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2019年10月22日 11:31

【<】【p】【>】【溪】【流】【般】【九】【曲】【回】【转】【映】【照】【了】【我】【们】【平】【凡】【生】【命】【中】【的】【坎】【坷】【波】【折】【。】【愿】【你】【有】【足】【够】【多】【成】【长】【的】【溪】【流】【,】【来】【造】【就】【一】【片】【美】【丽】【的】【汪】【洋】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【,】【就】【是】【一】【个】【个】【串】【连】【成】【的】【日】【子】【。】【折】【梅】【为】【扇】【,】【品】【一】【杯】【清】【茗】【,】【读】【一】【本】【佳】【卷】【,】【日】【出】【而】【作】【,】【日】【落】【而】【息】【,】【为】【自】【己】【的】【追】【求】【与】【梦】【想】【而】【孜】【孜】【不】【倦】【,】【这】【便】【是】【诗】【意】【地】【生】【活】【。】【然】【而】【人】【世】【间】【能】【抛】【开】【红】【尘】【是】【非】【,】【走】【出】【俗】【世】【纷】【扰】【,】【又】【有】【几】【人】【能】【这】【般】【诗】【意】【地】【生】【活】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【进】【大】【观】【园】【,】【在】【这】【个】【华】【美】【如】【梦】【的】【地】【方】【,】【有】【个】【人】【虽】【然】【寄】【人】【篱】【下】【,】【但】【她】【的】【生】【活】【却】【充】【满】【了】【诗】【意】【。】【她】【在】【桃】【花】【缤】【纷】【的】【落】【英】【中】【感】【叹】【“】【花】【谢】【花】【飞】【花】【满】【天】【,】【红】【绡】【香】【断】【有】【谁】【怜】【?】【红】【颜】【易】【老】【花】【易】【残】【,】【待】【花】【残】【时】【红】【颜】【摧】【”】【。】【这】【个】【用】【泪】【凝】【成】【的】【绝】【代】【佳】【人】【,】【如】【此】【诗】【意】【地】【活】【着】【。】【“】【滴】【不】【尽】【相】【思】【血】【泪】【抛】【红】【豆】【,】【开】【不】【完】【春】【柳】【春】【花】【满】【画】【楼】【”】【,】【花】【开】【满】【楼】【,】【她】【依】【旧】【是】【那】【样】【忧】【戚】【,】【掩】【倦】【佳】【人】【幽】【梦】【香】【,】【低】【低】【吟】【出】【《】【五】【美】【吟】【》】【,】【她】【是】【在】【悲】【叹】【红】【颜】【多】【薄】【命】【,】【自】【己】【终】【将】【如】【西】【施】【、】【昭】【君】【那】【样】【悲】【惨】【地】【离】【开】【人】【世】【吗】【?】【我】【不】【知】【道】【,】【我】【只】【知】【道】【,】【她】【的】【生】【活】【充】【满】【着】【多】【愁】【善】【感】【的】【诗】【意】【。】【就】【算】【是】【最】【后】【凄】【惨】【地】【离】【开】【人】【世】【时】【,】【也】【诗】【意】【地】【度】【过】【最】【后】【的】【时】【间】【,】【焚】【了】【诗】【稿】【,】【焚】【了】【自】【己】【的】【梦】【,】【下】【辈】【子】【,】【如】【果】【还】【有】【下】【辈】【子】【,】【也】【许】【她】【还】【要】【选】【择】【如】【此】【诗】【意】【的】【活】【法】【。】【她】【就】【是】【多】【愁】【善】【感】【的】【林】【黛】【玉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【,】【一】【个】【如】【风】【的】【男】【子】【,】【虽】【然】【一】【生】【漂】【泊】【,】【但】【他】【却】【终】【生】【生】【活】【在】【诗】【意】【中】【。】【黄】【州】【诗】【案】【后】【,】【他】【的】【生】【活】【陷】【入】【低】【谷】【。】【此】【时】【,】【他】【虽】【然】【是】【悲】【哀】【苦】【闷】【的】【,】【但】【他】【的】【生】【活】【却】【仍】【旧】【充】【满】【诗】【意】【,】【仍】【旧】【豪】【放】【、】【旷】【达】【、】【清】【雅】【、】【缠】【绵】【。】【“】【人】【有】【悲】【欢】【离】【合】【,】【月】【有】【阴】【晴】【圆】【缺】【,】【此】【事】【古】【难】【全】【。】【”】【然】【而】【命】【运】【之】【神】【仍】【在】【捉】【弄】【着】【他】【,】【老】【天】【带】【走】【了】【他】【最】【爱】【的】【人】【,】【他】【唯】【一】【的】【心】【灵】【支】【柱】【,】【他】【始】【终】【沉】【浸】【在】【悲】【哀】【中】【不】【能】【自】【拔】【:】【“】【十】【年】【生】【死】【两】【茫】【茫】【,】【不】【思】【量】【,】【自】【难】【忘】【。】【相】【顾】【无】【言】【,】【唯】【有】【泪】【千】【行】【…】【…】【”】【在】【她】【坟】【茔】【的】【岭】【上】【,】【他】【亲】【手】【为】【她】【种】【下】【了】【青】【松】【。】【昔】【日】【执】【子】【之】【手】【,】【与】【子】【偕】【老】【的】【誓】【言】【虽】【已】【缥】【缈】【地】【随】【风】【散】【了】【,】【但】【他】【的】【情】【与】【意】【一】【直】【深】【藏】【于】【心】【间】【。】【他】【的】【一】【生】【,】【充】【斥】【着】【不】【幸】【与】【凄】【惨】【,】【可】【他】【仍】【旧】【选】【择】【诗】【意】【地】【生】【活】【。】【这】【就】【是】【苏】【轼】【,】【这】【个】【如】【风】【的】【诗】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【才】【华】【横】【溢】【,】【却】【一】【生】【悲】【惨】【孤】【寂】【。】【在】【那】【浮】【华】【如】【梦】【、】【堂】【皇】【富】【丽】【的】【大】【观】【园】【里】【,】【她】【固】【守】【心】【中】【静】【如】【止】【水】【的】【约】【定】【,】【一】【杯】【清】【茗】【,】【一】【支】【毛】【笔】【,】【一】【本】【诗】【卷】【,】【就】【足】【以】【让】【她】【躲】【在】【红】【尘】【背】【后】【,】【诗】【意】【地】【生】【活】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【一】【生】【清】【贫】【,】【却】【不】【低】【眉】【从】【俗】【。】【每】【一】【个】【艰】【辛】【的】【日】【子】【,】【他】【都】【诗】【意】【地】【度】【过】【。】【在】【他】【看】【来】【,】【凡】【尘】【俗】【世】【中】【要】【有】【一】【分】【属】【于】【自】【己】【的】【生】【活】【。】【在】【他】【的】【诗】【中】【,】【我】【读】【懂】【了】【,】【你】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【,】【每】【个】【人】【都】【拥】【有】【,】【当】【日】【子】【如】【水】【般】【流】【过】【,】【记】【忆】【被】【时】【间】【一】【点】【一】【点】【锉】【掉】【了】【颜】【色】【时】【,】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【该】【是】【怎】【样】【的】【?】【不】【如】【找】【一】【份】【贤】【雅】【的】【追】【求】【,】【选】【一】【种】【诗】【意】【的】【活】【法】【,】【数】【着】【每】【天】【绽】【放】【的】【花】【朵】【,】【品】【着】【优】【美】【的】【文】【字】【,】【固】【守】【心】【中】【的】【约】【定】【,】【诗】【意】【地】【生】【活】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【万】【红】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】中共中央书记处书记【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【常】【听】【人】【说】【,】【孩】【子】【是】【父】【母】【的】【骄】【傲】【,】【可】【我】【觉】【得】【,】【妈】【妈】【是】【我】【的】【骄】【傲】【,】【是】【她】【用】【瘦】【弱】【的】【身】【躯】【为】【我】【撑】【起】【了】【一】【片】【天】【空】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【很】【多】【年】【前】【,】【妈】【妈】【就】【下】【岗】【了】【,】【那】【时】【我】【还】【小】【,】【不】【懂】【得】【生】【活】【的】【艰】【辛】【,】【总】【是】【见】【着】【好】【吃】【的】【要】【,】【见】【着】【好】【玩】【的】【也】【要】【,】【看】【见】【小】【伙】【伴】【们】【有】【这】【有】【那】【,】【而】【我】【没】【有】【,】【就】【又】【哭】【又】【闹】【。】【妈】【妈】【可】【不】【惯】【着】【我】【,】【她】【从】【没】【把】【我】【当】【做】【小】【孩】【子】【。】【我】【挨】【过】【打】【,】【挨】【过】【骂】【,】【甚】【至】【还】【被】【罚】【站】【墙】【角】【,】【一】【站】【就】【是】【1】【个】【多】【小】【时】【。】【那】【时】【我】【就】【知】【道】【:】【妈】【妈】【是】【不】【会】【妥】【协】【的】【,】【于】【是】【在】【我】【的】【心】【里】【产】【生】【了】【恨】【。】【现】【在】【我】【长】【大】【了】【,】【也】【懂】【得】【了】【那】【时】【多】【亏】【了】【妈】【妈】【的】【“】【不】【妥】【协】【”】【,】【我】【才】【没】【有】【养】【成】【贪】【慕】【虚】【荣】【、】【喜】【欢】【攀】【比】【的】【坏】【习】【惯】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【后】【来】【,】【妈】【妈】【为】【了】【维】【持】【家】【用】【,】【起】【早】【贪】【黑】【去】【市】【场】【卖】【鱼】【。】【有】【一】【天】【下】【大】【雨】【,】【很】【晚】【了】【妈】【妈】【还】【没】【回】【来】【,】【我】【赶】【紧】【拿】【着】【伞】【去】【接】【妈】【妈】【。】【到】【了】【妈】【妈】【卖】【鱼】【的】【地】【方】【,】【我】【呆】【住】【了】【,】【一】【股】【酸】【涩】【涌】【上】【心】【头】【。】【妈】【妈】【冒】【着】【大】【雨】【,】【正】【在】【拼】【命】【地】【推】【着】【装】【满】【了】【铁】【盒】【子】【、】【鱼】【篮】【子】【的】【板】【车】【。】【路】【上】【的】【人】【很】【少】【,】【没】【有】【人】【帮】【她】【。】【她】【吃】【力】【地】【将】【背】【弯】【成】【了】【令】【人】【心】【酸】【的】【弧】【形】【。】【我】【的】【眼】【泪】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【流】【了】【下】【来】【,】【撑】【着】【伞】【跑】【过】【去】【帮】【她】【,】【她】【扭】【头】【看】【见】【我】【时】【愣】【了】【一】【下】【,】【随】【即】【脸】【上】【绽】【开】【了】【欣】【慰】【的】【笑】【容】【,】【那】【温】【暖】【的】【笑】【容】【穿】【过】【暴】【风】【雨】【的】【阴】【霾】【,】【直】【直】【闯】【进】【我】【的】【心】【里】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【那】【以】【后】【,】【我】【知】【道】【了】【妈】【妈】【的】【辛】【劳】【,】【也】【渐】【渐】【懂】【得】【体】【贴】【妈】【妈】【了】【,】【中】【午】【送】【饭】【,】【下】【午】【送】【伞】【,】【在】【家】【里】【帮】【妈】【妈】【洗】【衣】【做】【饭】【,】【几】【乎】【也】【成】【了】【我】【必】【做】【的】【事】【,】【妈】【妈】【脸】【上】【的】【笑】【容】【也】【多】【了】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【说】【:】【“】【女】【儿】【是】【妈】【妈】【的】【贴】【心】【小】【棉】【袄】【,】【女】【儿】【越】【来】【越】【懂】【事】【了】【。】【”】【妈】【妈】【说】【:】【“】【人】【家】【都】【夸】【我】【有】【一】【个】【又】【贴】【心】【又】【懂】【事】【的】【女】【儿】【呢】【!】【妈】【妈】【因】【你】【而】【感】【到】【自】【豪】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【而】【我】【却】【觉】【得】【,】【我】【有】【一】【个】【世】【界】【上】【最】【好】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【她】【善】【良】【而】【坚】【强】【,】【对】【孩】【子】【慈】【爱】【而】【不】【溺】【爱】【,】【她】【不】【因】【生】【活】【的】【磨】【难】【而】【失】【去】【自】【己】【的】【乐】【观】【和】【信】【念】【。】【我】【说】【:】【“】【妈】【妈】【啊】【,】【您】【是】【我】【此】【生】【最】【大】【的】【骄】【傲】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【吴】【春】【杰】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【语】【言】【能】【力】【的】【考】【查】【,】【既】【是】【考】【试】【作】【文】【的】【“】【重】【头】【戏】【”】【,】【同】【时】【也】【是】【考】【生】【拿】【取】【作】【文】【高】【分】【的】【捷】【径】【之】【一】【。】【在】【此】【,】【笔】【者】【就】【历】【年】【中】【考】【作】【文】【中】【语】【言】【表】【述】【弊】【病】【做】【一】【个】【简】【单】【的】【归】【类】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【滥】【用】【名】【句】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【纪】【念】【的】【帆】【船】【回】【到】【港】【湾】【。】【童】【年】【,】【我】【只】【能】【读】【懂】【“】【锄】【禾】【日】【当】【午】【,】【汗】【滴】【禾】【下】【土】【”】【的】【辛】【劳】【,】【“】【小】【荷】【才】【露】【尖】【尖】【角】【,】【早】【有】【蜻】【蜓】【立】【上】【头】【”】【的】【稚】【趣】【,】【想】【象】【得】【到】【“】【横】【看】【成】【岭】【侧】【成】【峰】【,】【远】【近】【高】【低】【各】【不】【同】【”】【的】【奇】【峰】【,】【“】【不】【知】【细】【叶】【谁】【裁】【出】【,】【二】【月】【春】【风】【似】【剪】【刀】【”】【的】【细】【柳】【,】【心】【中】【存】【在】【的】【,】【都】【是】【一】【些】【感】【性】【的】【图】【像】【,】【每】【天】【以】【一】【颗】【纯】【洁】【的】【心】【去】【品】【味】【唐】【诗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【表】【面】【看】【来】【,】【以】【上】【的】【语】【句】【“】【引】【经】【据】【典】【”】【,】【且】【词】【语】【生】【动】【,】【句】【式】【灵】【活】【,】【应】【该】【是】【一】【段】【令】【人】【细】【嚼】【品】【味】【的】【优】【美】【语】【言】【,】【但】【认】【真】【读】【来】【,】【言】【之】【何】【物】【,】【和】【话】【题】【又】【有】【何】【相】【干】【呢】【?】【难】【道】【纪】【念】【的】【帆】【船】【回】【到】【港】【湾】【,】【去】【读】【懂】【所】【指】【的】【‘】【诗】【情】【画】【意】【’】【就】【是】【所】【谓】【的】【纪】【念】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【滥】【用】【修】【辞】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【人】【应】【该】【像】【大】【海】【一】【样】【,】【包】【容】【每】【一】【滴】【水】【,】【不】【论】【其】【污】【浊】【,】【那】【样】【才】【会】【永】【不】【枯】【竭】【,】【非】【常】【辽】【阔】【;】【人】【应】【像】【夜】【空】【一】【样】【,】【包】【容】【每】【一】【颗】【星】【星】【,】【不】【论】【其】【明】【暗】【,】【那】【样】【才】【会】【皎】【洁】【明】【亮】【,】【指】【引】【夜】【行】【者】【;】【人】【应】【像】【高】【山】【一】【样】【,】【包】【容】【每】【一】【块】【石】【头】【,】【不】【论】【其】【大】【小】【,】【那】【样】【才】【能】【高】【大】【无】【穷】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【上】【句】【子】【存】【在】【滥】【用】【比】【喻】【句】【和】【排】【比】【句】【,】【过】【分】【追】【求】【形】【式】【美】【,】【内】【容】【空】【洞】【,】【缺】【乏】【真】【情】【实】【感】【。】【句】【中】【本】【体】【是】【人】【,】【喻】【体】【是】【大】【海】【、】【夜】【空】【、】【高】【山】【,】【相】【似】【点】【是】【包】【容】【。】【但】【对】【喻】【体】【特】【征】【的】【描】【述】【不】【符】【合】【本】【体】【特】【点】【,】【如】【,】【“】【永】【不】【枯】【竭】【,】【非】【常】【辽】【阔】【”】【“】【皎】【洁】【明】【亮】【,】【指】【引】【夜】【行】【者】【”】【不】【是】【人】【的】【特】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【重】【复】【啰】【嗦】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【谦】【卑】【是】【一】【种】【精】【神】【吗】【?】【我】【想】【不】【是】【;】【谦】【卑】【是】【一】【种】【品】【格】【吗】【?】【我】【想】【也】【不】【是】【;】【谦】【卑】【又】【是】【一】【种】【礼】【仪】【吗】【?】【我】【想】【也】【应】【该】【不】【是】【。】【谦】【卑】【究】【竟】【是】【什】【么】【的】【一】【样】【东】【西】【呢】【?】【欲】【知】【它】【是】【什】【么】【?】【请】【看】【下】【面】【分】【解】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【得】【了】【,】【得】【了】【,】【你】【就】【直】【接】【说】【出】【谦】【卑】【到】【底】【是】【什】【么】【就】【得】【了】【,】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【都】【被】【‘】【侃】【’】【晕】【了】【,】【还】【能】【给】【你】【高】【分】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【过】【于】【绝】【对】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【们】【能】【够】【理】【性】【客】【观】【地】【看】【待】【外】【部】【事】【物】【,】【而】【在】【审】【视】【自】【我】【的】【时】【候】【,】【就】【会】【陷】【入】【情】【感】【的】【迷】【雾】【,】【摇】【曳】【在】【社】【会】【导】【向】【与】【他】【人】【期】【许】【的】【风】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【文】【说】【只】【要】【理】【性】【客】【观】【地】【看】【待】【外】【部】【事】【物】【,】【而】【在】【审】【视】【自】【我】【的】【时】【候】【,】【就】【会】【陷】【入】【情】【感】【的】【迷】【雾】【,】【有】【这】【么】【灵】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【五】【、】【不】【伦】【不】【类】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【意】【识】【对】【客】【观】【世】【界】【具】【有】【反】【作】【用】【,】【正】【确】【的】【意】【识】【对】【实】【践】【具】【有】【指】【导】【作】【用】【。】【错】【误】【的】【思】【想】【意】【识】【将】【对】【实】【践】【起】【阻】【碍】【作】【用】【。】【人】【文】【素】【养】【的】【普】【遍】【低】【下】【,】【素】【质】【的】【低】【下】【,】【错】【误】【的】【价】【值】【观】【和】【人】【生】【观】【都】【会】【制】【约】【物】【质】【文】【明】【的】【发】【展】【,】【对】【物】【质】【世】【界】【的】【进】【步】【具】【有】【消】【极】【作】【用】【。】【也】【就】【是】【物】【质】【文】【明】【发】【展】【决】【定】【精】【神】【文】【明】【的】【建】【设】【,】【精】【神】【文】【明】【的】【发】【展】【反】【过】【来】【作】【用】【于】【物】【质】【文】【明】【的】【建】【设】【,】【两】【者】【之】【间】【是】【始】【终】【联】【系】【着】【的】【,】【是】【不】【可】【分】【割】【的】【。】【如】【果】【人】【生】【是】【船】【,】【那】【么】【人】【文】【素】【养】【是】【帆】【。】【如】【果】【帆】【偏】【离】【了】【或】【者】【倒】【下】【了】【,】【那】【么】【人】【生】【之】【船】【也】【将】【颠】【覆】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【嘿】【嘿】【!】【作】【文】【题】【怎】【么】【看】【也】【不】【像】【政】【治】【、】【历】【史】【题】【吧】【,】【但】【为】【什】【么】【又】【会】【有】【这】【么】【多】【同】【学】【简】【单】【地】【搬】【出】【一】【条】【条】【的】【哲】【理】【来】【,】【像】【答】【政】【治】【题】【一】【样】【。】【拿】【这】【些】【不】【属】【于】【我】【们】【语】【文】【的】【‘】【术】【语】【’】【来】【作】【文】【,】【那】【我】【们】【只】【能】【把】【它】【当】【做】【政】【治】【题】【来】【处】【理】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【六】【、】【语】【言】【幼】【稚】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【太】【阳】【公】【公】【出】【来】【了】【,】【小】【鸟】【也】【在】【天】【空】【上】【叽】【叽】【喳】【喳】【地】【歌】【唱】【着】【,】【小】【草】【随】【风】【挥】【动】【着】【她】【娇】【嫩】【的】【身】【子】【,】【啊】【,】【又】【是】【一】【个】【好】【晴】【天】【,】【处】【处】【好】【风】【光】【。】【这】【时】【,】【雷】【锋】【叔】【叔】【也】【开】【始】【了】【他】【一】【天】【的】【工】【作】【了】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【知】【道】【的】【,】【还】【真】【以】【为】【自】【己】【改】【的】【是】【小】【学】【生】【的】【作】【文】【呢】【,】【大】【家】【要】【记】【住】【:】【一】【个】【初】【中】【毕】【业】【生】【,】【应】【该】【对】【社】【会】【、】【对】【人】【生】【有】【比】【较】【深】【刻】【的】【理】【性】【思】【考】【,】【如】【果】【只】【是】【简】【单】【的】【语】【言】【累】【加】【与】【例】【子】【的】【累】【加】【,】【那】【么】【作】【文】【的】【语】【言】【便】【没】【有】【灵】【性】【之】【光】【,】【更】【缺】【乏】【动】【人】【之】【美】【感】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【七】【、】【语】【体】【不】【合】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【哇】【塞】【,】【好】【一】【个】【人】【文】【素】【养】【的】【M】【M】【,】【如】【果】【人】【人】【像】【她】【这】【样】【,】【那】【人】【将】【不】【8】【8】【,】【国】【将】【不】【8】【8】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【M】【M】【”】【、】【“】【8】【8】【”】【应】【该】【是】【从】【网】【络】【语】【言】【来】【的】【,】【但】【对】【作】【文】【来】【说】【这】【是】【属】【于】【用】【语】【不】【规】【范】【哦】【,】【应】【该】【扣】【分】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【八】【、】【华】【而】【不】【实】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【昙】【花】【没】【有】【在】【白】【天】【与】【娇】【艳】【的】【鲜】【花】【比】【美】【,】【它】【没】【有】【把】【自】【己】【的】【美】【丽】【与】【众】【花】【炫】【耀】【,】【它】【开】【在】【深】【夜】【人】【静】【时】【,】【谦】【卑】【而】【沉】【默】【地】【为】【人】【们】【驱】【走】【心】【中】【的】【寂】【寞】【;】【青】【蛙】【没】【有】【在】【寒】【风】【刺】【骨】【的】【冬】【天】【钻】【露】【头】【脚】【,】【卖】【弄】【自】【己】【的】【傲】【慢】【,】【它】【把】【自】【己】【藏】【在】【土】【壤】【里】【,】【默】【默】【地】【为】【春】【天】【贮】【藏】【一】【份】【春】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【昙】【花】【晚】【上】【开】【这】【就】【说】【它】【是】【谦】【卑】【了】【,】【这】【好】【像】【是】【它】【的】【‘】【天】【性】【’】【哦】【,】【青】【蛙】【怎】【么】【也】【不】【会】【在】【寒】【冬】【卖】【弄】【它】【的】【傲】【慢】【,】【因】【为】【它】【要】【冬】【眠】【呀】【。】【我】【们】【知】【道】【考】【生】【们】【是】【想】【用】【好】【的】【语】【言】【来】【获】【得】【作】【文】【高】【分】【,】【可】【惜】【的】【是】【这】【种】【华】【而】【不】【实】【、】【刻】【意】【营】【造】【的】【铺】【排】【气】【势】【却】【与】【话】【题】【风】【马】【牛】【不】【相】【及】【,】【甚】【至】【适】【得】【其】【反】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】中共中央书记处书记【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【语】【言】【能】【力】【的】【考】【查】【,】【既】【是】【考】【试】【作】【文】【的】【“】【重】【头】【戏】【”】【,】【同】【时】【也】【是】【考】【生】【拿】【取】【作】【文】【高】【分】【的】【捷】【径】【之】【一】【。】【在】【此】【,】【笔】【者】【就】【历】【年】【中】【考】【作】【文】【中】【语】【言】【表】【述】【弊】【病】【做】【一】【个】【简】【单】【的】【归】【类】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【滥】【用】【名】【句】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【纪】【念】【的】【帆】【船】【回】【到】【港】【湾】【。】【童】【年】【,】【我】【只】【能】【读】【懂】【“】【锄】【禾】【日】【当】【午】【,】【汗】【滴】【禾】【下】【土】【”】【的】【辛】【劳】【,】【“】【小】【荷】【才】【露】【尖】【尖】【角】【,】【早】【有】【蜻】【蜓】【立】【上】【头】【”】【的】【稚】【趣】【,】【想】【象】【得】【到】【“】【横】【看】【成】【岭】【侧】【成】【峰】【,】【远】【近】【高】【低】【各】【不】【同】【”】【的】【奇】【峰】【,】【“】【不】【知】【细】【叶】【谁】【裁】【出】【,】【二】【月】【春】【风】【似】【剪】【刀】【”】【的】【细】【柳】【,】【心】【中】【存】【在】【的】【,】【都】【是】【一】【些】【感】【性】【的】【图】【像】【,】【每】【天】【以】【一】【颗】【纯】【洁】【的】【心】【去】【品】【味】【唐】【诗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【表】【面】【看】【来】【,】【以】【上】【的】【语】【句】【“】【引】【经】【据】【典】【”】【,】【且】【词】【语】【生】【动】【,】【句】【式】【灵】【活】【,】【应】【该】【是】【一】【段】【令】【人】【细】【嚼】【品】【味】【的】【优】【美】【语】【言】【,】【但】【认】【真】【读】【来】【,】【言】【之】【何】【物】【,】【和】【话】【题】【又】【有】【何】【相】【干】【呢】【?】【难】【道】【纪】【念】【的】【帆】【船】【回】【到】【港】【湾】【,】【去】【读】【懂】【所】【指】【的】【‘】【诗】【情】【画】【意】【’】【就】【是】【所】【谓】【的】【纪】【念】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【滥】【用】【修】【辞】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【人】【应】【该】【像】【大】【海】【一】【样】【,】【包】【容】【每】【一】【滴】【水】【,】【不】【论】【其】【污】【浊】【,】【那】【样】【才】【会】【永】【不】【枯】【竭】【,】【非】【常】【辽】【阔】【;】【人】【应】【像】【夜】【空】【一】【样】【,】【包】【容】【每】【一】【颗】【星】【星】【,】【不】【论】【其】【明】【暗】【,】【那】【样】【才】【会】【皎】【洁】【明】【亮】【,】【指】【引】【夜】【行】【者】【;】【人】【应】【像】【高】【山】【一】【样】【,】【包】【容】【每】【一】【块】【石】【头】【,】【不】【论】【其】【大】【小】【,】【那】【样】【才】【能】【高】【大】【无】【穷】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【上】【句】【子】【存】【在】【滥】【用】【比】【喻】【句】【和】【排】【比】【句】【,】【过】【分】【追】【求】【形】【式】【美】【,】【内】【容】【空】【洞】【,】【缺】【乏】【真】【情】【实】【感】【。】【句】【中】【本】【体】【是】【人】【,】【喻】【体】【是】【大】【海】【、】【夜】【空】【、】【高】【山】【,】【相】【似】【点】【是】【包】【容】【。】【但】【对】【喻】【体】【特】【征】【的】【描】【述】【不】【符】【合】【本】【体】【特】【点】【,】【如】【,】【“】【永】【不】【枯】【竭】【,】【非】【常】【辽】【阔】【”】【“】【皎】【洁】【明】【亮】【,】【指】【引】【夜】【行】【者】【”】【不】【是】【人】【的】【特】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【重】【复】【啰】【嗦】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【谦】【卑】【是】【一】【种】【精】【神】【吗】【?】【我】【想】【不】【是】【;】【谦】【卑】【是】【一】【种】【品】【格】【吗】【?】【我】【想】【也】【不】【是】【;】【谦】【卑】【又】【是】【一】【种】【礼】【仪】【吗】【?】【我】【想】【也】【应】【该】【不】【是】【。】【谦】【卑】【究】【竟】【是】【什】【么】【的】【一】【样】【东】【西】【呢】【?】【欲】【知】【它】【是】【什】【么】【?】【请】【看】【下】【面】【分】【解】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【得】【了】【,】【得】【了】【,】【你】【就】【直】【接】【说】【出】【谦】【卑】【到】【底】【是】【什】【么】【就】【得】【了】【,】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【都】【被】【‘】【侃】【’】【晕】【了】【,】【还】【能】【给】【你】【高】【分】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【过】【于】【绝】【对】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【们】【能】【够】【理】【性】【客】【观】【地】【看】【待】【外】【部】【事】【物】【,】【而】【在】【审】【视】【自】【我】【的】【时】【候】【,】【就】【会】【陷】【入】【情】【感】【的】【迷】【雾】【,】【摇】【曳】【在】【社】【会】【导】【向】【与】【他】【人】【期】【许】【的】【风】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【文】【说】【只】【要】【理】【性】【客】【观】【地】【看】【待】【外】【部】【事】【物】【,】【而】【在】【审】【视】【自】【我】【的】【时】【候】【,】【就】【会】【陷】【入】【情】【感】【的】【迷】【雾】【,】【有】【这】【么】【灵】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【五】【、】【不】【伦】【不】【类】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【意】【识】【对】【客】【观】【世】【界】【具】【有】【反】【作】【用】【,】【正】【确】【的】【意】【识】【对】【实】【践】【具】【有】【指】【导】【作】【用】【。】【错】【误】【的】【思】【想】【意】【识】【将】【对】【实】【践】【起】【阻】【碍】【作】【用】【。】【人】【文】【素】【养】【的】【普】【遍】【低】【下】【,】【素】【质】【的】【低】【下】【,】【错】【误】【的】【价】【值】【观】【和】【人】【生】【观】【都】【会】【制】【约】【物】【质】【文】【明】【的】【发】【展】【,】【对】【物】【质】【世】【界】【的】【进】【步】【具】【有】【消】【极】【作】【用】【。】【也】【就】【是】【物】【质】【文】【明】【发】【展】【决】【定】【精】【神】【文】【明】【的】【建】【设】【,】【精】【神】【文】【明】【的】【发】【展】【反】【过】【来】【作】【用】【于】【物】【质】【文】【明】【的】【建】【设】【,】【两】【者】【之】【间】【是】【始】【终】【联】【系】【着】【的】【,】【是】【不】【可】【分】【割】【的】【。】【如】【果】【人】【生】【是】【船】【,】【那】【么】【人】【文】【素】【养】【是】【帆】【。】【如】【果】【帆】【偏】【离】【了】【或】【者】【倒】【下】【了】【,】【那】【么】【人】【生】【之】【船】【也】【将】【颠】【覆】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【嘿】【嘿】【!】【作】【文】【题】【怎】【么】【看】【也】【不】【像】【政】【治】【、】【历】【史】【题】【吧】【,】【但】【为】【什】【么】【又】【会】【有】【这】【么】【多】【同】【学】【简】【单】【地】【搬】【出】【一】【条】【条】【的】【哲】【理】【来】【,】【像】【答】【政】【治】【题】【一】【样】【。】【拿】【这】【些】【不】【属】【于】【我】【们】【语】【文】【的】【‘】【术】【语】【’】【来】【作】【文】【,】【那】【我】【们】【只】【能】【把】【它】【当】【做】【政】【治】【题】【来】【处】【理】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【六】【、】【语】【言】【幼】【稚】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【太】【阳】【公】【公】【出】【来】【了】【,】【小】【鸟】【也】【在】【天】【空】【上】【叽】【叽】【喳】【喳】【地】【歌】【唱】【着】【,】【小】【草】【随】【风】【挥】【动】【着】【她】【娇】【嫩】【的】【身】【子】【,】【啊】【,】【又】【是】【一】【个】【好】【晴】【天】【,】【处】【处】【好】【风】【光】【。】【这】【时】【,】【雷】【锋】【叔】【叔】【也】【开】【始】【了】【他】【一】【天】【的】【工】【作】【了】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【知】【道】【的】【,】【还】【真】【以】【为】【自】【己】【改】【的】【是】【小】【学】【生】【的】【作】【文】【呢】【,】【大】【家】【要】【记】【住】【:】【一】【个】【初】【中】【毕】【业】【生】【,】【应】【该】【对】【社】【会】【、】【对】【人】【生】【有】【比】【较】【深】【刻】【的】【理】【性】【思】【考】【,】【如】【果】【只】【是】【简】【单】【的】【语】【言】【累】【加】【与】【例】【子】【的】【累】【加】【,】【那】【么】【作】【文】【的】【语】【言】【便】【没】【有】【灵】【性】【之】【光】【,】【更】【缺】【乏】【动】【人】【之】【美】【感】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【七】【、】【语】【体】【不】【合】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【哇】【塞】【,】【好】【一】【个】【人】【文】【素】【养】【的】【M】【M】【,】【如】【果】【人】【人】【像】【她】【这】【样】【,】【那】【人】【将】【不】【8】【8】【,】【国】【将】【不】【8】【8】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【M】【M】【”】【、】【“】【8】【8】【”】【应】【该】【是】【从】【网】【络】【语】【言】【来】【的】【,】【但】【对】【作】【文】【来】【说】【这】【是】【属】【于】【用】【语】【不】【规】【范】【哦】【,】【应】【该】【扣】【分】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【八】【、】【华】【而】【不】【实】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【昙】【花】【没】【有】【在】【白】【天】【与】【娇】【艳】【的】【鲜】【花】【比】【美】【,】【它】【没】【有】【把】【自】【己】【的】【美】【丽】【与】【众】【花】【炫】【耀】【,】【它】【开】【在】【深】【夜】【人】【静】【时】【,】【谦】【卑】【而】【沉】【默】【地】【为】【人】【们】【驱】【走】【心】【中】【的】【寂】【寞】【;】【青】【蛙】【没】【有】【在】【寒】【风】【刺】【骨】【的】【冬】【天】【钻】【露】【头】【脚】【,】【卖】【弄】【自】【己】【的】【傲】【慢】【,】【它】【把】【自】【己】【藏】【在】【土】【壤】【里】【,】【默】【默】【地】【为】【春】【天】【贮】【藏】【一】【份】【春】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【昙】【花】【晚】【上】【开】【这】【就】【说】【它】【是】【谦】【卑】【了】【,】【这】【好】【像】【是】【它】【的】【‘】【天】【性】【’】【哦】【,】【青】【蛙】【怎】【么】【也】【不】【会】【在】【寒】【冬】【卖】【弄】【它】【的】【傲】【慢】【,】【因】【为】【它】【要】【冬】【眠】【呀】【。】【我】【们】【知】【道】【考】【生】【们】【是】【想】【用】【好】【的】【语】【言】【来】【获】【得】【作】【文】【高】【分】【,】【可】【惜】【的】【是】【这】【种】【华】【而】【不】【实】【、】【刻】【意】【营】【造】【的】【铺】【排】【气】【势】【却】【与】【话】【题】【风】【马】【牛】【不】【相】【及】【,】【甚】【至】【适】【得】【其】【反】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【本】【是】【袋】【中】【白】【米】【一】【粒】【,】【今】【天】【主】【人】【却】【把】【我】【带】【出】【来】【要】【给】【加】【压】【力】【!】【看】【着】【漂】【亮】【的】【主】【人】【欣】【然】【将】【我】【放】【在】【黑】【乎】【乎】【的】【爆】【米】【机】【旁】【,】【看】【着】【这】【铁】【制】【的】【家】【伙】【,】【再】【瞧】【瞧】【那】【红】【红】【的】【炭】【火】【,】【我】【心】【颤】【抖】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【考】【试】【啦】【!】【考】【试】【啦】【!】【”】【晚】【自】【习】【上】【我】【大】【呼】【狂】【叫】【。】【可】【谁】【不】【知】【道】【明】【天】【就】【考】【试】【呀】【!】【同】【学】【们】【都】【不】【予】【理】【睬】【。】【就】【像】【孙】【悟】【空】【负】【山】【前】【行】【似】【的】【,】【疲】【惫】【的】【我】【生】【怕】【自】【己】【倒】【下】【,】【我】【仍】【不】【停】【地】【说】【着】【话】【,】【好】【像】【只】【有】【这】【样】【,】【我】【的】【血】【液】【方】【能】【流】【淌】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【突】【然】【,】【“】【嘭】【”】【的】【一】【声】【,】【吓】【得】【我】【心】【惊】【胆】【战】【,】【随】【之】【一】【阵】【白】【烟】【扩】【散】【开】【来】【,】【许】【多】【小】【朋】【友】【蜂】【拥】【上】【前】【…】【…】【而】【我】【呢】【,】【则】【与】【其】【他】【伙】【伴】【被】【小】【主】【人】【毫】【不】【留】【情】【地】【一】【股】【脑】【倒】【进】【了】【大】【黑】【炉】【里】【。】【随】【之】【,】【啪】【!】【一】【声】【脆】【响】【。】【果】【然】【不】【出】【我】【所】【料】【:】【黑】【炉】【子】【给】【了】【我】【黑】【色】【的】【眼】【睛】【!】【同】【伴】【们】【也】【如】【此】【,】【迷】【惘】【又】【迷】【惘】【,】【谁】【知】【道】【一】【会】【儿】【又】【将】【怎】【样】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【站】【在】【窗】【前】【,】【我】【翘】【首】【观】【望】【,】【原】【来】【应】【是】【繁】【星】【点】【点】【、】【银】【河】【横】【天】【的】【迷】【人】【星】【空】【,】【却】【被】【这】【繁】【华】【的】【城】【市】【灯】【火】【照】【得】【模】【糊】【。】【教】【学】【楼】【则】【灯】【火】【通】【明】【,】【驱】【散】【了】【校】【园】【的】【黑】【暗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【在】【炽】【热】【的】【黑】【炉】【里】【滚】【来】【滚】【去】【,】【这】【刻】【不】【知】【下】【刻】【的】【命】【,】【真】【是】【要】【多】【难】【受】【有】【多】【难】【受】【。】【再】【加】【上】【干】【渴】【难】【耐】【,】【我】【的】【身】【体】【渐】【渐】【膨】【胀】【,】【兄】【弟】【们】【也】【是】【如】【此】【,】【我】【们】【的】【空】【间】【急】【剧】【紧】【缩】【,】【大】【家】【难】【以】【呼】【吸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夜】【晚】【,】【我】【坐】【在】【桌】【前】【,】【回】【想】【白】【天】【老】【师】【说】【过】【的】【话】【:】【“】【这】【次】【考】【试】【一】【定】【十】【分】【严】【格】【,】【过】【后】【我】【会】【把】【你】【们】【的】【各】【科】【成】【绩】【都】【排】【出】【来】【开】【家】【长】【会】【。】【”】【怎】【么】【办】【呢】【?】【我】【的】【思】【绪】【开】【始】【飞】【扬】【—】【—】【假】【若】【有】【一】【双】【天】【使】【的】【翅】【膀】【,】【假】【若】【能】【有】【“】【桃】【花】【源】【”】【,】【假】【若】【永】【远】【不】【再】【考】【试】【,】【假】【若】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【难】【兄】【难】【弟】【们】【,】【我】【们】【生】【在】【这】【个】【时】【代】【真】【是】【不】【幸】【啊】【!】【想】【我】【们】【的】【祖】【辈】【,】【他】【们】【多】【么】【幸】【福】【啊】【!】【”】【我】【们】【的】【大】【哥】【压】【着】【嗓】【子】【说】【。】【“】【就】【是】【。】【”】【我】【也】【附】【和】【着】【:】【“】【人】【们】【都】【说】【世】【界】【在】【进】【步】【,】【难】【道】【真】【的】【在】【进】【步】【吗】【?】【若】【进】【步】【干】【吗】【还】【让】【我】【们】【受】【这】【份】【罪】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【天】【,】【我】【静】【静】【地】【来】【到】【考】【场】【,】【慢】【慢】【地】【坐】【在】【坐】【位】【上】【,】【等】【待】【着】【,】【默】【默】【无】【言】【地】【等】【待】【着】【。】【整】【齐】【的】【桌】【椅】【也】【静】【静】【的】【,】【给】【人】【以】【庄】【严】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【沉】【默】【啊】【,】【沉】【默】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【火】【热】【的】【感】【觉】【渐】【渐】【地】【缓】【了】【下】【来】【,】【“】【嘭】【”】【!】【炉】【盖】【打】【开】【了】【,】【随】【之】【,】【我】【们】【被】【一】【股】【强】【大】【的】【热】【气】【冲】【到】【了】【袋】【子】【里】【。】【紧】【接】【着】【,】【光】【明】【来】【了】【!】【一】【群】【小】【朋】【友】【又】【蜂】【拥】【而】【上】【,】【将】【我】【和】【同】【伴】【们】【抓】【起】【。】【我】【们】【互】【相】【瞅】【瞅】【,】【咦】【?】【我】【们】【怎】【么】【变】【得】【如】【此】【美】【丽】【了】【呢】【?】【为】【什】【么】【我】【在】【稻】【田】【里】【长】【不】【成】【这】【样】【子】【?】【一】【个】【小】【朋】【友】【捏】【起】【我】【一】【闻】【:】【“】【真】【香】【啊】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【噢】【,】【我】【明】【白】【了】【,】【如】【果】【没】【有】【压】【力】【,】【我】【是】【不】【会】【开】【花】【的】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【创】【意】【美】【文】【拍】【案】【惊】【,】【精】【心】【想】【象】【构】【思】【奇】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【—】【—】【压】【力】【锅】【中】【的】【一】【粒】【米】【,】【在】【压】【力】【下】【获】【得】【新】【生】【。】【暗】【合】【“】【现】【实】【中】【的】【我】【”】【由】【在】【考】【试】【前】【夕】【心】【理】【焦】【躁】【不】【安】【到】【开】【出】【灿】【烂】【爆】【米】【花】【的】【逐】【渐】【成】【熟】【过】【程】【。】【双】【线】【并】【进】【,】【相】【互】【辉】【映】【、】【相】【辅】【相】【成】【,】【相】【得】【益】【彰】【。】【两】【条】【线】【索】【交】【织】【于】【“】【如】【果】【没】【有】【压】【力】【,】【我】【是】【不】【会】【开】【花】【的】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【新】【颖】【别】【致】【的】【构】【思】【是】【本】【文】【的】【主】【要】【特】【色】【。】【作】【者】【借】【助】【丰】【富】【的】【想】【象】【—】【我】【—】【压】【力】【锅】【—】【爆】【米】【花】【这】【些】【现】【实】【中】【的】【事】【物】【,】【精】【心】【构】【思】【,】【水】【到】【渠】【成】【地】【表】【达】【了】【“】【人】【的】【一】【生】【只】【有】【适】【当】【加】【压】【,】【方】【能】【辉】【煌】【”】【的】【主】【题】【。】【文】【章】【语】【言】【精】【练】【,】【虽】【然】【是】【在】【两】【个】【情】【节】【中】【穿】【插】【,】【但】【是】【丝】【毫】【没】【有】【累】【赘】【冗】【长】【之】【感】【。】【(】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【赵】【同】【宇】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【编】【辑】【提】【示】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【们】【,】【我】【们】【在】【整】【理】【编】【辑】【大】【家】【的】【稿】【件】【时】【,】【发】【现】【有】【的】【同】【学】【文】【章】【里】【存】【在】【书】【面】【语】【和】【口】【语】【混】【用】【的】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【需】【要】【什】【么】【?】【是】【金】【钱】【?】【是】【地】【位】【?】【是】【荣】【耀】【?】【不】【,】【它】【们】【都】【不】【重】【要】【,】【我】【认】【为】【生】【活】【需】【要】【的】【是】【理】【智】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【周】【幽】【王】【为】【博】【爱】【妃】【褒】【姒】【一】【笑】【,】【烽】【火】【戏】【诸】【侯】【,】【那】【三】【百】【里】【的】【烽】【火】【虽】【映】【出】【了】【美】【人】【与】【天】【子】【片】【刻】【开】【心】【妩】【媚】【的】【欢】【颜】【,】【却】【燃】【起】【了】【诸】【侯】【窝】【心】【之】【火】【,】【于】【是】【,】【犬】【戎】【挥】【师】【入】【侵】【,】【诸】【侯】【反】【戈】【不】【臣】【,】【葬】【送】【了】【周】【朝】【的】【大】【好】【江】【山】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【唐】【玄】【宗】【为】【了】【赢】【得】【“】【回】【眸】【一】【笑】【百】【媚】【生】【”】【的】【杨】【贵】【妃】【的】【芳】【心】【,】【“】【三】【千】【宠】【爱】【在】【一】【身】【”】【,】【于】【是】【,】【“】【从】【此】【君】【王】【不】【早】【朝】【”】【,】【便】【有】【杨】【国】【忠】【之】【辈】【权】【倾】【朝】【野】【,】【安】【禄】【山】【之】【流】【犯】【上】【作】【乱】【,】【酿】【成】【“】【安】【史】【之】【乱】【”】【,】【唐】【王】【朝】【由】【盛】【转】【衰】【,】【一】【蹶】【不】【振】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【吴】【三】【桂】【为】【了】【爱】【妾】【陈】【圆】【圆】【一】【人】【的】【生】【死】【,】【“】【冲】【冠】【一】【怒】【为】【红】【颜】【”】【,】【放】【清】【军】【入】【关】【,】【并】【甘】【为】【先】【驱】【,】【赶】【李】【闯】【王】【出】【京】【并】【使】【其】【陷】【于】【毁】【灭】【,】【使】【满】【人】【入】【主】【中】【原】【数】【百】【年】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【好】【糊】【涂】【的】【周】【幽】【王】【啊】【!】【国】【家】【大】【事】【,】【当】【做】【儿】【戏】【。】【你】【难】【道】【不】【知】【戏】【弄】【诸】【侯】【的】【严】【重】【后】【果】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【好】【糊】【涂】【的】【唐】【玄】【宗】【啊】【!】【沉】【溺】【美】【色】【,】【不】【理】【朝】【政】【。】【你】【难】【道】【不】【知】【外】【戚】【专】【权】【终】【会】【酿】【成】【大】【祸】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【好】【糊】【涂】【的】【吴】【三】【桂】【啊】【!】【为】【了】【一】【人】【,】【宁】【舍】【一】【国】【。】【你】【难】【道】【不】【知】【当】【汉】【奸】【会】【落】【得】【千】【古】【骂】【名】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【说】【生】【活】【是】【一】【本】【书】【,】【记】【载】【着】【人】【世】【间】【的】【点】【点】【滴】【滴】【,】【那】【么】【历】【史】【就】【是】【一】【面】【镜】【子】【,】【折】【射】【出】【的】【是】【对】【错】【与】【是】【非】【。】【生】【活】【中】【越】【理】【智】【,】【铸】【成】【的】【历】【史】【错】【误】【就】【会】【越】【少】【或】【越】【小】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【改】【革】【开】【放】【以】【来】【,】【人】【们】【的】【思】【想】【解】【放】【了】【,】【尤】【其】【是】【现】【在】【的】【学】【生】【,】【在】【思】【想】【上】【更】【加】【活】【跃】【了】【。】【但】【是】【我】【们】【要】【牢】【记】【,】【遇】【事】【理】【智】【,】【做】【事】【理】【智】【。】【近】【年】【来】【,】【青】【少】【年】【和】【未】【成】【年】【人】【犯】【罪】【呈】【逐】【年】【上】【升】【趋】【势】【,】【那】【么】【作】【为】【正】【在】【成】【长】【中】【的】【中】【学】【生】【,】【更】【要】【理】【智】【地】【生】【活】【、】【学】【习】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【现】【代】【化】【建】【设】【的】【生】【活】【中】【,】【要】【求】【人】【们】【的】【思】【想】【和】【言】【行】【都】【必】【须】【在】【正】【常】【的】【轨】【道】【上】【运】【行】【,】【不】【管】【遇】【到】【什】【么】【样】【的】【事】【,】【无】【论】【在】【什】【么】【情】【况】【下】【,】【无】【论】【面】【对】【什】【么】【样】【的】【人】【,】【都】【要】【三】【思】【而】【后】【行】【,】【让】【理】【智】【为】【我】【们】【撑】【起】【一】【片】【蔚】【蓝】【的】【天】【空】【。】【要】【用】【我】【们】【的】【理】【智】【来】【掌】【控】【我】【们】【的】【思】【想】【意】【识】【、】【个】【性】【心】【理】【和】【言】【语】【行】【为】【,】【不】【作】【非】【分】【之】【想】【,】【不】【说】【过】【分】【的】【话】【,】【不】【做】【出】【格】【的】【事】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【理】【智】【,】【代】【表】【成】【熟】【,】【代】【表】【稳】【健】【;】【理】【智】【,】【更】【是】【一】【种】【情】【操】【,】【一】【种】【道】【德】【。】【只】【有】【理】【智】【,】【社】【会】【才】【能】【和】【谐】【,】【也】【只】【有】【理】【智】【,】【才】【有】【健】【康】【的】【人】【生】【和】【正】【常】【的】【社】【会】【生】【活】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【们】【,】【生】【活】【需】【要】【理】【智】【,】【请】【勿】【将】【其】【抛】【于】【脑】【后】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【为】【支】【持】【文】【章】【观】【点】【,】【作】【者】【的】【思】【想】【跨】【越】【古】【今】【,】【以】【历】【史】【鉴】【当】【今】【,】【以】【现】【实】【作】【论】【据】【,】【思】【考】【社】【会】【,】【品】【评】【人】【生】【,】【强】【调】【理】【智】【代】【表】【成】【熟】【、】【稳】【健】【,】【理】【智】【是】【情】【操】【道】【德】【,】【理】【智】【会】【带】【来】【和】【谐】【安】【宁】【,】【认】【为】【唯】【有】【理】【智】【,】【才】【有】【健】【康】【的】【人】【生】【和】【正】【常】【的】【社】【会】【生】【活】【秩】【序】【,】【显】【现】【出】【了】【一】【定】【的】【思】【想】【高】【度】【。】【这】【是】【值】【得】【肯】【定】【的】【地】【方】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【白】【彩】【明】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】中共中央书记处书记【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【欣】【赏】【数】【字】【,】【猛】【然】【间】【,】【发】【现】【语】【文】【之】【美】【…】【…】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【①】【“】【1】【”】【是】【一】【根】【擎】【天】【柱】【,】【是】【正】【直】【是】【不】【屈】【不】【挠】【的】【骨】【气】【。】【于】【是】【,】【我】【们】【有】【了】【“】【人】【生】【自】【古】【谁】【无】【死】【,】【留】【取】【丹】【心】【照】【汗】【青】【的】【凛】【然】【正】【气】【;】【有】【了】【“】【我】【自】【横】【刀】【向】【天】【笑】【去】【留】【肝】【胆】【两】【昆】【仑】【”】【的】【英】【勇】【无】【畏】【;】【有】【了】【“】【有】【心】【杀】【贼】【,】【无】【力】【回】【天】【,】【死】【得】【其】【所】【,】【快】【哉】【快】【哉】【”】【的】【英】【雄】【气】【概】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【“】【2】【”】【是】【一】【只】【美】【丽】【的】【天】【鹅】【,】【体】【现】【出】【无】【可】【挑】【剔】【的】【美】【。】【于】【是】【,】【我】【们】【有】【了】【“】【一】【枝】【红】【杏】【出】【墙】【来】【”】【的】【点】【点】【渲】【染】【;】【有】【了】【“】【知】【否】【,】【知】【否】【,】【应】【是】【绿】【肥】【红】【瘦】【”】【雨】【后】【海】【棠】【的】【美】【艳】【;】【有】【了】【“】【花】【褪】【残】【红】【青】【杏】【小】【,】【燕】【子】【飞】【时】【,】【绿】【水】【人】【家】【绕】【”】【的】【田】【园】【丽】【景】【…】【…】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【“】【3】【”】【是】【一】【只】【耳】【朵】【,】【是】【聆】【听】【。】【聆】【听】【着】【自】【然】【的】【吟】【唱】【,】【聆】【听】【着】【深】【情】【地】【倾】【诉】【于】【是】【,】【我】【们】【有】【了】【“】【稻】【花】【香】【里】【说】【丰】【年】【听】【取】【蛙】【声】【一】【片】【”】【的】【喜】【悦】【情】【怀】【;】【有】【了】【春】【眠】【不】【觉】【晓】【,】【处】【处】【闻】【蹄】【鸟】【”】【的】【天】【籁】【之】【音】【有】【了】【“】【但】【愿】【人】【长】【久】【,】【千】【里】【共】【婵】【娟】【”】【的】【绵】【绵】【私】【语】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【“】【4】【”】【是】【快】【刀】【,】【是】【豪】【放】【。】【于】【是】【我】【们】【有】【了】【“】【会】【挽】【雕】【弓】【如】【满】【月】【,】【西】【北】【望】【射】【天】【狼】【”】【的】【豪】【情】【壮】【志】【;】【有】【了】【“】【安】【得】【广】【厦】【千】【万】【间】【,】【大】【庇】【天】【下】【寒】【士】【俱】【欢】【颜】【”】【的】【豪】【迈】【胸】【襟】【;】【有】【了】【“】【数】【风】【流】【人】【物】【,】【还】【看】【今】【朝】【”】【的】【豪】【言】【壮】【语】【…】【…】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【“】【5】【”】【是】【奔】【跑】【,】【是】【活】【力】【的】【展】【现】【于】【是】【,】【我】【们】【有】【了】【“】【两】【只】【黄】【鹂】【鸣】【翠】【柳】【,】【一】【行】【白】【鹭】【上】【青】【天】【”】【的】【生】【机】【勃】【勃】【;】【有】【了】【“】【几】【处】【早】【莺】【争】【暖】【树】【,】【谁】【家】【新】【燕】【啄】【春】【泥】【”】【的】【春】【意】【浓】【浓】【;】【有】【了】【“】【一】【水】【护】【田】【将】【绿】【绕】【,】【两】【山】【排】【闼】【送】【青】【来】【”】【的】【无】【限】【活】【力】【…】【…】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【“】【8】【”】【是】【两】【颗】【紧】【紧】【相】【连】【的】【心】【,】【是】【深】【情】【厚】【谊】【。】【于】【是】【,】【我】【们】【有】【了】【“】【桃】【花】【潭】【水】【深】【千】【尺】【,】【不】【及】【汪】【伦】【送】【我】【情】【”】【的】【深】【厚】【友】【情】【;】【有】【了】【“】【此】【去】【经】【年】【,】【应】【是】【良】【辰】【好】【景】【虚】【设】【。】【便】【纵】【有】【千】【种】【风】【情】【,】【更】【与】【何】【人】【说】【”】【的】【离】【愁】【别】【绪】【;】【更】【有】【了】【“】【海】【内】【存】【知】【己】【,】【天】【涯】【若】【比】【邻】【”】【的】【浓】【浓】【情】【谊】【…】【…】【1】【1】【“】【9】【”】【是】【气】【球】【,】【是】【自】【由】【,】【是】【旷】【达】【。】【于】【是】【,】【我】【们】【有】【了】【“】【安】【能】【摧】【眉】【折】【腰】【事】【权】【贵】【,】【使】【我】【不】【得】【开】【心】【颜】【”】【的】【不】【媚】【权】【势】【;】【有】【了】【“】【不】【戚】【戚】【于】【贫】【贱】【,】【不】【汲】【汲】【于】【富】【贵】【”】【的】【刚】【正】【不】【阿】【;】【有】【了】【“】【采】【菊】【东】【篱】【下】【,】【悠】【然】【见】【南】【山】【”】【的】【自】【适】【自】【乐】【…】【…】【1】【1】【1】【我】【们】【欣】【赏】【数】【字】【,】【我】【们】【欣】【赏】【语】【文】【,】【我】【们】【欣】【赏】【数】【字】【中】【的】【语】【文】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【简】【评】【:】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【小】【作】【者】【构】【思】【奇】【妙】【,】【读】【题】【目】【顿】【时】【让】【人】【眼】【睛】【一】【亮】【,】【“】【数】【字】【”】【如】【何】【与】【语】【文】【学】【科】【联】【系】【在】【一】【起】【呢】【?】【小】【作】【者】【运】【用】【想】【象】【、】【联】【想】【将】【古】【诗】【文】【与】【数】【字】【联】【系】【起】【来】【,】【足】【见】【小】【作】【者】【的】【文】【化】【底】【蕴】【丰】【厚】【,】【读】【起】【来】【饶】【有】【一】【番】【风】【味】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【题】【中】【“】【语】【文】【”】【这】【一】【概】【念】【用】【得】【不】【当】【,】【下】【面】【的】【文】【章】【中】【写】【的】【只】【是】【由】【数】【字】【想】【到】【了】【其】【形】【似】【的】【事】【物】【和】【诗】【词】【名】【句】【,】【这】【并】【非】【就】【是】【“】【语】【文】【”】【,】【虽】【然】【和】【语】【文】【有】【点】【联】【系】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【把】【“】【1】【”】【说】【成】【是】【擎】【天】【柱】【,】【还】【有】【外】【形】【相】【似】【之】【处】【,】【说】【它】【“】【是】【不】【屈】【不】【挠】【的】【骨】【气】【”】【就】【显】【得】【勉】【强】【了】【。】【由】【此】【再】【联】【想】【到】【“】【有】【心】【杀】【贼】【,】【无】【力】【回】【天】【,】【死】【得】【其】【所】【,】【快】【哉】【快】【哉】【”】【就】【更】【无】【依】【据】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【由】【“】【2】【”】【想】【到】【天】【鹅】【,】【可】【以】【成】【立】【。】【说】【它】【“】【体】【现】【出】【无】【可】【挑】【剔】【的】【美】【”】【,】【有】【点】【夸】【大】【其】【词】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【点】【点】【渲】【染】【”】【不】【通】【,】【“】【渲】【染】【”】【是】【一】【种】【笔】【法】【,】【还】【不】【如】【改】【为】【“】【遐】【想】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【画】【线】【句】【中】【三】【句】【话】【的】【宾】【语】【不】【一】【致】【,】【“】【喜】【悦】【情】【怀】【”】【可】【以】【,】【而】【“】【天】【籁】【之】【音】【”】【“】【绵】【绵】【私】【语】【”】【须】【参】【照】【“】【喜】【悦】【情】【怀】【”】【作】【相】【应】【修】【改】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【把】【“】【快】【刀】【”】【与】【“】【豪】【放】【”】【放】【在】【一】【起】【不】【妥】【,】【两】【者】【之】【间】【缺】【少】【必】【要】【的】【逻】【辑】【联】【系】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【杜】【甫】【的】【诗】【句】【谈】【不】【上】【“】【豪】【迈】【”】【。】【不】【够】【准】【确】【。】【改】【为】【“】【宽】【广】【”】【更】【好】【些】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【“】【5】【”】【是】【活】【力】【的】【展】【现】【,】【似】【难】【以】【成】【立】【。】【如】【果】【这】【种】【说】【法】【能】【够】【成】【立】【,】【那】【么】【哪】【个】【数】【字】【没】【有】【活】【力】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【无】【限】【活】【力】【”】【用】【得】【不】【当】【,】【这】【句】【诗】【是】【用】【拟】【人】【的】【手】【法】【写】【了】【似】【乎】【含】【情】【的】【山】【水】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【8】【”】【更】【像】【是】【链】【条】【中】【的】【一】【节】【。】【说】【它】【是】【两】【颗】【紧】【紧】【相】【连】【的】【心】【,】【难】【以】【得】【到】【认】【同】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【气】【球】【”】【的】【自】【由】【是】【受】【限】【制】【的】【。】【说】【它】【“】【旷】【达】【”】【则】【让】【人】【不】【解】【。】【如】【果】【删】【去】【这】【句】【话】【,】【那】【么】【由】【“】【9】【”】【字】【怎】【么】【也】【想】【不】【到】【下】【面】【三】【个】【句】【子】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【能】【背】【一】【些】【古】【诗】【词】【的】【名】【句】【就】【称】【之】【为】【“】【文】【化】【底】【蕴】【丰】【厚】【”】【显】【然】【不】【够】【妥】【当】【。】【教】【师】【当】【鼓】【励】【学】【生】【,】【但】【在】【评】【语】【中】【不】【可】【说】【过】【头】【的】【话】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【诊】【断】【与】【建】【议】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【如】【指】【导】【老】【师】【在】【评】【语】【中】【所】【指】【出】【的】【,】【本】【文】【“】【运】【用】【想】【象】【、】【联】【想】【将】【古】【诗】【文】【与】【数】【字】【联】【系】【起】【来】【”】【,】【但】【是】【有】【一】【个】【问】【题】【需】【要】【弄】【清】【楚】【,】【那】【就】【是】【想】【象】【、】【联】【想】【凭】【借】【的】【是】【什】【么】【?】【让】【思】【想】【纵】【横】【驰】【骋】【、】【任】【意】【往】【来】【,】【是】【不】【是】【可】【以】【随】【心】【所】【欲】【、】【任】【凭】【主】【观】【意】【志】【而】【为】【?】【回】【答】【肯】【定】【是】【否】【定】【的】【,】【它】【需】【要】【以】【严】【密】【的】【逻】【辑】【思】【维】【为】【基】【础】【,】【以】【事】【物】【之】【间】【的】【隐】【蔽】【的】【内】【在】【联】【系】【为】【线】【索】【。】【把】【两】【样】【本】【没】【有】【联】【系】【的】【事】【物】【联】【系】【在】【一】【起】【,】【需】【找】【到】【它】【们】【之】【间】【的】【共】【同】【点】【、】【相】【似】【点】【。】【否】【则】【,】【想】【象】【和】【联】【想】【就】【不】【能】【成】【立】【,】【不】【说】【它】【是】【胡】【思】【乱】【想】【,】【至】【少】【也】【是】【生】【硬】【、】【牵】【强】【而】【不】【能】【得】【到】【读】【者】【认】【同】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【诗】【人】【艾】【青】【说】【过】【:】【“】【联】【想】【的】【奥】【秘】【是】【概】【括】【。】【”】【这】【句】【话】【怎】【么】【理】【解】【呢】【?】【还】【是】【让】【我】【们】【举】【一】【个】【简】【单】【的】【例】【子】【吧】【。】【请】【看】【下】【面】【这】【句】【话】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【许】【多】【城】【市】【居】【民】【彩】【电】【、】【冰】【箱】【和】【空】【调】【一】【应】【俱】【全】【的】【时】【候】【,】【这】【僻】【远】【的】【小】【山】【村】【才】【开】【始】【有】【了】【城】【里】【人】【淘】【汰】【下】【来】【的】【黑】【白】【电】【视】【机】【,】【这】【真】【是】【“】【人】【间】【四】【月】【芳】【菲】【尽】【,】【山】【寺】【桃】【花】【始】【盛】【开】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【句】【话】【中】【庐】【山】【大】【林】【寺】【的】【桃】【花】【和】【小】【山】【村】【家】【电】【拥】【有】【的】【情】【况】【似】【乎】【是】【风】【马】【牛】【不】【相】【及】【,】【但】【是】【它】【们】【之】【间】【是】【有】【联】【系】【的】【。】【—】【—】【白】【居】【易】【的】【诗】【,】【实】【际】【上】【讲】【的】【是】【由】【于】【海】【拔】【的】【高】【低】【不】【同】【而】【造】【成】【的】【气】【候】【差】【异】【,】【小】【山】【村】【开】【始】【拥】【有】【黑】【白】【电】【视】【机】【的】【事】【是】【由】【于】【地】【域】【因】【素】【而】【造】【成】【的】【城】【乡】【差】【异】【。】【大】【林】【寺】【的】【桃】【花】【晚】【开】【于】【平】【地】【和】【小】【山】【村】【家】【电】【拥】【有】【落】【于】【城】【市】【后】【,】【其】【共】【同】【点】【便】【是】【“】【因】【地】【理】【原】【因】【而】【造】【成】【的】【滞】【后】【现】【象】【”】【。】【这】【一】【概】【括】【就】【是】【联】【想】【的】【基】【础】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【概】【括】【就】【是】【发】【现】【异】【中】【之】【同】【,】【就】【是】【在】【浑】【然】【无】【序】【中】【找】【到】【某】【些】【事】【物】【的】【共】【同】【点】【。】【概】【括】【是】【一】【种】【抽】【象】【的】【逻】【辑】【思】【维】【,】【是】【一】【种】【理】【性】【思】【维】【,】【须】【经】【学】【习】【训】【练】【方】【可】【习】【得】【。】【而】【联】【想】【属】【于】【发】【散】【思】【维】【,】【是】【大】【脑】【的】【一】【种】【自】【然】【属】【性】【,】【连】【儿】【童】【都】【有】【这】【种】【能】【力】【。】【我】【们】【在】【写】【作】【中】【,】【要】【使】【这】【两】【种】【思】【维】【得】【到】【很】【好】【的】【结】【合】【和】【协】【调】【,】【才】【能】【写】【出】【想】【象】【丰】【富】【而】【又】【合】【情】【合】【理】【的】【文】【章】【来】【。】【最】【近】【,】【温】【家】【宝】【爷】【爷】【在】【北】【京】【三】【十】【五】【中】【学】【听】【课】【时】【说】【:】【“】【我】【上】【学】【时】【最】【大】【的】【收】【获】【在】【于】【逻】【辑】【思】【维】【训】【练】【,】【至】【今】【受】【益】【匪】【浅】【。】【”】【而】【我】【们】【现】【在】【的】【写】【作】【课】【对】【学】【生】【逻】【辑】【思】【维】【的】【训】【练】【是】【很】【不】【够】【的】【。】【只】【讲】【联】【想】【、】【想】【象】【而】【不】【讲】【逻】【辑】【思】【维】【是】【跛】【足】【的】【思】【维】【训】【练】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【应】【该】【说】【,】【本】【文】【的】【联】【想】【较】【多】【但】【理】【性】【不】【足】【。】【但】【对】【于】【一】【名】【初】【中】【学】【生】【来】【说】【,】【这】【样】【的】【毛】【病】【也】【属】【难】【免】【。】【以】【后】【写】【文】【章】【时】【要】【注】【意】【学】【会】【挑】【剔】【自】【己】【,】【看】【看】【是】【不】【是】【做】【到】【了】【天】【衣】【无】【缝】【、】【巧】【妙】【自】【然】【。】【一】【般】【来】【说】【,】【产】【生】【了】【一】【个】【想】【法】【,】【不】【要】【马】【上】【就】【尽】【朝】【一】【个】【方】【向】【去】【想】【,】【好】【像】【很】【顺】【利】【,】【思】【路】【一】【下】【子】【打】【开】【了】【,】【其】【实】【再】【反】【复】【考】【虑】【一】【下】【,】【就】【会】【发】【现】【其】【中】【还】【有】【漏】【洞】【,】【还】【有】【不】【够】【严】【密】【的】【地】【方】【。】【写】【文】【章】【就】【是】【一】【个】【不】【断】【肯】【定】【和】【否】【定】【的】【过】【程】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【全】【文】【列】【举】【了】【九】【个】【数】【字】【,】【其】【中】【说】【“】【2】【”】【像】【一】【只】【美】【丽】【的】【天】【鹅】【,】【这】【就】【写】【得】【比】【较】【好】【,】【确】【实】【很】【像】【,】【但】【是】【,】【再】【由】【这】【个】【“】【2】【”】【想】【到】【“】【一】【枝】【红】【杏】【出】【墙】【来】【”】【,】【想】【到】【“】【知】【否】【,】【知】【否】【,】【应】【是】【绿】【肥】【红】【瘦】【”】【,】【想】【到】【“】【花】【褪】【残】【红】【青】【杏】【小】【,】【燕】【子】【飞】【时】【,】【绿】【水】【人】【家】【绕】【”】【,】【就】【显】【得】【突】【兀】【了】【。】【这】【一】【想】【象】【的】【跨】【度】【太】【大】【。】【也】【许】【一】【般】【人】【都】【没】【有】【这】【样】【的】【联】【想】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【讲】【了】【此】【文】【的】【种】【种】【不】【是】【,】【但】【有】【一】【点】【还】【应】【肯】【定】【,】【那】【就】【是】【作】【为】【一】【名】【初】【二】【学】【生】【,】【能】【熟】【记】【许】【多】【诗】【词】【名】【句】【,】【思】【维】【又】【很】【活】【跃】【,】【应】【该】【还】【是】【很】【可】【贵】【的】【。】

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