。】【借】【助】【媒】【体】【,】【展】【现】【情】【景】【;】【游】【戏】【表】【演】【,】【加】【深】【体】【验】【;】【虚】【拟】【世】【界】【,】【幻】【想】【设】【计】【;】【激】【情】【演】【说】【,】【推】【波】【助】【澜】【;】【音】【乐】【渲】【染】【,】【带】【入】【意】【境】【;】【亲】【身】【体】【验】【,】【感】【受】【情】【景】【等】【多】【种】【方】【式】【把】【学】【生】【带】【入】【作】【文】【情】【境】【之】【中】【,】【真】【实】【的】【酝】【酿】【感】【情】【,】【进】【行】【情】【感】【体】【验】【。】【这】【样】【的】【作】【文】【相】【信】【一】【定】【能】【表】【达】【出】【真】【情】【实】【感】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【学】【生】【的】【想】【象】【能】【力】【、】【写】【作】【灵】【感】【与】【音】【乐】【渗】【透】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【听】【音】【乐】【想】【象】【作】【文】【实】【际】【上】【作】【文】【的】【一】【种】【形】【式】【,】【最】【终】【是】【作】【文】【,】【音】【乐】【仅】【仅】【是】【一】【种】【媒】【介】【、】【载】【体】【,】【是】【一】【种】【方】【法】【、】【手】【段】【、】【刺】【激】【物】【。】【听】【的】【过】【程】【中】【学】【生】【会】【产】【生】【情】【感】【的】【冲】【动】【,】【藉】【此】【把】【孩】【子】【带】【进】【已】【有】【的】【生】【活】【经】【验】【中】【,】【放】【飞】【想】【象】【,】【落】【实】【到】【写】【作】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【1】【听】【音】【乐】【想】【象】【作】【文】【的】【写】【作】【方】【向】【。】【听】【音】【乐】【想】【象】【作】【文】【,】【顾】【名】【思】【义】【,】【必】【然】【是】【先】【听】【后】【写】【,】【学】【生】【最】【终】【转】【化】【成】【文】【字】【的】【形】【式】【和】【内】【容】【有】【时】【候】【不】【完】【全】【甚】【至】【完】【全】【不】【是】【老】【师】【预】【计】【要】【得】【到】【的】【东】【西】【,】【其】【反】【差】【效】【应】【有】【时】【带】【来】【的】【是】【授】【课】【老】【师】【巨】【大】【的】【失】【落】【。】【从】【学】【生】【最】【终】【形】【成】【的】【作】【文】【内】【容】【看】【,】【有】【的】【是】【会】【由】【音】【乐】【想】【起】【的】【一】【个】【片】【段】【性】【场】【面】【;】【有】【的】【变】【成】【了】【听】【后】【感】【;】【有】【的】【则】【由】【听】【音】【乐】【想】【象】【的】【画】【面】【具】【体】【展】【开】【,】【大】【力】【挖】【掘】【细】【节】【因】【素】【而】【最】【终】【构】【成】【声】【色】【俱】【佳】【、】【结】【构】【完】【整】【的】【故】【事】【;】【有】【的】【则】【由】【音】【乐】【引】【起】【某】【种】【情】【感】【,】【由】【情】【感】【调】【动】【起】【生】【活】【的】【积】【淀】【而】【演】【变】【成】【的】【动】【情】【入】【境】【的】【回】【忆】【;】【有】【的】【是】【要】【求】【想】【象】【内】【容】【与】【音】【乐】【旋】【律】【发】【展】【共】【起】【伏】【,】【构】【成】【波】【澜】【变】【化】【的】【故】【事】【…】【…】【这】【些】【不】【同】【的】【作】【文】【内】【容】【,】【体】【现】【在】【学】【生】【的】【具】【体】【习】【作】【上】【确】【有】【优】【劣】【之】【分】【,】【但】【都】【从】【不】【同】【角】【度】【拓】【宽】【了】【听】【音】【乐】【想】【象】【作】【文】【的】【内】【容】【空】【间】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【2】【听】【音】【乐】【想】【象】【作】【文】【的】【结】【构】【模】【式】【。】【课】【堂】【结】【构】【可】【以】【呈】【现】【出】【以】【下】【几】【种】【模】【式】【类】【型】【:】【1】【.】【先】【分】【想】【后】【总】【写】【型】【。】【教】【师】【可】【以】【先】【让】【学】【生】【听】【一】【遍】【乐】【曲】【,】【对】【乐】【曲】【的】【整】【个】【旋】【律】【和】【情】【感】【基】【调】【形】【成】【认】【识】【。】【然】【后】【分】【节】【欣】【赏】【,】【欣】【赏】【中】【想】【象】【。】【最】【后】【要】【求】【学】【生】【命】【题】【、】【写】【作】【、】【评】【议】【修】【改】【。】【2】【.】【重】【复】【欣】【赏】【、】【完】【善】【想】【象】【后】【写】【作】【。】【教】【师】【可】【以】【先】【要】【求】【听】【音】【乐】【谈】【感】【受】【,】【并】【启】【发】【学】【生】【和】【生】【活】【中】【的】【具】【体】【事】【件】【、】【场】【面】【联】【系】【起】【来】【;】【第】【二】【遍】【听】【音】【乐】【,】【要】【求】【学】【生】【将】【最】【感】【人】【的】【场】【面】【描】【画】【下】【来】【;】【最】【后】【定】【题】【、】【写】【作】【、】【评】【议】【修】【改】【。】【3】【.】【寓】【想】【于】【写】【型】【。】【教】【师】【多】【媒】【体】【出】【示】【的】【课】【堂】【流】【程】【是】【对】【这】【一】【结】【构】【模】【式】【的】【最】【好】【说】【明】【:】【初】【听】【全】【曲】【,】【想】【画】【面】【—】【—】【再】【听】【片】【段】【,】【想】【具】【体】【—】【—】【三】【听】【片】【段】【,】【写】【精】【彩】【—】【—】【再】【听】【全】【曲】【,】【写】【完】【整】【。】【4】【.】【先】【听】【后】【写】【、】【乐】【曲】【引】【路】【型】【。】【教】【师】【可】【以】【先】【引】【导】【学】【生】【欣】【赏】【乐】【曲】【谈】【感】【受】【,】【然】【后】【介】【绍】【乐】【曲】【的】【名】【字】【、】【创】【作】【背】【景】【激】【起】【学】【生】【的】【情】【感】【共】【鸣】【,】【大】【量】【引】【用】【古】【人】【诗】【句】【将】【思】【乡】【恋】【家】【之】【情】【进】【行】【生】【发】【渲】【染】【;】【引】【导】【学】【生】【从】【对】【家】【的】【感】【受】【谈】【起】【,】【联】【系】【到】【生】【活】【总】【具】【体】【的】【感】【人】【的】【家】【中】【事】【;】【启】【发】【学】【生】【寻】【找】【发】【现】【事】【中】【最】【感】【动】【自】【己】【的】【细】【节】【;】【然】【后】【由】【自】【己】【的】【幸】【福】【眷】【恋】【联】【想】【到】【很】【多】【不】【能】【回】【家】【的】【人】【的】【切】【肤】【之】【痛】【,】【相】【思】【之】【苦】【;】【最】【后】【在】【学】【生】【情】【感】【激】【荡】【时】【引】【导】【学】【生】【把】【自】【己】【的】【感】【动】【写】【下】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【3】【听】【音】【乐】【想】【象】【作】【文】【教】【师】【的】【引】【导】【与】【评】【价】【。】【听】【音】【乐】【想】【象】【作】【文】【作】【为】【联】【想】【作】【文】【的】【一】【种】【特】【殊】【形】【式】【,】【学】【生】【思】【维】【的】【触】【角】【由】【乐】【曲】【的】【情】【感】【和】【旋】【律】【变】【化】【牵】【动】【,】【天】【马】【行】【空】【,】【无】【所】【羁】【冸】【。】【由】【于】【学】【生】【个】【人】【的】【生】【活】【阅】【历】【和】【阅】【读】【经】【验】【、】【思】【维】【形】【式】【存】【在】【巨】【大】【差】【异】【,】【因】【此】【作】【文】【的】【内】【容】【可】【以】【在】【现】【实】【和】【幻】【想】【之】【间】【游】【弋】【,】【打】【通】【过】【去】【现】【在】【和】【未】【来】【的】【界】【限】【,】【纵】【横】【往】【来】【,】【无】【所】【不】【至】【。】【内】【容】【的】【复】【杂】【性】【和】【思】【维】【方】【向】【的】【多】【维】【性】【要】【求】【教】【师】【掌】【握】【高】【度】【的】【课】【堂】【管】【理】【、】【组】【织】【、】【调】【节】【技】【巧】【,】【既】【要】【从】【整】【体】【出】【发】【,】【把】【握】【写】【作】【的】【大】【方】【向】【,】【又】【要】【善】【于】【从】【学】【生】【习】【作】【的】【具】【体】【内】【容】【入】【手】【,】【以】【点】【带】【面】【,】【引】【导】【点】【拨】【,】【将】【对】【个】【别】【学】【生】【作】【文】【的】【深】【入】【评】【议】【转】【化】【成】【全】【体】【学】【生】【的】【习】【作】【共】【识】【。】【教】【师】【如】【果】【没】【有】【驾】【驭】【课】【堂】【教】【学】【的】【高】【超】【艺】【术】【,】【难】【免】【顾】【此】【失】【彼】【,】【手】【忙】【脚】【乱】【以】【至】【于】【无】【所】【适】【从】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【音】【乐】【与】【语】【文】【有】【着】【内】【在】【的】【联】【系】【,】【它】【走】【进】【语】【文】【课】【堂】【使】【语】【文】【教】【材】【更】【加】【生】【动】【形】【象】【,】【更】【加】【光】【彩】【夺】【目】【,】【从】【而】【让】【学】【生】【更】【积】【极】【的】【走】【近】【文】【本】【,】【在】【投】【入】【中】【提】【高】【阅】【读】【能】【力】【。】【对】【于】【学】【生】【来】【说】【,】【音】【乐】【插】【入】【语】【文】【课】【堂】【,】【能】【够】【使】【他】【们】【的】【思】【维】【更】【加】【活】【跃】【,】【能】【够】【帮】【助】【他】【们】【展】【开】【想】【象】【的】【翅】【膀】【,】【不】【断】【提】【高】【他】【们】【的】【写】【作】【能】【力】【;】【更】【深】【一】【步】【说】【,】【音】【乐】【辅】【助】【语】【文】【学】【习】【,】【还】【能】【使】【学】【生】【的】【情】【感】【、】【态】【度】【、】【价】【值】【观】【得】【到】【进】【一】【步】【的】【提】【升】【。】【语】【文】【是】【一】【门】【综】【合】【性】【较】【强】【、】【复】【杂】【的】【学】【科】【,】【它】【涉】【及】【面】【广】【、】【内】【容】【丰】【富】【。】【充】【分】【运】【用】【学】【生】【对】【音】【乐】【的】【爱】【好】【,】【去】【调】【动】【学】【习】【语】【文】【的】【积】【极】【性】【,】【把】【娱】【乐】【性】【、】【知】【识】【性】【、】【趣】【味】【性】【、】【艺】【术】【性】【融】【为】【一】【体】【,】【能】【更】【好】【的】【培】【养】【学】【生】【的】【悟】【性】【、】【灵】【气】【及】【审】【美】【情】【趣】【,】【从】【而】【有】【利】【于】【学】【生】【综】【合】【素】【质】【的】【提】【高】【。】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【摘】【 】【要】【:】【笔】【者】【根】【据】【多】【年】【语】【文】【教】【学】【中】【的】【观】【察】【和】【思】【考】【,】【提】【出】【了】【在】【作】【文】【教】【学】【中】【容】【易】【被】【老】【师】【忽】【略】【的】【几】【个】【问】【题】【,】【并】【提】【出】【相】【应】【的】【对】【策】【。】【如】【:】【要】【练】【好】【作】【文】【之】【外】【的】【功】【夫】【,】【扩】【大】【学】【生】【的】【课】【外】【阅】【读】【以】【开】【拓】【视】【野】【、】【积】【累】【素】【材】【,】【要】【重】【视】【字】【词】【句】【的】【训】【练】【,】【如】【何】【坚】【持】【原】【创】【反】【对】【抄】【袭】【的】【问】【题】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【关】【键】【词】【:】【作】【文】【之】【外】【的】【功】【夫】【;】【基】【本】【功】【;】【细】【节】【;】【常】【中】【出】【新】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【教】【学】【是】【语】【文】【教】【学】【的】【重】【要】【组】【成】【部】【分】【,】【老】【师】【们】【在】【作】【文】【教】【学】【上】【可】【谓】【不】【遗】【余】【力】【,】【大】【到】【审】【题】【立】【意】【、】【布】【局】【谋】【篇】【,】【小】【到】【过】【渡】【与】【照】【应】【、】【开】【头】【和】【结】【尾】【的】【技】【巧】【,】【每】【个】【老】【师】【都】【有】【自】【己】【的】【一】【套】【理】【论】【,】【在】【此】【,】【我】【不】【想】【赘】【述】【,】【只】【想】【就】【我】【多】【年】【的】【观】【察】【和】【思】【考】【,】【强】【调】【一】【下】【在】【平】【时】【的】【教】【学】【中】【容】【易】【被】【我】【们】【忽】【略】【的】【几】【个】【问】【题】【,】【与】【大】【家】【一】【起】【探】【讨】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【要】【练】【好】【作】【文】【之】【外】【的】【功】【夫】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【很】【多】【语】【文】【老】【师】【也】【许】【都】【有】【同】【感】【,】【平】【时】【作】【文】【技】【法】【讲】【得】【不】【少】【,】【某】【些】【学】【生】【写】【起】【来】【却】【完】【全】【不】【是】【那】【么】【回】【事】【儿】【,】【要】【么】【根】【本】【没】【有】【中】【心】【,】【东】【扯】【西】【拉】【不】【知】【所】【云】【;】【要】【么】【借】【用】【别】【人】【作】【文】【中】【的】【材】【料】【东】【拼】【西】【凑】【,】【缺】【少】【新】【意】【和】【真】【情】【实】【感】【。】【究】【其】【原】【因】【,】【主】【要】【是】【由】【于】【这】【些】【同】【学】【的】【思】【想】【水】【平】【还】【比】【较】【低】【,】【对】【社】【会】【和】【人】【生】【还】【缺】【乏】【自】【己】【的】【认】【识】【,】【所】【以】【在】【作】【文】【时】【就】【无】【话】【可】【说】【。】【所】【谓】【“】【言】【为】【心】【声】【”】【嘛】【,】【头】【脑】【中】【没】【有】【多】【少】【货】【,】【自】【然】【写】【不】【出】【好】【文】【章】【来】【。】【对】【于】【写】【诗】【,】【陆】【游】【有】【一】【句】【经】【验】【之】【谈】【:】【汝】【果】【欲】【学】【诗】【,】【功】【夫】【在】【诗】【外】【。】【同】【理】【,】【作】【文】【的】【大】【部】【分】【功】【夫】【也】【在】【作】【文】【之】【外】【,】【是】【我】【们】【提】【前】【不】【得】【不】【做】【的】【。】【这】【就】【要】【求】【我】【们】【语】【文】【老】【师】【在】【平】【时】【的】【教】【学】【中】【,】【要】【充】【分】【利】【用】【各】【种】【资】【源】【,】【丰】【富】【其】【心】【灵】【,】【陶】【冶】【其】【情】【操】【,】【开】【拓】【其】【视】【野】【,】【提】【高】【他】【们】【的】【认】【识】【水】【平】【。】【我】【们】【应】【该】【有】【意】【识】【地】【引】【导】【学】【生】【树】【立】【正】【确】【的】【审】【美】【观】【、】【历】【史】【观】【、】【价】【值】【观】【、】【人】【生】【观】【等】【,】【把】【学】【生】【培】【养】【成】【心】【理】【健】【康】【、】【情】【趣】【多】【样】【的】【具】【有】【健】【全】【人】【格】【的】【人】【。】【果】【真】【如】【此】【,】【就】【如】【同】【为】【学】【生】【的】【写】【作】【找】【到】【了】【滔】【滔】【不】【绝】【的】【源】【头】【活】【水】【,】【学】【生】【作】【起】【文】【章】【来】【不】【就】【水】【到】【渠】【成】【顺】【理】【成】【章】【了】【吗】【?】【欲】【教】【作】【文】【,】【先】【教】【做】【人】【。】【当】【然】【,】【教】【书】【育】【人】【是】【每】【个】【老】【师】【义】【不】【容】【辞】【的】【责】【任】【,】【不】【是】【语】【文】【老】【师】【的】【“】【专】【利】【”】【,】【只】【是】【语】【文】【老】【师】【更】【应】【该】【充】【分】【利】【用】【语】【文】【学】【科】【特】【有】【的】【教】【学】【资】【源】【,】【发】【挥】【更】【大】【的】【作】【用】【而】【已】【。】【把】【丰】【富】【学】【生】【心】【灵】【的】【任】【务】【贯】【穿】【于】【作】【文】【教】【学】【的】【始】【终】【,】【你】【做】【到】【了】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【扩】【大】【课】【外】【阅】【读】【,】【开】【拓】【学】【生】【视】【野】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【课】【外】【阅】【读】【,】【能】【极】【大】【地】【调】【动】【学】【生】【学】【习】【的】【积】【极】【性】【,】【开】【拓】【其】【视】【野】【,】【丰】【富】【知】【识】【储】【备】【,】【陶】【冶】【情】【操】【,】【提】【高】【鉴】【赏】【水】【平】【。】【课】【外】【阅】【读】【量】【大】【的】【学】【生】【,】【其】【作】【文】【水】【平】【自】【然】【较】【高】【,】【这】【是】【稍】【加】【留】【意】【就】【可】【以】【发】【现】【的】【道】【理】【。】【但】【是】【,】【由】【于】【现】【在】【升】【学】【压】【力】【大】【,】【课】【业】【负】【担】【重】【,】【一】【些】【老】【师】【甚】【至】【明】【令】【禁】【止】【学】【生】【看】【课】【外】【书】【,】【认】【为】【那】【是】【不】【务】【正】【业】【。】【此】【种】【做】【法】【而】【又】【想】【提】【高】【学】【生】【的】【作】【文】【水】【平】【,】【岂】【不】【是】【缘】【木】【求】【鱼】【?】【所】【以】【,】【我】【认】【为】【老】【师】【们】【要】【抛】【弃】【急】【功】【近】【利】【的】【做】【法】【,】【不】【要】【让】【学】【生】【死】【啃】【课】【本】【,】【而】【要】【让】【其】【在】【更】【广】【阔】【的】【天】【地】【里】【获】【取】【阳】【光】【雨】【露】【的】【滋】【养】【,】【那】【样】【,】【学】【生】【写】【起】【作】【文】【来】【,】【就】【能】【文】【思】【如】【泉】【涌】【,】【下】【笔】【如】【有】【神】【。】【不】【至】【于】【苦】【思】【冥】【想】【,】【东】【拼】【西】【凑】【。】【常】【言】【道】【:】【“】【巧】【妇】【难】【为】【无】【米】【之】【炊】【”】【。】【我】【们】【给】【学】【生】【准】【备】【了】【足】【够】【多】【的】【“】【米】【”】【了】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【需】【要】【强】【调】【的】【是】【:】【课】【外】【阅】【读】【不】【能】【一】【味】【的】【贪】【多】【求】【快】【,】【要】【让】【学】【生】【养】【成】【圈】【点】【勾】【画】【以】【及】【做】【摘】【抄】【等】【习】【惯】【,】【同】【时】【,】【老】【师】【还】【要】【对】【学】【生】【的】【阅】【读】【内】【容】【和】【方】【法】【进】【行】【指】【导】【,】【以】【提】【高】【阅】【读】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【重】【视】【字】【词】【句】【,】【练】【好】【基】【本】【功】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【些】【初】【高】【中】【老】【师】【往】【往】【很】【重】【视】【布】【局】【谋】【篇】【的】【训】【练】【,】【却】【忽】【视】【了】【字】【、】【词】【、】【句】【的】【训】【练】【,】【认】【为】【那】【些】【是】【小】【学】【老】【师】【的】【事】【情】【。】【结】【果】【,】【学】【生】【的】【作】【文】【中】【就】【错】【字】【连】【篇】【,】【字】【也】【写】【得】【“】【龙】【飞】【凤】【舞】【”】【,】【用】【词】【不】【当】【、】【语】【言】【干】【巴】【、】【语】【句】【不】【通】【等】【毛】【病】【随】【处】【可】【见】【。】【这】【样】【的】【作】【文】【,】【即】【使】【有】【新】【颖】【的】【立】【意】【构】【思】【,】【也】【会】【被】【它】【的】【语】【言】【的】【杂】【草】【遮】【盖】【。】【我】【在】【讲】【解】【课】【文】【时】【,】【特】【别】【注】【意】【字】【词】【的】【讲】【解】【,】【不】【仅】【给】【出】【准】【确】【的】【注】【释】【,】【而】【且】【总】【要】【让】【学】【生】【学】【会】【运】【用】【。】【在】【批】【改】【作】【文】【时】【,】【我】【把】【作】【文】【中】【错】【误】【频】【率】【高】【的】【字】【词】【记】【录】【下】【来】【,】【讲】【评】【作】【文】【时】【逐】【一】【讲】【解】【。】【作】【文】【中】【出】【现】【的】【病】【句】【,】【也】【当】【堂】【分】【析】【,】【指】【出】【病】【因】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【.】【重】【视】【细】【节】【描】【写】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【好】【多】【学】【生】【常】【常】【苦】【于】【作】【文】【写】【不】【够】【字】【数】【,】【还】【有】【一】【些】【学】【生】【把】【本】【来】【生】【动】【的】【故】【事】【写】【得】【干】【巴】【巴】【的】【。】【究】【其】【原】【因】【,】【往】【往】【就】【在】【于】【学】【生】【对】【细】【节】【描】【写】【重】【视】【不】【够】【,】【造】【成】【作】【文】【的】【重】【点】【不】【突】【出】【,】【影】【响】【了】【表】【达】【效】【果】【。】【在】【周】【记】【中】【,】【我】【经】【常】【对】【学】【生】【进】【行】【景】【物】【描】【写】【、】【人】【物】【的】【外】【貌】【、】【语】【言】【、】【动】【作】【、】【心】【理】【描】【写】【等】【专】【项】【训】【练】【,】【并】【要】【求】【学】【生】【注】【意】【观】【察】【周】【围】【的】【事】【物】【,】【以】【培】【养】【学】【生】【仔】【细】【观】【察】【的】【习】【惯】【,】【收】【到】【了】【不】【错】【的】【效】【果】【。】【不】【仅】【如】【此】【,】【有】【些】【细】【节】【还】【能】【成】【为】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【的】【亮】【点】【。】【如】【在】【写】【有】【关】【母】【爱】【的】【作】【文】【时】【,】【同】【学】【们】【常】【常】【写】【妈】【妈】【在】【雨】【天】【为】【他】【送】【伞】【、】【背】【着】【他】【上】【医】【院】【等】【,】【千】【篇】【一】【律】【、】【毫】【无】【新】【意】【。】【可】【有】【一】【位】【同】【学】【写】【她】【妈】【妈】【每】【天】【晚】【上】【检】【查】【她】【是】【否】【睡】【好】【后】【轻】【轻】【地】【关】【上】【她】【的】【房】【门】【时】【的】【关】【门】【声】【总】【是】【那】【么】【轻】【,】【她】【曾】【经】【反】【复】【地】【试】【验】【,】【都】【做】【不】【到】【像】【妈】【妈】【那】【样】【轻】【,】【这】【件】【小】【事】【让】【她】【体】【会】【到】【母】【爱】【的】【伟】【大】【,】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【也】【因】【为】【关】【注】【了】【生】【活】【中】【的】【细】【节】【而】【深】【深】【地】【打】【动】【了】【每】【一】【位】【读】【者】【。】【由】【此】【可】【见】【,】【细】【节】【决】【不】【等】【于】【细】【枝】【末】【节】【,】【理】【应】【引】【起】【广】【大】【师】【生】【足】【够】【的】【重】【视】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【5】【.】【坚】【持】【常】【中】【出】【新】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【教】【语】【文】【的】【时】【间】【长】【了】【,】【我】【们】【常】【常】【会】【发】【现】【有】【新】【意】【的】【作】【文】【太】【少】【了】【。】【由】【于】【学】【生】【的】【阅】【历】【有】【限】【并】【且】【经】【历】【大】【同】【小】【异】【,】【要】【写】【出】【别】【具】【一】【格】【的】【作】【文】【,】【确】【实】【不】【容】【易】【。】【但】【只】【要】【师】【生】【都】【把】【创】【新】【作】【为】【努】【力】【的】【方】【向】【,】【还】【是】【可】【以】【做】【到】【常】【中】【出】【新】【的】【。】【正】【如】【没】【有】【两】【片】【完】【全】【相】【同】【的】【树】【叶】【,】【每】【个】【人】【的】【心】【灵】【都】【是】【一】【座】【独】【一】【无】【二】【的】【宝】【藏】【。】【生】【活】【经】【历】【虽】【然】【大】【同】【小】【异】【,】【但】【因】【为】【每】【个】【人】【对】【生】【活】【的】【感】【受】【和】【认】【识】【不】【同】【,】【写】【出】【的】【文】【章】【也】【应】【该】【不】【同】【。】【只】【要】【以】【真】【心】【写】【真】【情】【,】【应】【该】【有】【不】【错】【的】【效】【果】【。】【所】【以】【,】【我】【们】【要】【始】【终】【如】【一】【地】【要】【求】【和】【鼓】【励】【学】【生】【坚】【持】【原】【创】【,】【反】【对】【抄】【袭】【,】【坚】【持】【用】【自】【己】【的】【眼】【睛】【去】【观】【察】【世】【界】【,】【用】【自】【己】【的】【笔】【去】【描】【绘】【生】【活】【,】【努】【力】【从】【平】【凡】【的】【生】【活】【中】【发】【现】【不】【平】【凡】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【遗】【憾】【的】【是】【,】【有】【少】【数】【老】【师】【为】【了】【学】【生】【的】【作】【文】【能】【更】【吸】【引】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【眼】【球】【,】【为】【了】【迅】【速】【提】【高】【学】【生】【的】【作】【文】【水】【平】【,】【他】【们】【更】【愿】【意】【让】【学】【生】【多】【背】【记】【一】【些】【别】【人】【文】【章】【中】【的】【精】【彩】【的】【句】【子】【,】【模】【仿】【别】【人】【的】【好】【的】【开】【头】【和】【结】【尾】【,】【如】【此】【等】【等】【,】【岂】【不】【是】【舍】【本】【逐】【末】【吗】【?】剧本创作【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【题】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【所】【谓】【波】【澜】【,】【是】【指】【在】【记】【叙】【文】【写】【作】【过】【程】【中】【,】【写】【出】【事】【件】【的】【变】【化】【、】【起】【伏】【,】【避】【免】【平】【铺】【直】【叙】【,】【平】【淡】【无】【奇】【。】【事】【实】【上】【,】【许】【多】【事】【情】【的】【发】【生】【都】【并】【非】【一】【帆】【风】【顺】【,】【而】【是】【有】【迂】【回】【、】【有】【曲】【折】【的】【。】【写】【出】【事】【件】【的】【波】【澜】【,】【既】【符】【合】【了】【生】【活】【的】【真】【实】【,】【也】【是】【对】【生】【活】【本】【来】【面】【貌】【的】【艺】【术】【再】【现】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【孙】【犁】【的】【小】【说】【《】【芦】【花】【荡】【》】【,】【写】【水】【上】【交】【通】【员】【老】【头】【子】【护】【送】【抗】【日】【战】【士】【大】【菱】【和】【二】【菱】【回】【芦】【花】【荡】【休】【整】【,】【由】【于】【老】【头】【子】【过】【于】【自】【尊】【和】【自】【信】【,】【导】【致】【大】【菱】【被】【敌】【人】【意】【外】【发】【现】【而】【受】【伤】【,】【这】【是】【小】【说】【出】【现】【的】【第】【一】【个】【波】【澜】【;】【接】【下】【来】【,】【文】【章】【写】【老】【头】【子】【发】【誓】【为】【大】【菱】【报】【仇】【,】【设】【置】【好】【钩】【子】【引】【敌】【人】【上】【钩】【,】【再】【痛】【杀】【鬼】【子】【,】【这】【是】【小】【说】【出】【现】【的】【第】【二】【个】【波】【澜】【。】【情】【节】【的】【波】【澜】【起】【伏】【,】【有】【张】【有】【弛】【,】【不】【仅】【很】【好】【地】【塑】【造】【了】【老】【头】【子】【这】【一】【人】【物】【形】【象】【,】【而】【且】【使】【文】【章】【读】【起】【来】【更】【加】【扣】【人】【心】【弦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【么】【,】【怎】【样】【才】【能】【使】【情】【节】【掀】【起】【波】【澜】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【穿】【插】【分】【合】【,】【张】【弛】【起】【伏】【。】【写】【作】【时】【要】【先】【分】【清】【主】【次】【,】【考】【虑】【好】【哪】【里】【是】【高】【潮】【,】【高】【潮】【处】【应】【如】【何】【展】【现】【酣】【畅】【的】【笔】【墨】【,】【高】【潮】【前】【应】【如】【何】【烘】【托】【铺】【垫】【。】【如】【《】【芦】【花】【荡】【》】【,】【老】【头】【子】【痛】【杀】【鬼】【子】【是】【高】【潮】【,】【此】【前】【写】【老】【头】【子】【过】【于】【自】【尊】【、】【自】【信】【的】【语】【言】【和】【大】【菱】【意】【外】【负】【伤】【是】【铺】【垫】【。】【这】【样】【就】【使】【得】【情】【节】【的】【发】【生】【既】【在】【情】【理】【之】【中】【,】【又】【出】【人】【预】【料】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【环】【环】【相】【扣】【,】【曲】【折】【有】【致】【。】【如】【冯】【骥】【才】【的】【小】【说】【《】【泥】【人】【张】【》】【,】【先】【写】【海】【张】【五】【拿】【泥】【人】【张】【找】【乐】【子】【,】【泥】【人】【张】【不】【动】【声】【色】【地】【用】【“】【鞋】【子】【底】【下】【抠】【出】【的】【一】【块】【泥】【巴】【”】【,】【捏】【出】【泥】【人】【海】【张】【五】【,】【接】【着】【写】【海】【张】【五】【对】【着】【泥】【人】【张】【的】【背】【影】【叫】【道】【:】【“】【这】【破】【手】【艺】【也】【想】【赚】【钱】【,】【贱】【卖】【都】【没】【人】【要】【。】【”】【再】【接】【着】【写】【第】【二】【天】【大】【街】【上】【贱】【卖】【泥】【人】【海】【张】【五】【,】【最】【后】【写】【海】【张】【五】【不】【得】【不】【花】【大】【价】【钱】【,】【把】【所】【有】【的】【泥】【人】【买】【走】【。】【这】【些】【故】【事】【一】【环】【套】【一】【环】【,】【扣】【人】【心】【弦】【又】【曲】【折】【有】【致】【,】【吊】【足】【了】【读】【者】【胃】【口】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【佳】【作】【赏】【析】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【碰】【瓷】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夕】【阳】【西】【下】【,】【晚】【霞】【把】【天】【边】【染】【成】【一】【片】【红】【色】【。】【想】【到】【明】【天】【就】【是】【双】【休】【日】【,】【可】【以】【和】【几】【个】【死】【党】【一】【起】【去】【公】【园】【踏】【青】【,】【我】【心】【里】【那】【个】【美】【啊】【!】【骑】【着】【电】【动】【车】【,】【一】【边】【哼】【着】【“】【江】【南】【s】【t】【y】【l】【e】【”】【,】【一】【边】【观】【赏】【着】【两】【旁】【的】【街】【景】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【在】【我】【准】【备】【拐】【弯】【的】【路】【口】【,】【突】【然】【,】【一】【个】【中】【等】【个】【子】【男】【子】【不】【知】【从】【哪】【里】【窜】【了】【出】【来】【,】【一】【下】【子】【撞】【在】【我】【的】【车】【上】【。】【只】【见】【他】【捂】【着】【肚】【子】【,】【躺】【在】【地】【上】【,】【一】【副】【极】【痛】【苦】【的】【样】【子】【。】【我】【立】【马】【就】【吓】【蒙】【了】【,】【赶】【忙】【对】【他】【说】【:】【“】【对】【不】【起】【,】【对】【不】【起】【,】【我】【真】【的】【没】【看】【见】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【没】【看】【见】【就】【完】【啦】【?】【”】【中】【年】【男】【子】【气】【势】【汹】【汹】【地】【说】【:】【“】【现】【在】【摆】【在】【你】【面】【前】【的】【有】【两】【条】【路】【,】【一】【是】【带】【我】【上】【医】【院】【彻】【底】【检】【查】【,】【再】【赔】【我】【营】【养】【费】【、】【误】【工】【费】【;】【二】【是】【马】【上】【私】【了】【赔】【我】【钱】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【的】【大】【声】【嚷】【嚷】【,】【很】【快】【引】【来】【一】【群】【路】【人】【的】【围】【观】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【我】【看】【撞】【得】【也】【不】【重】【,】【如】【果】【没】【什】【么】【大】【碍】【就】【算】【了】【吧】【,】【毕】【竟】【人】【家】【还】【是】【个】【孩】【子】【。】【”】【有】【人】【出】【来】【替】【我】【打】【抱】【不】【平】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【那】【不】【行】【,】【说】【不】【定】【我】【的】【内】【脏】【被】【撞】【坏】【了】【,】【我】【放】【他】【走】【了】【,】【到】【时】【候】【我】【找】【谁】【呀】【?】【”】【中】【年】【男】【子】【一】【副】【不】【依】【不】【饶】【的】【样】【子】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【时】【,】【一】【个】【老】【爷】【爷】【走】【了】【过】【来】【,】【对】【中】【年】【男】【子】【说】【:】【“】【小】【伙】【子】【,】【我】【看】【你】【好】【像】【没】【什】【么】【事】【呀】【!】【你】【不】【会】【是】【讹】【人】【的】【吧】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【你】【人】【老】【眼】【花】【,】【能】【看】【得】【清】【吗】【?】【再】【说】【被】【撞】【的】【又】【不】【是】【你】【,】【你】【怎】【么】【知】【道】【我】【没】【事】【?】【”】【中】【年】【男】【子】【显】【得】【万】【分】【委】【屈】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【小】【家】【伙】【,】【看】【你】【穿】【着】【也】【不】【差】【,】【家】【里】【应】【该】【不】【差】【钱】【吧】【,】【快】【回】【家】【拿】【钱】【去】【,】【把】【车】【押】【在】【这】【儿】【。】【”】【中】【年】【男】【子】【捂】【着】【肚】【子】【又】【说】【,】【“】【拿】【钱】【来】【我】【们】【就】【私】【了】【,】【免】【得】【上】【医】【院】【麻】【烦】【,】【还】【耽】【误】【你】【学】【习】【,】【哎】【哟】【哎】【哟】【,】【痛】【死】【我】【了】【!】【”】【他】【开】【始】【哼】【了】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【着】【中】【年】【男】【子】【一】【副】【无】【赖】【的】【样】【子】【,】【围】【观】【的】【人】【也】【爱】【莫】【能】【助】【。】【我】【知】【道】【今】【天】【摊】【上】【大】【事】【了】【,】【但】【我】【总】【觉】【得】【哪】【儿】【有】【点】【儿】【不】【对】【劲】【儿】【。】【于】【是】【,】【趁】【中】【年】【男】【子】【对】【围】【观】【的】【人】【群】【晒】【同】【情】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【悄】【悄】【地】【给】【在】【派】【出】【所】【工】【作】【的】【爸】【爸】【发】【了】【一】【条】【求】【助】【信】【息】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【当】【中】【年】【男】【子】【再】【次】【催】【我】【回】【家】【拿】【钱】【的】【时】【候】【,】【远】【处】【传】【来】【了】【警】【车】【的】【鸣】【叫】【。】【中】【年】【男】【子】【的】【脸】【色】【开】【始】【发】【白】【,】【神】【情】【也】【紧】【张】【起】【来】【,】【不】【过】【他】【还】【是】【躺】【在】【地】【上】【,】【只】【是】【哼】【哼】【的】【声】【音】【加】【大】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【很】【快】【,】【警】【车】【在】【人】【群】【外】【面】【停】【了】【下】【来】【,】【人】【们】【都】【屏】【住】【呼】【吸】【,】【空】【气】【一】【下】【子】【凝】【固】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【张】【小】【虎】【,】【说】【说】【你】【这】【是】【第】【几】【次】【“】【碰】【瓷】【”】【了】【?】【”】【传】【来】【一】【个】【严】【厉】【的】【声】【音】【。】【回】【头】【一】【看】【,】【果】【然】【是】【爸】【爸】【,】【他】【身】【边】【还】【站】【着】【一】【个】【威】【武】【的】【警】【察】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【想】【到】【一】【个】【鲤】【鱼】【打】【挺】【,】【中】【年】【男】【子】【从】【地】【上】【站】【了】【起】【来】【。】【“】【对】【不】【起】【,】【李】【所】【长】【,】【我】【错】【了】【,】【我】【错】【了】【,】【我】【该】【死】【,】【该】【死】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【来】【这】【家】【伙】【认】【识】【爸】【爸】【呀】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爸】【爸】【转】【过】【身】【来】【,】【对】【围】【观】【的】【人】【群】【说】【:】【“】【他】【是】【专】【门】【“】【碰】【瓷】【”】【的】【,】【在】【我】【们】【派】【出】【所】【已】【经】【报】【到】【好】【几】【回】【了】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【我】【早】【看】【出】【这】【人】【不】【地】【道】【了】【,】【只】【是】【没】【有】【证】【据】【点】【破】【他】【。】【”】【那】【个】【老】【爷】【爷】【指】【着】【中】【年】【男】【子】【气】【得】【胡】【子】【发】【抖】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【是】【啊】【,】【年】【纪】【轻】【轻】【的】【,】【干】【什】【么】【不】【好】【,】【非】【要】【干】【这】【种】【缺】【德】【事】【!】【”】【人】【们】【纷】【纷】【指】【责】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【张】【小】【虎】【,】【要】【不】【要】【上】【医】【院】【检】【查】【检】【查】【?】【”】【爸】【爸】【意】【味】【深】【长】【地】【问】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【不】【用】【了】【,】【不】【用】【了】【,】【不】【是】【他】【撞】【的】【我】【,】【是】【我】【故】【意】【往】【他】【车】【上】【撞】【的】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【听】【了】【张】【小】【虎】【的】【话】【,】【人】【们】【全】【都】【笑】【了】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【希】【望】【你】【以】【后】【好】【好】【做】【人】【,】【凭】【自】【己】【的】【劳】【动】【吃】【饭】【,】【不】【要】【再】【做】【这】【种】【违】【法】【的】【事】【了】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【严】【厉】【地】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【明】【白】【,】【明】【白】【!】【”】【说】【完】【,】【中】【年】【男】【人】【掩】【着】【脸】【,】【在】【众】【人】【的】【嘲】【笑】【声】【中】【灰】【溜】【溜】【地】【逃】【走】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【记】【叙】【文】【,】【先】【写】【中】【年】【男】【子】【被】【“】【撞】【”】【后】【向】【“】【我】【”】【敲】【诈】【和】【众】【人】【的】【围】【观】【反】【应】【,】【这】【是】【情】【节】【初】【始】【的】【第】【一】【个】【波】【澜】【;】【接】【着】【写】【“】【我】【”】【巧】【妙】【地】【向】【爸】【爸】【求】【助】【,】【爸】【爸】【出】【警】【戳】【穿】【中】【年】【男】【子】【的】【骗】【局】【,】【中】【年】【男】【子】【态】【度】【的】【巨】【变】【和】【众】【人】【的】【反】【应】【,】【这】【是】【情】【节】【掀】【起】【的】【第】【二】【个】【波】【澜】【。】【两】【个】【波】【澜】【,】【环】【环】【相】【扣】【,】【推】【动】【着】【情】【节】【的】【发】【展】【,】【使】【故】【事】【张】【弛】【起】【伏】【,】【曲】【折】【有】【致】【,】【再】【现】【了】【一】【个】【自】【取】【其】【辱】【又】【愚】【蠢】【的】【“】【碰】【瓷】【”】【者】【形】【象】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【美】【文】【链】【接】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【几】【生】【修】【得】【到】【梅】【花】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【李】【榕】【桦】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【万】【紫】【千】【红】【的】【花】【的】【世】【界】【,】【梅】【花】【是】【最】【特】【立】【独】【行】【的】【一】【种】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【江】【南】【的】【冬】【天】【还】【未】【过】【去】【,】【寒】【风】【肆】【虐】【,】【雪】【花】【纷】【飞】【,】【万】【木】【都】【在】【沉】【睡】【之】【中】【,】【而】【梅】【花】【却】【在】【这】【时】【,】【绽】【开】【一】【树】【树】【的】【花】【朵】【,】【向】【人】【们】【报】【告】【着】【春】【之】【将】【至】【的】【讯】【息】【。】【她】【不】【管】【桃】【儿】【、】【杏】【儿】【们】【嫉】【妒】【的】【流】【言】【,】【也】【不】【贪】【图】【蜂】【儿】【、】【蝶】【儿】【们】【嗡】【嗡】【的】【追】【捧】【,】【孤】【傲】【豪】【迈】【地】【开】【在】【漫】【天】【飞】【雪】【中】【,】【不】【畏】【严】【寒】【,】【独】【步】【早】【春】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【怒】【号】【的】【狂】【风】【不】【是】【不】【想】【吹】【灭】【她】【的】【火】【焰】【,】【漫】【天】【的】【大】【雪】【不】【是】【不】【想】【掩】【息】【她】【的】【娇】【媚】【,】【而】【她】【却】【在】【凌】【霜】【斗】【雪】【中】【更】【加】【灼】【灼】【有】【神】【。】【那】【纷】【纷】【扬】【扬】【从】【天】【而】【降】【的】【雪】【花】【,】【似】【乎】【成】【了】【他】【玉】【洁】【冰】【清】【的】【知】【音】【,】【心】【魂】【相】【印】【的】【伴】【侣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【无】【锡】【梅】【园】【观】【赏】【过】【梅】【花】【,】【走】【进】【梅】【花】【,】【你】【会】【感】【到】【诗】【意】【像】【湖】【水】【一】【样】【漫】【上】【心】【头】【。】【润】【如】【凝】【脂】【的】【红】【梅】【,】【洁】【如】【瑞】【雪】【的】【白】【眉】【,】【碧】【光】【盈】【盈】【的】【绿】【梅】【,】【明】【艳】【灿】【灿】【的】【黄】【梅】【,】【构】【成】【了】【一】【个】【缤】【纷】【多】【彩】【的】【梅】【的】【世】【界】【。】【小】【小】【的】【花】【朵】【似】【乎】【不】【受】【半】【点】【尘】【埃】【的】【侵】【染】【,】【宛】【若】【悄】【然】【飘】【落】【凡】【尘】【的】【仙】【子】【,】【真】【正】【是】【冰】【肌】【 】【玉】【骨】【。】【你】【若】【拿】【俗】【常】【的】【桃】【花】【、】【杏】【花】【和】【她】【们】【对】【照】【,】【越】【发】【显】【得】【梅】【花】【的】【脱】【俗】【。】【置】【身】【花】【下】【,】【你】【会】【被】【随】【之】【而】【来】【的】【清】【幽】【的】【芳】【馨】【环】【绕】【,】【使】【你】【立】【刻】【想】【到】【“】【暗】【香】【浮】【动】【”】【。】【梅】【花】【的】【香】【气】【不】【像】【梨】【花】【、】【水】【仙】【花】【那】【样】【肥】【硕】【袭】【人】【,】【她】【若】【有】【若】【无】【,】【清】【逸】【幽】【雅】【,】【它】【是】【那】【么】【婉】【约】【和】【内】【敛】【。】【观】【赏】【梅】【的】【枝】【干】【,】【姿】【态】【极】【美】【,】【有】【的】【疏】【影】【横】【斜】【,】【有】【的】【奇】【崛】【突】【兀】【,】【有】【的】【苍】【劲】【朴】【拙】【,】【有】【的】【狂】【放】【洒】【脱】【。】【怪】【不】【得】【古】【人】【说】【“】【梅】【以】【形】【势】【为】【第】【一】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【喜】【欢】【看】【那】【棵】【古】【梅】【,】【虬】【曲】【盘】【错】【,】【势】【如】【游】【龙】【。】【铁】【骨】【嶙】【峋】【、】【古】【朴】【苍】【劲】【的】【枝】【头】【,】【绽】【放】【着】【朵】【朵】【温】【润】【率】【真】【的】【红】【梅】【,】【那】【种】【强】【烈】【的】【对】【比】【给】【你】【以】【心】【灵】【的】【撞】【击】【,】【无】【法】【用】【语】【言】【描】【述】【。】【仿】【佛】【眼】【前】【的】【梅】【花】【是】【从】【悠】【远】【的】【历】【史】【深】【处】【走】【来】【,】【她】【曾】【与】【宋】【代】【林】【和】【靖】【相】【伴】【相】【守】【,】【在】【西】【湖】【孤】【山】【朦】【胧】【的】【月】【色】【下】【,】【“】【疏】【影】【横】【斜】【水】【清】【浅】【,】【暗】【香】【浮】【动】【月】【黄】【昏】【”】【;】【她】【曾】【和】【画】【家】【王】【冕】【相】【交】【,】【是】【王】【冕】【笔】【下】【“】【不】【要】【人】【夸】【颜】【色】【好】【,】【只】【留】【清】【气】【满】【乾】【坤】【”】【的】【那】【幅】【墨】【梅】【的】【范】【本】【,】【在】【王】【冕】【精】【心】【经】【营】【的】【梅】【园】【里】【度】【过】【许】【多】【春】【夏】【秋】【冬】【。】【她】【是】【陆】【游】【一】【生】【痴】【迷】【的】【梅】【花】【,】【她】【是】【王】【维】【、】【苏】【轼】【、】【杨】【万】【里】【、】【范】【大】【成】【他】【们】【曾】【经】【反】【复】【歌】【咏】【的】【梅】【花】【,】【她】【是】【被】【鲁】【迅】【识】【为】【“】【只】【有】【梅】【花】【是】【知】【己】【”】【的】【那】【一】【树】【,】【她】【是】【历】【代】【有】【道】【的】【君】【子】【仰】【慕】【钦】【敬】【,】【视】【为】【修】【养】【的】【典】【范】【,】【感】【叹】【“】【几】【生】【修】【得】【到】【梅】【花】【”】【那】【一】【树】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【特】【立】【独】【行】【的】【梅】【花】【从】【历】【史】【深】【处】【走】【来】【,】【那】【冰】【肌】【玉】【骨】【的】【韵】【致】【,】【高】【标】【清】【雅】【的】【圣】【洁】【,】【横】【斜】【疏】【美】【的】【仙】【姿】【,】【傲】【岸】【坚】【贞】【的】【风】【骨】【,】【凌】【霜】【斗】【雪】【的】【意】【志】【,】【独】【步】【早】【春】【的】【气】【魄】【,】【铸】【成】【了】【华】【夏】【民】【族】【的】【心】【魂】【,】【成】【为】【了】【中】【华】【民】【族】【代】【代】【相】【袭】【的】【品】【格】【和】【精】【神】【。】【站】【在】【梅】【花】【前】【,】【无】【法】【用】【语】【言】【表】【达】【自】【己】【的】【心】【境】【,】【还】【是】【陆】【游】【说】【的】【好】【啊】【,】【“】【何】【方】【化】【身】【千】【亿】【?】【一】【树】【梅】【花】【一】【放】【翁】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【选】【自】【《】【青】【海】【湖】【》】【,】【2】【0】【1】【4】【年】【第】【2】【期】【,】【有】【删】【改】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【品】【 】【&】【n】【b】【s】【p】【;】【读】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【品】【综】【合】【运】【用】【了】【多】【种】【表】【达】【方】【式】【巧】【妙】【地】【将】【叙】【述】【经】【历】【、】【描】【摹】【梅】【花】【、】【抒】【发】【情】【感】【、】【表】【达】【意】【趣】【融】【为】【一】【体】【。】【尤】【其】【是】【恰】【当】【地】【运】【用】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【,】【把】【对】【梅】【花】【的】【赞】【美】【之】【情】【抒】【发】【得】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【。】【文】【中】【多】【处】【运】【用】【排】【比】【手】【法】【,】【抒】【发】【了】【作】【者】【在】【梅】【园】【赏】【梅】【时】【因】【梅】【花】【颜】【色】【缤】【纷】【多】【彩】【而】【满】【怀】【诗】【意】【之】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【另】【外】【,】【文】【中】【还】【运】【用】【了】【拟】【人】【、】【比】【喻】【等】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【来】【抒】【发】【情】【怀】【。】【譬】【如】【“】【她】【不】【管】【桃】【儿】【、】【杏】【儿】【们】【嫉】【妒】【的】【流】【言】【,】【也】【不】【贪】【图】【蜂】【儿】【、】【蝶】【儿】【们】【嗡】【嗡】【的】【追】【捧】【,】【孤】【傲】【豪】【迈】【地】【开】【在】【漫】【天】【飞】【雪】【中】【,】【不】【畏】【严】【寒】【,】【独】【步】【早】【春】【。】【”】【 】【这】【句】【话】【运】【用】【了】【拟】【人】【的】【修】【辞】【方】【法】【,】【写】【出】【了】【梅】【花】【不】【畏】【严】【寒】【,】【独】【自】【开】【放】【在】【漫】【天】【飞】【雪】【中】【的】【情】【态】【,】【表】【达】【了】【作】【者】【对】【梅】【花】【的】【喜】【爱】【、】【仰】【慕】【和】【赞】【美】【之】【情】【。】【加】【上】【引】【用】【大】【量】【诗】【句】【,】【进】【一】【步】【表】【达】【了】【作】【者】【的】【心】【境】【,】【丰】【富】【了】【文】【章】【的】【意】【蕴】【,】【令】【人】【回】【味】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【美】【文】【链】【接】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【言】【秋】【日】【胜】【春】【朝】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【施】【 】【&】【n】【b】【s】【p】【;】【睿】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【古】【往】【今】【来】【,】【人】【们】【往】【往】【偏】【爱】【春】【天】【,】【春】【天】【的】【风】【是】【“】【吹】【面】【不】【寒】【杨】【柳】【风】【”】【。】【春】【天】【的】【雨】【是】【“】【天】【街】【小】【雨】【润】【如】【酥】【”】【,】【春】【天】【的】【花】【是】【“】【乱】【花】【渐】【欲】【迷】【人】【眼】【”】【,】【春】【天】【的】【草】【是】【“】【燕】【草】【如】【碧】【丝】【”】【,】【一】【切】【都】【是】【那】【么】【可】【爱】【而】【充】【满】【生】【机】【。】【而】【秋】【天】【则】【不】【同】【。】【秋】【天】【的】【风】【是】【“】【秋】【风】【萧】【瑟】【”】【,】【秋】【天】【的】【雨】【是】【“】【牵】【愁】【照】【恨】【动】【离】【情】【”】【,】【秋】【天】【的】【花】【是】【“】【满】【纸】【自】【怜】【题】【素】【怨】【,】【片】【言】【谁】【解】【诉】【秋】【心】【”】【,】【秋】【天】【的】【草】【是】【“】【愁】【草】【瘗】【花】【铭】【”】【,】【一】【切】【都】【是】【那】【么】【悲】【凉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【的】【是】【那】【样】【吗】【?】【不】【!】【我】【要】【大】【呼】【一】【声】【:】【“】【我】【言】【秋】【日】【胜】【春】【朝】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【春】【天】【的】【天】【空】【最】【美】【,】【淡】【淡】【的】【蓝】【色】【,】【飘】【着】【几】【丝】【云】【彩】【,】【闲】【雅】【逸】【静】【。】【难】【道】【秋】【天】【的】【天】【空】【不】【美】【吗】【?】【有】【个】【词】【叫】【做】【“】【秋】【高】【气】【爽】【”】【。】【不】【知】【你】【是】【否】【注】【意】【到】【,】【秋】【日】【的】【天】【空】【是】【湛】【蓝】【湛】【蓝】【的】【,】【蓝】【得】【坦】【诚】【,】【蓝】【得】【清】【爽】【,】【永】【远】【显】【得】【高】【不】【可】【及】【,】【看】【一】【眼】【都】【感】【到】【头】【晕】【,】【但】【又】【觉】【得】【心】【旷】【神】【怡】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【春】【风】【最】【温】【馨】【,】【像】【母】【亲】【的】【手】【,】【不】【像】【秋】【风】【,】【卷】【走】【枝】【头】【的】【残】【叶】【,】【一】【派】【悲】【凉】【。】【你】【见】【过】【秋】【日】【的】【田】【野】【吗】【?】【秋】【风】【拂】【过】【田】【野】【,】【把】【庄】【稼】【的】【香】【气】【送】【入】【农】【民】【的】【心】【中】【,】【又】【绕】【树】【而】【行】【,】【卷】【走】【那】【金】【黄】【的】【枯】【叶】【,】【如】【只】【只】【彩】【蝶】【翩】【翩】【飞】【舞】【。】【这】【样】【一】【派】【大】【好】【景】【象】【,】【如】【此】【独】【特】【的】【韵】【味】【,】【春】【风】【怎】【及】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【春】【雨】【最】【动】【人】【,】【给】【人】【间】【带】【来】【几】【多】【滋】【润】【。】【殊】【不】【知】【,】【春】【雨】【淅】【淅】【沥】【沥】【,】【缠】【缠】【绵】【绵】【,】【怎】【比】【得】【上】【秋】【雨】【的】【怡】【人】【。】【仔】【细】【听】【那】【雨】【点】【打】【在】【葡】【萄】【叶】【上】【,】【如】【同】【一】【只】【玉】【棒】【在】【敲】【击】【至】【纯】【的】【玉】【器】【,】【那】【声】【音】【,】【天】【真】【而】【又】【纯】【美】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【春】【花】【最】【娇】【美】【。】【的】【确】【,】【万】【紫】【千】【红】【,】【你】【争】【我】【斗】【,】【可】【惜】【一】【到】【秋】【天】【,】【都】【禁】【不】【起】【秋】【霜】【而】【纷】【纷】【凋】【残】【。】【就】【在】【万】【花】【枯】【萎】【时】【,】【而】【菊】【花】【却】【在】【“】【丛】【中】【笑】【”】【。】【“】【秋】【菊】【能】【傲】【霜】【,】【风】【雨】【重】【重】【恶】【…】【…】【”】【仿】【佛】【是】【受】【了】【五】【柳】【先】【生】【的】【熏】【陶】【,】【菊】【花】【也】【添】【了】【几】【份】【名】【士】【之】【风】【,】【几】【份】【灵】【气】【。】【正】【是】【谓】【“】【数】【去】【更】【无】【君】【傲】【世】【,】【看】【来】【惟】【有】【我】【知】【音】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【春】【天】【万】【物】【竞】【发】【,】【“】【木】【欣】【欣】【以】【向】【荣】【,】【泉】【涓】【涓】【而】【始】【流】【”】【,】【如】【此】【的】【生】【机】【盎】【然】【,】【秋】【天】【怎】【能】【比】【?】【且】【慢】【,】【难】【道】【那】【斗】【霜】【的】【枫】【叶】【没】【有】【生】【命】【力】【么】【?】【春】【天】【的】【香】【山】【满】【山】【披】【翠】【,】【虽】【然】【好】【看】【,】【却】【总】【比】【不】【上】【秋】【日】【的】【一】【袭】【红】【装】【。】【那】【么】【春】【天】【的】【生】【气】【又】【怎】【能】【与】【秋】【日】【中】【的】【凌】【寒】【斗】【志】【同】【日】【而】【语】【呢】【?】【一】【个】【是】【童】【稚】【的】【活】【力】【,】【一】【个】【是】【稳】【重】【的】【精】【神】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【春】【天】【迷】【人】【之】【处】【说】【完】【了】【,】【可】【秋】【天】【还】【有】【独】【领】【风】【骚】【的】【地】【方】【。】【看】【,】【那】【无】【垠】【的】【稻】【田】【中】【稻】【穗】【勾】【肩】【搭】【背】【,】【风】【一】【吹】【过】【,】【此】【起】【彼】【伏】【地】【向】【大】【地】【致】【敬】【。】【雪】【白】【的】【棉】【花】【塞】【满】【了】【棉】【桃】【,】【得】【意】【得】【裂】【开】【了】【嘴】【,】【前】【呼】【后】【拥】【,】【摇】【头】【摆】【尾】【。】【玉】【米】【棒】【子】【甩】【一】【甩】【长】【长】【的】【胡】【子】【,】【看】【得】【农】【民】【脸】【上】【笑】【开】【了】【花】【。】【再】【看】【那】【黄】【澄】【澄】【的】【大】【鸭】【梨】【,】【紫】【色】【的】【葡】【萄】【,】【红】【彤】【彤】【的】【柿】【子】【…】【…】【。】【记】【得】【有】【位】【诗】【人】【说】【过】【“】【枝】【杈】【似】【不】【胜】【负】【荷】【,】【乃】【卸】【它】【的】【重】【载】【于】【喜】【鹊】【的】【喙】【内】【”】【。】【秋】【天】【是】【如】【此】【慷】【慨】【,】【如】【此】【硕】【果】【累】【累】【,】【如】【此】【让】【人】【陶】【醉】【。】【陶】【醉】【之】【余】【,】【你】【还】【会】【发】【现】【,】【成】【熟】【的】【果】【实】【为】【什】【么】【全】【都】【低】【着】【头】【呢】【?】【也】【许】【它】【们】【是】【在】【沉】【思】【自】【己】【成】【长】【的】【历】【程】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【说】【春】【天】【只】【是】【一】【位】【恋】【人】【,】【那】【么】【秋】【天】【就】【是】【一】【位】【母】【亲】【,】【哪】【一】【个】【更】【伟】【大】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【还】【要】【大】【声】【呼】【吁】【:】【我】【言】【秋】【日】【胜】【春】【朝】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【品】【 】【&】【n】【b】【s】【p】【;】【读】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【习】【作】【用】【求】【异】【思】【维】【立】【意】【,】【用】【独】【特】【的】【视】【角】【来】【观】【察】【“】【秋】【”】【,】【抒】【发】【了】【“】【我】【言】【秋】【日】【胜】【春】【朝】【”】【之】【强】【烈】【感】【情】【。】【特】【别】【值】【得】【一】【提】【的】【是】【作】【者】【运】【用】【多】【种】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【,】【把】【感】【情】【抒】【发】【得】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【,】【使】【文】【章】【大】【增】【亮】【色】【。】【另】【外】【,】【习】【作】【语】【言】【亮】【丽】【多】【彩】【,】【引】【用】【了】【大】【量】【的】【古】【诗】【词】【名】【句】【,】【抒】【情】【色】【彩】【就】【更】【浓】【了】【。】【读】【罢】【此】【文】【,】【犹】【饮】【葡】【萄】【美】【酒】【,】【回】【味】【无】【穷】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【次】【读】【、】【赏】【、】【写】【互】【动】【给】【我】【们】【的】【最】【大】【启】【示】【是】【恰】【当】【地】【运】【用】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【,】【同】【样】【可】【以】【抒】【真】【挚】【、】【健】【康】【的】【感】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【总】【之】【,】【无】【论】【是】【写】【人】【还】【是】【叙】【事】【,】【也】【无】【论】【是】【写】【景】【还】【是】【状】【物】【,】【或】【者】【是】【议】【理】【,】【都】【可】【以】【借】【助】【呼】【告】【、】【反】【复】【、】【排】【比】【、】【反】【问】【来】【表】【达】【强】【烈】【的】【情】【感】【,】【还】【可】【以】【借】【助】【比】【喻】【、】【反】【语】【、】【夸】【张】【等】【来】【表】【情】【达】【意】【。】【只】【要】【你】【精】【心】【选】【择】【,】【情】【有】【所】【系】【,】【自】【然】【抒】【发】【,】【就】【一】【定】【能】【强】【化】【文】【章】【的】【抒】【情】【色】【彩】【,】【使】【文】【章】【大】【增】【亮】【色】【。】剧本创作【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【题】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【所】【谓】【波】【澜】【,】【是】【指】【在】【记】【叙】【文】【写】【作】【过】【程】【中】【,】【写】【出】【事】【件】【的】【变】【化】【、】【起】【伏】【,】【避】【免】【平】【铺】【直】【叙】【,】【平】【淡】【无】【奇】【。】【事】【实】【上】【,】【许】【多】【事】【情】【的】【发】【生】【都】【并】【非】【一】【帆】【风】【顺】【,】【而】【是】【有】【迂】【回】【、】【有】【曲】【折】【的】【。】【写】【出】【事】【件】【的】【波】【澜】【,】【既】【符】【合】【了】【生】【活】【的】【真】【实】【,】【也】【是】【对】【生】【活】【本】【来】【面】【貌】【的】【艺】【术】【再】【现】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【孙】【犁】【的】【小】【说】【《】【芦】【花】【荡】【》】【,】【写】【水】【上】【交】【通】【员】【老】【头】【子】【护】【送】【抗】【日】【战】【士】【大】【菱】【和】【二】【菱】【回】【芦】【花】【荡】【休】【整】【,】【由】【于】【老】【头】【子】【过】【于】【自】【尊】【和】【自】【信】【,】【导】【致】【大】【菱】【被】【敌】【人】【意】【外】【发】【现】【而】【受】【伤】【,】【这】【是】【小】【说】【出】【现】【的】【第】【一】【个】【波】【澜】【;】【接】【下】【来】【,】【文】【章】【写】【老】【头】【子】【发】【誓】【为】【大】【菱】【报】【仇】【,】【设】【置】【好】【钩】【子】【引】【敌】【人】【上】【钩】【,】【再】【痛】【杀】【鬼】【子】【,】【这】【是】【小】【说】【出】【现】【的】【第】【二】【个】【波】【澜】【。】【情】【节】【的】【波】【澜】【起】【伏】【,】【有】【张】【有】【弛】【,】【不】【仅】【很】【好】【地】【塑】【造】【了】【老】【头】【子】【这】【一】【人】【物】【形】【象】【,】【而】【且】【使】【文】【章】【读】【起】【来】【更】【加】【扣】【人】【心】【弦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【么】【,】【怎】【样】【才】【能】【使】【情】【节】【掀】【起】【波】【澜】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【穿】【插】【分】【合】【,】【张】【弛】【起】【伏】【。】【写】【作】【时】【要】【先】【分】【清】【主】【次】【,】【考】【虑】【好】【哪】【里】【是】【高】【潮】【,】【高】【潮】【处】【应】【如】【何】【展】【现】【酣】【畅】【的】【笔】【墨】【,】【高】【潮】【前】【应】【如】【何】【烘】【托】【铺】【垫】【。】【如】【《】【芦】【花】【荡】【》】【,】【老】【头】【子】【痛】【杀】【鬼】【子】【是】【高】【潮】【,】【此】【前】【写】【老】【头】【子】【过】【于】【自】【尊】【、】【自】【信】【的】【语】【言】【和】【大】【菱】【意】【外】【负】【伤】【是】【铺】【垫】【。】【这】【样】【就】【使】【得】【情】【节】【的】【发】【生】【既】【在】【情】【理】【之】【中】【,】【又】【出】【人】【预】【料】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【环】【环】【相】【扣】【,】【曲】【折】【有】【致】【。】【如】【冯】【骥】【才】【的】【小】【说】【《】【泥】【人】【张】【》】【,】【先】【写】【海】【张】【五】【拿】【泥】【人】【张】【找】【乐】【子】【,】【泥】【人】【张】【不】【动】【声】【色】【地】【用】【“】【鞋】【子】【底】【下】【抠】【出】【的】【一】【块】【泥】【巴】【”】【,】【捏】【出】【泥】【人】【海】【张】【五】【,】【接】【着】【写】【海】【张】【五】【对】【着】【泥】【人】【张】【的】【背】【影】【叫】【道】【:】【“】【这】【破】【手】【艺】【也】【想】【赚】【钱】【,】【贱】【卖】【都】【没】【人】【要】【。】【”】【再】【接】【着】【写】【第】【二】【天】【大】【街】【上】【贱】【卖】【泥】【人】【海】【张】【五】【,】【最】【后】【写】【海】【张】【五】【不】【得】【不】【花】【大】【价】【钱】【,】【把】【所】【有】【的】【泥】【人】【买】【走】【。】【这】【些】【故】【事】【一】【环】【套】【一】【环】【,】【扣】【人】【心】【弦】【又】【曲】【折】【有】【致】【,】【吊】【足】【了】【读】【者】【胃】【口】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【佳】【作】【赏】【析】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【碰】【瓷】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夕】【阳】【西】【下】【,】【晚】【霞】【把】【天】【边】【染】【成】【一】【片】【红】【色】【。】【想】【到】【明】【天】【就】【是】【双】【休】【日】【,】【可】【以】【和】【几】【个】【死】【党】【一】【起】【去】【公】【园】【踏】【青】【,】【我】【心】【里】【那】【个】【美】【啊】【!】【骑】【着】【电】【动】【车】【,】【一】【边】【哼】【着】【“】【江】【南】【s】【t】【y】【l】【e】【”】【,】【一】【边】【观】【赏】【着】【两】【旁】【的】【街】【景】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【在】【我】【准】【备】【拐】【弯】【的】【路】【口】【,】【突】【然】【,】【一】【个】【中】【等】【个】【子】【男】【子】【不】【知】【从】【哪】【里】【窜】【了】【出】【来】【,】【一】【下】【子】【撞】【在】【我】【的】【车】【上】【。】【只】【见】【他】【捂】【着】【肚】【子】【,】【躺】【在】【地】【上】【,】【一】【副】【极】【痛】【苦】【的】【样】【子】【。】【我】【立】【马】【就】【吓】【蒙】【了】【,】【赶】【忙】【对】【他】【说】【:】【“】【对】【不】【起】【,】【对】【不】【起】【,】【我】【真】【的】【没】【看】【见】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【没】【看】【见】【就】【完】【啦】【?】【”】【中】【年】【男】【子】【气】【势】【汹】【汹】【地】【说】【:】【“】【现】【在】【摆】【在】【你】【面】【前】【的】【有】【两】【条】【路】【,】【一】【是】【带】【我】【上】【医】【院】【彻】【底】【检】【查】【,】【再】【赔】【我】【营】【养】【费】【、】【误】【工】【费】【;】【二】【是】【马】【上】【私】【了】【赔】【我】【钱】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【的】【大】【声】【嚷】【嚷】【,】【很】【快】【引】【来】【一】【群】【路】【人】【的】【围】【观】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【我】【看】【撞】【得】【也】【不】【重】【,】【如】【果】【没】【什】【么】【大】【碍】【就】【算】【了】【吧】【,】【毕】【竟】【人】【家】【还】【是】【个】【孩】【子】【。】【”】【有】【人】【出】【来】【替】【我】【打】【抱】【不】【平】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【那】【不】【行】【,】【说】【不】【定】【我】【的】【内】【脏】【被】【撞】【坏】【了】【,】【我】【放】【他】【走】【了】【,】【到】【时】【候】【我】【找】【谁】【呀】【?】【”】【中】【年】【男】【子】【一】【副】【不】【依】【不】【饶】【的】【样】【子】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【时】【,】【一】【个】【老】【爷】【爷】【走】【了】【过】【来】【,】【对】【中】【年】【男】【子】【说】【:】【“】【小】【伙】【子】【,】【我】【看】【你】【好】【像】【没】【什】【么】【事】【呀】【!】【你】【不】【会】【是】【讹】【人】【的】【吧】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【你】【人】【老】【眼】【花】【,】【能】【看】【得】【清】【吗】【?】【再】【说】【被】【撞】【的】【又】【不】【是】【你】【,】【你】【怎】【么】【知】【道】【我】【没】【事】【?】【”】【中】【年】【男】【子】【显】【得】【万】【分】【委】【屈】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【小】【家】【伙】【,】【看】【你】【穿】【着】【也】【不】【差】【,】【家】【里】【应】【该】【不】【差】【钱】【吧】【,】【快】【回】【家】【拿】【钱】【去】【,】【把】【车】【押】【在】【这】【儿】【。】【”】【中】【年】【男】【子】【捂】【着】【肚】【子】【又】【说】【,】【“】【拿】【钱】【来】【我】【们】【就】【私】【了】【,】【免】【得】【上】【医】【院】【麻】【烦】【,】【还】【耽】【误】【你】【学】【习】【,】【哎】【哟】【哎】【哟】【,】【痛】【死】【我】【了】【!】【”】【他】【开】【始】【哼】【了】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【着】【中】【年】【男】【子】【一】【副】【无】【赖】【的】【样】【子】【,】【围】【观】【的】【人】【也】【爱】【莫】【能】【助】【。】【我】【知】【道】【今】【天】【摊】【上】【大】【事】【了】【,】【但】【我】【总】【觉】【得】【哪】【儿】【有】【点】【儿】【不】【对】【劲】【儿】【。】【于】【是】【,】【趁】【中】【年】【男】【子】【对】【围】【观】【的】【人】【群】【晒】【同】【情】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【悄】【悄】【地】【给】【在】【派】【出】【所】【工】【作】【的】【爸】【爸】【发】【了】【一】【条】【求】【助】【信】【息】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【当】【中】【年】【男】【子】【再】【次】【催】【我】【回】【家】【拿】【钱】【的】【时】【候】【,】【远】【处】【传】【来】【了】【警】【车】【的】【鸣】【叫】【。】【中】【年】【男】【子】【的】【脸】【色】【开】【始】【发】【白】【,】【神】【情】【也】【紧】【张】【起】【来】【,】【不】【过】【他】【还】【是】【躺】【在】【地】【上】【,】【只】【是】【哼】【哼】【的】【声】【音】【加】【大】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【很】【快】【,】【警】【车】【在】【人】【群】【外】【面】【停】【了】【下】【来】【,】【人】【们】【都】【屏】【住】【呼】【吸】【,】【空】【气】【一】【下】【子】【凝】【固】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【张】【小】【虎】【,】【说】【说】【你】【这】【是】【第】【几】【次】【“】【碰】【瓷】【”】【了】【?】【”】【传】【来】【一】【个】【严】【厉】【的】【声】【音】【。】【回】【头】【一】【看】【,】【果】【然】【是】【爸】【爸】【,】【他】【身】【边】【还】【站】【着】【一】【个】【威】【武】【的】【警】【察】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【想】【到】【一】【个】【鲤】【鱼】【打】【挺】【,】【中】【年】【男】【子】【从】【地】【上】【站】【了】【起】【来】【。】【“】【对】【不】【起】【,】【李】【所】【长】【,】【我】【错】【了】【,】【我】【错】【了】【,】【我】【该】【死】【,】【该】【死】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【来】【这】【家】【伙】【认】【识】【爸】【爸】【呀】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爸】【爸】【转】【过】【身】【来】【,】【对】【围】【观】【的】【人】【群】【说】【:】【“】【他】【是】【专】【门】【“】【碰】【瓷】【”】【的】【,】【在】【我】【们】【派】【出】【所】【已】【经】【报】【到】【好】【几】【回】【了】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【我】【早】【看】【出】【这】【人】【不】【地】【道】【了】【,】【只】【是】【没】【有】【证】【据】【点】【破】【他】【。】【”】【那】【个】【老】【爷】【爷】【指】【着】【中】【年】【男】【子】【气】【得】【胡】【子】【发】【抖】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【是】【啊】【,】【年】【纪】【轻】【轻】【的】【,】【干】【什】【么】【不】【好】【,】【非】【要】【干】【这】【种】【缺】【德】【事】【!】【”】【人】【们】【纷】【纷】【指】【责】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【张】【小】【虎】【,】【要】【不】【要】【上】【医】【院】【检】【查】【检】【查】【?】【”】【爸】【爸】【意】【味】【深】【长】【地】【问】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【不】【用】【了】【,】【不】【用】【了】【,】【不】【是】【他】【撞】【的】【我】【,】【是】【我】【故】【意】【往】【他】【车】【上】【撞】【的】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【听】【了】【张】【小】【虎】【的】【话】【,】【人】【们】【全】【都】【笑】【了】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【希】【望】【你】【以】【后】【好】【好】【做】【人】【,】【凭】【自】【己】【的】【劳】【动】【吃】【饭】【,】【不】【要】【再】【做】【这】【种】【违】【法】【的】【事】【了】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【严】【厉】【地】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【明】【白】【,】【明】【白】【!】【”】【说】【完】【,】【中】【年】【男】【人】【掩】【着】【脸】【,】【在】【众】【人】【的】【嘲】【笑】【声】【中】【灰】【溜】【溜】【地】【逃】【走】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【记】【叙】【文】【,】【先】【写】【中】【年】【男】【子】【被】【“】【撞】【”】【后】【向】【“】【我】【”】【敲】【诈】【和】【众】【人】【的】【围】【观】【反】【应】【,】【这】【是】【情】【节】【初】【始】【的】【第】【一】【个】【波】【澜】【;】【接】【着】【写】【“】【我】【”】【巧】【妙】【地】【向】【爸】【爸】【求】【助】【,】【爸】【爸】【出】【警】【戳】【穿】【中】【年】【男】【子】【的】【骗】【局】【,】【中】【年】【男】【子】【态】【度】【的】【巨】【变】【和】【众】【人】【的】【反】【应】【,】【这】【是】【情】【节】【掀】【起】【的】【第】【二】【个】【波】【澜】【。】【两】【个】【波】【澜】【,】【环】【环】【相】【扣】【,】【推】【动】【着】【情】【节】【的】【发】【展】【,】【使】【故】【事】【张】【弛】【起】【伏】【,】【曲】【折】【有】【致】【,】【再】【现】【了】【一】【个】【自】【取】【其】【辱】【又】【愚】【蠢】【的】【“】【碰】【瓷】【”】【者】【形】【象】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

剧本创作:当事人被移送公安!

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【很】【多】【人】【觉】【得】【我】【写】【了】【《】【致】【我】【们】【终】【将】【逝】【去】【的】【青】【春】【》】【,】【就】【一】【定】【对】【青】【春】【有】【着】【更】【多】【的】【感】【悟】【。】【事】【实】【上】【,】【我】【和】【大】【家】【一】【样】【,】【都】【是】【青】【春】【曾】【经】【领】【养】【的】【孩】【子】【,】【你】【哭】【,】【他】【笑】【,】【我】【玩】【着】【一】【个】【童】【年】【的】【布】【娃】【娃】【,】【一】【不】【小】【心】【跌】【倒】【,】【感】【染】【人】【生】【第】【一】【场】【抑】【郁】【,】【又】【开】【始】【学】【会】【做】【爱】【情】【的】【美】【梦】【,】【最】【后】【醒】【来】【的】【时】【候】【,】【你】【就】【突】【然】【跟】【身】【边】【的】【人】【发】【出】【疑】【问】【:】【我】【们】【什】【么】【时】【候】【长】【这】【么】【大】【的】【?】【而】【就】【在】【这】【个】【时】【候】【,】【或】【者】【更】【早】【,】【青】【春】【不】【动】【声】【色】【地】【拿】【走】【了】【我】【们】【所】【有】【的】【伤】【疤】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【个】【昂】【贵】【的】【梦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【你】【虽】【然】【永】【远】【赢】【不】【过】【它】【,】【躲】【不】【开】【它】【,】【但】【是】【它】【终】【究】【会】【从】【你】【身】【边】【离】【开】【,】【干】【脆】【到】【连】【声】【招】【呼】【都】【不】【打】【,】【连】【个】【背】【影】【都】【不】【留】【下】【。】【然】【后】【你】【觉】【得】【自】【己】【解】【放】【了】【,】【前】【方】【面】【对】【的】【却】【是】【更】【多】【的】【圈】【套】【和】【陷】【阱】【。】【这】【个】【时】【候】【,】【你】【想】【起】【之】【前】【的】【每】【一】【次】【泪】【水】【,】【每】【一】【次】【跌】【倒】【,】【每】【一】【次】【愤】【怒】【和】【无】【助】【,】【当】【然】【,】【也】【有】【每】【一】【次】【侥】【幸】【的】【或】【是】【笃】【定】【的】【小】【小】【胜】【利】【。】【于】【是】【,】【你】【决】【定】【往】【前】【迈】【出】【第】【一】【步】【,】【褪】【去】【了】【所】【有】【的】【青】【涩】【和】【稚】【嫩】【。】【即】【使】【第】【一】【步】【就】【崴】【了】【脚】【,】【你】【也】【没】【有】【眼】【泪】【。】【你】【会】【苦】【笑】【,】【自】【嘲】【,】【拿】【高】【跟】【鞋】【撒】【气】【,】【然】【后】【继】【续】【一】【瘸】【一】【拐】【地】【赶】【路】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【知】【道】【回】【不】【去】【。】【青】【春】【已】【是】【一】【场】【回】【忆】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【朋】【友】【,】【青】【春】【不】【是】【死】【胡】【同】【。】【它】【终】【将】【逝】【去】【,】【却】【远】【未】【逝】【去】【,】【像】【读】【不】【完】【的】【书】【,】【一】【直】【给】【你】【温】【暖】【和】【力】【量】【。】【如】【果】【你】【善】【待】【它】【,】【懂】【得】【感】【恩】【和】【回】【报】【,】【它】【会】【在】【你】【认】【为】【的】【人】【生】【每】【一】【个】【死】【胡】【同】【面】【前】【笑】【眯】【眯】【地】【等】【你】【,】【拿】【出】【每】【一】【把】【钥】【匙】【,】【就】【像】【拿】【出】【你】【小】【时】【候】【期】【待】【已】【久】【的】【糖】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【宫】【少】【红】【摘】【自】【《】【今】【日】【文】【摘】【》】【,】【2】【0】【1】【4】【年】【第】【2】【期】【)】剧本创作【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【中】【华】【民】【族】【素】【有】【“】【礼】【仪】【之】【邦】【”】【之】【称】【,】【向】【来】【重】【视】【家】【庭】【教】【育】【。】【“】【家】【风】【”】【,】【又】【叫】【“】【门】【风】【”】【,】【在】【以】【前】【,】【它】【指】【的】【是】【一】【家】【、】【一】【族】【世】【代】【相】【传】【的】【道】【德】【准】【则】【和】【处】【世】【方】【法】【。】【而】【今】【,】【它】【不】【单】【单】【代】【表】【从】【家】【庭】【入】【手】【,】【培】【养】【出】【一】【代】【代】【人】【的】【朴】【素】【价】【值】【观】【。】【往】【大】【了】【说】【,】【家】【即】【是】【国】【,】【国】【即】【是】【家】【。】【温】【习】【“】【家】【风】【”】【,】【也】【是】【对】【一】【个】【国】【家】【价】【值】【追】【求】【的】【重】【新】【审】【视】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【古】【至】【今】【,】【《】【颜】【氏】【家】【训】【》】【《】【诫】【子】【书】【》】【《】【治】【家】【格】【言】【》】【《】【曾】【国】【藩】【家】【书】【》】【《】【傅】【雷】【家】【书】【》】【等】【众】【多】【见】【诸】【典】【籍】【的】【家】【训】【闪】【烁】【着】【思】【想】【、】【道】【德】【的】【光】【芒】【。】【历】【史】【上】【,】【“】【孟】【母】【三】【迁】【”】【“】【岳】【母】【刺】【字】【”】【 】【等】【教】【子】【故】【事】【也】【让】【我】【们】【耳】【熟】【能】【详】【;】【“】【非】【淡】【泊】【无】【以】【明】【志】【、】【非】【宁】【静】【无】【以】【致】【远】【”】【“】【常】【将】【有】【日】【思】【无】【日】【、】【莫】【待】【无】【时】【思】【有】【时】【”】【“】【一】【粥】【一】【饭】【,】【当】【思】【来】【之】【不】【易】【;】【半】【丝】【半】【缕】【,】【恒】【念】【物】【力】【维】【艰】【”】【一】【类】【古】【训】【也】【常】【挂】【在】【我】【们】【的】【嘴】【边】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【电】【视】【屏】【幕】【上】【,】【当】【采】【访】【对】【象】【被】【问】【到】【这】【个】【问】【题】【时】【,】【他】【们】【的】【回】【答】【千】【姿】【百】【态】【,】【同】【样】【耐】【人】【寻】【味】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【想】【起】【 】【“】【忠】【厚】【传】【家】【久】【,】【诗】【书】【继】【世】【长】【”】【的】【古】【训】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【家】【风】【是】【古】【人】【常】【说】【的】【“】【耕】【读】【为】【本】【,】【诗】【礼】【传】【家】【”】【 】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【家】【风】【是】【父】【母】【为】【他】【上】【的】【第】【一】【课】【—】【—】【诚】【实】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【还】【有】【人】【写】【下】【:】【“】【爱】【国】【要】【先】【爱】【家】【,】【爱】【家】【先】【要】【爱】【自】【己】【的】【妈】【妈】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【亲】【爱】【的】【同】【学】【们】【,】【你】【的】【家】【风】【、】【家】【训】【又】【是】【什】【么】【?】【能】【同】【我】【们】【分】【享】【一】【下】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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